The Wait: A ShraMan SS (Epilogue pg.13)COMPLETED - Page 7

Originally posted by: Vyshnav

Its amazing👏

please write theEpilouge!

Originally posted by: Sunain

Ressi res
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Unres

Anuu...my love...tonz of 🤗 n roses for u dear..u nailed it!!!
was [I]"BEAUTIFULLY PENNED"]
Loved it to core.
Both Shraman's POV's were fantastic.
the way u narrated their predicament their emotions...outstanding

Shravan saw his princess for the first time in thoz 5 years n was totally spellbound..
his happiness had no boundries just like of his family's aftet seeing him..most emotional part.
Shravan cudnt believe his eyes..he was actually seeing his daughter his princess n all he cud get by her antics was tht she was a complete blended mixture of both of thm(shraman)
The way he admired her was lovely..
Shriya herself was elated seeing his dad..

Pushkar n Shriya infact everyone was suspicious bout his entry..lol n only the first two knew the truth..😆
Pushkar n his never ending teasing.

Suman used to cru while telling Shriya his stories.. 😭 😭
Shravan apologyised to her for not being there for her in her life's most imp phase..how genuine..
N Sumo understands n loves him to core..thy fct made me grin like an idiot..both r just apt for eachothet..wakai banne hain [I]Ek Duje Ke Vaaste[I]
really loved their room convo..was really heart touching..
Infact the whole upii touched my heart.
Really loved the ending..was damn cute sweet n simple😊

All in all the update was spectecular without any dout
Loved it to core

N wht a silly que u asked...obviously we need an epilogue...i don't knw bout others bur me ko tu for sure chahiyay aur woh bhi lamba wala..n with some cute shraman moments..n thts final!!

N no need to thank me..i was literally vry pleased helping u.
love yaa dear🤗...tighto wala bear hug just for u😳

PS:i m unressing or u can say editing my post for the third time..so plz pardon.me if i missed anything..yar my phone is being such an as****le..n oper say wifi bhi ahhh..so plz ignore if there r any typos..i hope kay ab ki bar post ho gaay..

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Beautiful yaar it was so emotional... Shraman's r meeting after 5 years & Shravan seeing his princess of the 1st time as he doesn't know wherther it Samar or Shriya... He was speechless after taking his daughter in his arms & thanking Sumo for best gift of his life he got... 🤪

Shriya baby she so cute her concern for her papa.. aapko lagi to nehin na.. Aap bilkul akdu nehin hai... 🥳

Pushkar as always teasing Shraman... Kya bhaiya Sumo ko impress karne ke liye kidki se... Oh bhaiya desperate ha... Bhabi se ek pal ke liye bhi door raha nehin ja raha... 🤣

Aap fir hamein chodkar nehin jayenge na so finally Shravan is not leaving them again & Sumo & Shriya's wait is over...

Liked it...

Keep writing

Yes please write epilogue

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

wait... wait... you made my eyes moist ... loved this wait ... awww sweet ... hot chocolate in winters ... keep writing many more like this ... stay blessed ... 😊👏

Shine like ⭐️

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Hayyoo rabba ki update kri tussi. ...dil khush kr ditta ❤️

He he...though i am not a Punjabi but those ppl are very cute so...

But this was too too gud and i am so sad ki story khatam ho gyi😭

But u wrote it sooo beautifully...

And pls pls write the epilogue...10100 request from me😛😆

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Sunain...🤗a very very tight bear hug just for u too...😳n thanku for those roses...mera dil aur ghar dono garden garden ho gaye...😆

Glad u liked it...😊

n u hav to take the thanku...ur help was literally needed..otherwise mere dimag me ideas messed up ho gaye the...

.Glad u like Sumo's POV...was a lill tensed abt taht...

.n abt epilogue i'll let u kno later..

.aur thank u for unressing jaldi se n lamba wala comment..😳

Ur comment always makes me smile...

Thanks once again..n i luv u bae😳❤️

Originally posted by: Sunain

arey ghar bhi garden ho gaya...tumhari mumma dantaeingi tu nhi...🤣

n Sumo's POV was really beautifully penned!!😉

n bout unressing u r soo rite..m such a late lateef..sumtimes😳

love u too..three..much more🤗

btw howz ur chemistry prep going..??