Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 87

OMG what was that...i was awestruck how could that aditya do this he wanted to part away shraman so bad😡.

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Sanjh,

What an update. Just totally loved it. This is the ruthless Shravan outside with full of Love inside.

"Tu Haan Kar Ya Naa Kar Tu Hai Meri Sumannn".

Loved Shravan in this avatar. And you what I felt like hitting Aditya myself, he lied to Sumo. Nevertheless the main point is that they got married. Now let's see how can she resist him. 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Lubna.

Unlike our show's sumo..this suman has no right to get angry on shravan for this sudden marriage. I mean...she really didnt care that aditya played her all the time, she cheated shravan all the time.,all that matters is his ill treatment...wow...just one problem arouse between them in past...so nanu came up with a promise. She accepted and staying with aditya...The problem itself came because of his insecurity created majorly by the Great aditya. Being all along, sumo can't understand this...oh god...i think suman dont deserve him. How i wanted to wish "happy married life to suman and aditya"

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Unlike our show's sumo..this suman has no right to get angry on shravan for this sudden marriage. I mean...she really didnt care that aditya played her all the time, she cheated shravan all the time.,all that matters is his ill treatment...wow...just one problem arouse between them in past...so nanu came up with a promise. She accepted and staying with aditya...The problem itself came because of his insecurity created majorly by the Great aditya. Being all along, sumo can't understand this...oh god...i think suman dont deserve him. How i wanted to wish "happy married life to suman and aditya"

Ur writing is as usual so touching.good work...

P.S this aditya never fails to get on my nerves. I can't hate his character more😡

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

OMG what was that...i was awestruck how could that aditya do this he wanted to part away shraman so bad😡.

I was sure that shravan is doing all this with some purpose, i hope u will reveal it in next part,

i am relaxed now they are married everything will be handled by our HERO 😎

Saanjh it was too good👏, i really loved so much to this businessman SHRAVAN

Luv

Priti

superb Yrr...blockbuster part...seriously jitna socha tha usse bada bomb blast hua...I really wanted him to take these kind of step for him and sumo...these two aditya and nanu r most annoying person in the planet...Ye paida he is maksad se hue Hai ki sumo ki wat laga sake...nanu to may be shadi bhi Isliye kiye ki natin ho or uski life hell banau...I really hate that man more then ramu...BTW super duper amazing update

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Tedha Shravan !!!

I liked this so much.. like get it done... no melodrama !! Finis !!

Aditya is such a #$%$% 😡 for lying and Sumo needed a dose for believing as well !!

achcha kiya..

One clarification until next part... This was from Sumo's POV... the last line was also noticed by Sumo? or was it something Shravan did unnoticed by her?

Originally posted by: sweksha

superb Yrr...blockbuster part...seriously jitna socha tha usse bada bomb blast hua...I really wanted him to take these kind of step for him and sumo...these two aditya and nanu r most annoying person in the planet...Ye paida he is maksad se hue Hai ki sumo ki wat laga sake...nanu to may be shadi bhi Isliye kiye ki natin ho or uski life hell banau...I really hate that man more then ramu...BTW super duper amazing update

Omg..omg..sanjh..madam iss update ne to mere jaise silent reader ko bhi comment karne par majboor kar diya...just loved it..loved it...loved it sooo much...and thanks for the pm too..