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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Will update soon guys stay tuned😊

Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago

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anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

just two comments n ur in love with me...hay dollu m blushing ;) n lol it was my duty to clear my name thing ;) ...n I'm glad my comments motivate u sweety...n yeah I know you'll write amazing in future too...n m going to stick in here ...will stay tuned ..don't worry...u to bs ji jaldi 2 update krte jao :-p

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: anonymousanju
just two comments n ur in love with me...hay dollu m blushing ;) n lol it was my duty to clear my name thing ;) ...n I'm glad my comments motivate u sweety...n yeah I know you'll write amazing in future too...n m going to stick in here ...will stay tuned ..don't worry...u to bs ji jaldi 2 update krte jao :-p

I have send you a PM pls help out

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Hello guys i am back with chapter 2 but before that i wanted to thank all of you for the overwhelming response and beautiful comments you have given specially anju seriously your comment made my day luv u girl and a big big thanks to all of you again..also arpita thanks for helping...

Here u go...

Chapter -2

They rush shravan to the hospital and Suman sits there outside OT pushkar comes there...
Pushkar: sumo ye sab kese hua?

Sumo: *between sobs* pata nhi me or shravan phone p baat kar rhe the or achanak se ek truck ne ake...*starts crying really bad*
*pushkar sits there consoling her*

Doctor comes out and says Mr.malhotra has got a fracture in his leg he is not hurt much just a fracture and some minor injuries we will keep him here for 2-3 more days then you can take him home..

Sumo : thank you doctor..can i meet him?
Doc: yes you can but only 1 person at a time
Pushkar says to sumo you go i'll wait here and inform everybody

*sumo gets inside the room wiping her tears and sees shravan lying on bed with plastered leg and small bandages all over his body..
*she moves near the bed*

Shr: sumo...

Sumo: tum to kuch bolo hi mat me tumse gussa hu..

Shr: par mene kya kiya (asks innocently)

Sumo: bilkul chinta nhi h na tumhe apni??Mara bhi khyal nhi krte na

Shr: i am sorry jaan par mene kya kiya? Galtito truck wale ki thi (Suman sees shravan getting sad)

She says...pata h na tum mere liye kitne important ho...or nhi pata to jan lo Mr.shravan malhotra jaan ho tum meri or tumhare bina me ek pal bhi nhi reh sakti
*shravan smiles sheepishly*

Shr: i love you meri tigress
Sumo :i love you too mere zakhmi tiger
*they both laugh*
Sumo kisses shravan lovingly on his forehead
Shr: Mrs.malhotra control your hormones ye hospital h..
Sumo whacks him on his arm and says tum jao ab kbhi mere pas mat ana
Shr: are me to mazak kar rha tha meri jaan and kisses her gently on her cheek
*Suman blushes*

*Ramnath and nirmala enter*
Nirmala starts crying and says hugs shravan
Nirmala: ye kya hal bana rakha h? Kya kar liya khud ko bilkul chinta nhi h apni..
Shravan and Sumo look towards each other and laugh..

Nirmala: mujhe yaha itni tension ho rhi h or tum Dono ko hasi a rhi h?
Shr: maa me bilkul thik hu bad ek chota sa fracture h..or hum has isliye rhe the ki sumo ne bhi akar mujhe ese hi daata tha
Ramnath: me kehta tha na mujhe suman me nirmala ke gun dikhte h..i was not wrong
*all of them laugh*
Suddenly ramnath asks to shravan and Suman...are you guys sure this was an accident?

Thanks for reading...

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phoenix_edkv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

It's me first😎

It's so nice. Plz update soon

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Thank God, shravan is safe with only minor injuries. Shraman convo was cute. Ramnath being all lawyer and suspects things. Good going !!

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv
It's me first😎
It's so nice. Plz update soon

Thanks and i will...

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Amisha.r
Nice 😊

Thanks

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: dhanyata
Thank God, shravan is safe with only minor injuries. Shraman convo was cute. Ramnath being all lawyer and suspects things. Good going !!

Did not wanted to see him in pain anymore😭😳 and ramnath kbhi to apne dimag istemal kre 😛😉