The Wait: A ShraMan SS (Epilogue pg.13)COMPLETED - Page 6

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good one yaar... 23 toh bahut dooor lag rha hai... pls continue sooner if possible... 😛

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Tada guys...so I have finised half of my portion of Chemistry, my aunt's baby has gone back to delhi and as you all are eager to read the Shravan-Shriya milap..I won't keep you hanging till 23..And a big thank you to Sunain...🤗So here goes the last chapter of the SS..enjoy😳
Chapter 4

SHRAVAN'S POV

"Mumma.."I heard a voice and at that instance I felt something spark in me...that was such a beautiful voice...

I turned around to see a mesmerizing sight...A cute small girl..no princess I should say...who was wearing a cute blue frock.. her pony was dancing left and right...dark brown eyes...pink cotton lips...

Those beautiful eyes kept staring at my for a while at at the next moment she came flying on me...

I came out of the trance only when I heard that melodious voice again...

" Papa..."

Those words felt so silvery that my eyes felt moist...

"Papa.., aap mujhe milkar khush nahi hue...??

Now what do I tell her how happy I was...How do I tell her that I felt like having the world in my arms...How could I tell her That meeting her was so soothing even to the physical injuries...

"Shravan kuch toh bolo..."

I was at the loss of words...

"Sumo...thank you sooo much for this gift..."I let the tears go off my eyes...

"Beta aapko pata hai...Aapke papa ne aapko aaj pehle baar dekha hai...aap andaza bhi nahi laga sakte papa aaj kitne khush hai..."

And this was the truth..I had never even seen a picture of my Daughter...I didn't even know whether it was Samar or Shriya...

"Aacha...mujhe pata nahi tha ke aapko pata hai nahi hai ..."She got so messed up in her own words that I just couldn't resist in giving her a small peck and lifting her up in my arms...She giggled in the same way Sumo giggled when I used to pick her up suddenly...

"Papa aapko pata hai...aapki awaz bilkul waise he hai jaise maine uus recording mei suuni thi..."

"Kaunsi recording baby..??" She tried to wiggle out of my arms to show me the recordings but couldn't.

"Woh Mummy mujhe sunnati thi..."

"Aacha...Toh aur kya kya bataya aapko mummy ne mere bare mei??

"Bohot kuch...Mummy kehti thi ke aap bohot handsome aur cute ho...aur aap thode akdu bhi ho...par mei hamesha mummy ko kehti thi ke aap vaise nahi hai...nahi hai na aap akdu??"She asked..making the same pout which I did...She was really a carbon copy of me...

" Nahi princess..Papa bilkul akdu nahi hai..."

" Yaa...mujhe pata tha ke aap akdu ho he nahi sakte...Aakhir aap mere papa jo ho..."She said giving me a peck on my cheek...

"Papa par aap toh kal aane wale the na...aur aap ye kaise aa gaye?? Maine toh aapko door se andar aate hue bhi nahi dekha..." she said with confusion on her face...that was a type of expression which Sumo used to give...

" Mai na khidki se aaya..."

"Kya...aapne aisa kyun kia..??aapko laga nahi na..."

She said with a concerned face like Sumo...Shriya was all blended Qualities and expressions of me and Sumo...

"Nahi baby...Papa bilkul thik hai..."

"Bhaiya..."Pushkar screamed from the door and ran towards me...

" Bhaiya aap yha...aise achanak se..."

"Chachu papa na khidki se aaye..."

"Kya bahiya...Sumo ko impress karne ke liye khidki say...Waah kya baat hai..."

I couldn't control the blush creeping my cheeks..

"Nahi toh...mai toh aape beti se milne ke liya khidki se aaya..."I tried to cover my embrassment.

"Par Shriya toh mere kamre me soti hai.."

"Kyun ??Aapne mumma ke saath sona chahiye ..hai na Sumo..???"

"Aare woh actually maine hi kaha tha key woh Pushkar ke kamre mai soye...

"Par Kyun Sumo??

"Mai batati hu Papa...Woh kya hai na mujhe sote waqt aapke story sunni hoti hai aur jab bhi mummy aapke story batati thi woh rone lagti thi aur story complete nahi hoti thi...Isiliye mai chachu ke kamre mai soti thi aur woh mujhe aapko stories batate the..."

I glanced at Sumo..She was not able to hold tears in her eyes...

"Aab bahar chalo Shravan...Sab se toh mil lo..."

We went out...

(yaha Shravan ka POV khatam)

"Good Morning Papa..."came a voice

"Good Mor..."Ramnath stopped...

"ye toh Shravan ki awaz hai...nahi nahi..I am hallicunating??No can't be.."Ramnath thought.

Ramnath was totally shocked to see Shravan, standing with Shriya in his arms...

"Kya hua Papa??aap aise kyun dekh rahe hai...Lagta hai aap bhi khush nahi hai mujhse milkar.."Shravan pouted.

At the same time Nirmala and Kamini came from the kitchen..

"Aur jiji hum na..."Kamini stopped midsentence.

"Hayyo Rabba Jiji..woh dekhiye...Mujhe toh Shravan subah se yaha waha dikh raha hai..."

"Nahi chachi mai sach me aa gaya hu..."Shravan said..trying to make her believe.

Nirmala's joy knew no bounds...Nirmala kept the tray on the table and flung her arms around Shravan..(The way she did when she met Shravan for the first time at sumo's house)And made way for the tears of happiness...which did not seem to know their boundries...

"Shravan ...Mera baccha...Kaisa hai tu..."

"Mai thik hu Maa...Chachi kya aapko vishwas hua ab??"

"Ha ha puttar ji...Vaise kaha se aaya tu...Darvajese toh nahi lagta aaya hai...Aur woh bhi nightdress mai??"Kamini inquired.

"I swear mummyji...Maine bhi notice kiya..."

"Oye Vandy puttar kahise kyun na aaya ho...Apna munda ghar toh aaya na...Puttar kaisa hai tu??"Lala ji inquired..saving Shravan frome giving explanation of why he was in nightdress...

"Mai thik hu Lalaji.."said Shravan and touched his feet.

Then he went to Ramnath touched his feet and hugged him...

"Shravan...I am proud of u beta.." Ramnath managed to say between his tears...

"Chalo aab sab ka rona dhona band ho gaya ho toh Maa kuch khaane ko do na...Bohot bhook lagi hai...

"Ha Shravan..Tum jao aur fresh ho jao...Mai tab tak breakfast lagati hu..."

"Thik ha Maa...Sumo jaara aana toh..Kuch baat karni hai..."

"Ooh...Bhaiya...Desperate ha...Bhabi se pal ke liye bhi door nahi raha jaa raha..."Pushkar teased, as always.

SUMO'S POV

Shravan told me to follow him and Pushkar teased us. Shyly I left the Hall.

"Kya hua Shravan??"

I saw him, his eyes were moist and face, concerned.

"I am sorry Sumo..."A drop of tear left his eyes...

"kyun Shravan ??Sorry kisliye??"I held his face in my hands, confused.

"Mai tumhara saath nahi de paya..."

"Tum ye kya keh rahe ho Shravan??"I just couldn't understand what he was trying to say..

"Saach keh raha hu Sumo...Pata hai border par jaane ke baad pichle paanch saalo mei mujhe ek baar bhi chain ke neend nahi aaye...Jab bhi bhi aakhein band karta that oh tumhara chera samne aata tha...the face which was pleading me not to go..I am sorry Sumo..Life ke iis important phase mei mai tumhara saath nahi de paya..."

I just couldn't control my tears.

"Nahi Shravan...Tumhe sorry kehne ki zarrorat nahi hai...Tumne jo kiya bilkul sahi kiya..."

"Ye kya keh rahi ho tum??"He interrupted me.

"Saach" I said mocking his tone.."Dekho Shravan..Mere pati hone se pehle tum ek comrade ho...mujhse pehle tumhara farz desh ki taraf hai...Isiliye toh maine tumhe nahi rooka...Aur aisa nahi hai ke tum mere saath nahi the...Har waqt tum mere saath the...Tumhari tasveere, tumhare yaadein...aur saabse important baat...Tumhari nishaani..Shriya..Woh bhi toh hamesha mere saath hi thi Na..."I said.

Cupping his face,"Tumhe pata hai Shravan, jab bhi mai Shriya ko dekhti thi na tab mujhe tumhari yaad aati thi...Woh bilkul tumhari tarah hai...tumhari tarah ghusse wali..tumhari tarah cute...tumhate tarah tantrums dikhane wali..aur sabse important cheez..tumhare tarah pyaar karne wali.."

SUMO'S POV FINISHED

Shravan couldn't control his tears.

"I love you so so much Sumo.."

"I love you too Shravan..."

At the same time Shriya entered.

"Papa, dadi niche breakfast ke liye bula rahi hai..."

Shravan took her in her arms.

"Papa aapse ek baat puchu??"

"Ek nahi Baby..100 Pucho..Aapke har sawal ka jawab Papa denge..."

"Aap phir hame chood kart oh nahi jaayenge na..."Shriya asked...Her eyes were slightly moist..

Shravan pulled her closer and also engulfed Sumo "Nahi baby...Kabhi nahi..."

It was finally over...Sumo's wait for him of 5 long years and Shravan's wait to see his life, Sumo Shriya and his family..The wait was finally over...

So..How was it guys..I hope you all liked it..Please do like & comment...I hope I did not disappoint anybody...

P.S- Tomatoes and chappals are most welcome

P.P.S- If you all want a epilogue..to let me know..I have A idea in my mind but will write only if I get more than 10 requests..😊

Its amazing👏

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Anuu...my love...tonz of 🤗 n roses for u dear..u nailed it!!!
was [I]"BEAUTIFULLY PENNED"]
Loved it to core.
Both Shraman's POV's were fantastic.
the way u narrated their predicament their emotions...outstanding

Shravan saw his princess for the first time in thoz 5 years n was totally spellbound..
his happiness had no boundries just like of his family's aftet seeing him..most emotional part.
Shravan cudnt believe his eyes..he was actually seeing his daughter his princess n all he cud get by her antics was tht she was a complete blended mixture of both of thm(shraman)
The way he admired her was lovely..
Shriya herself was elated seeing his dad..

Pushkar n Shriya infact everyone was suspicious bout his entry..lol n only the first two knew the truth..😆
Pushkar n his never ending teasing.

Suman used to cru while telling Shriya his stories.. 😭 😭
Shravan apologyised to her for not being there for her in her life's most imp phase..how genuine..
N Sumo understands n loves him to core..thy fct made me grin like an idiot..both r just apt for eachothet..wakai banne hain [I]Ek Duje Ke Vaaste[I]
really loved their room convo..was really heart touching..
Infact the whole upii touched my heart.
Really loved the ending..was damn cute sweet n simple😊

All in all the update was spectecular without any dout
Loved it to core

N wht a silly que u asked...obviously we need an epilogue...i don't knw bout others bur me ko tu for sure chahiyay aur woh bhi lamba wala..n with some cute shraman moments..n thts final!!

N no need to thank me..i was literally vry pleased helping u.
love yaa dear🤗...tighto wala bear hug just for u😳

PS:i m unressing or u can say editing my post for the third time..so plz pardon.me if i missed anything..yar my phone is being such an as****le..n oper say wifi bhi ahhh..so plz ignore if there r any typos..i hope kay ab ki bar post ho gaay..

Hayyoo rabba ki update kri tussi. ...dil khush kr ditta ❤️

will it be enough if i request 10 times??? 😆 😆 😆 😆

Awesome... shravan meeting shriya for the first time is spellbinding... will definitely love to have a epilogue...plz update soon