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Posted: 8 years ago
Next update kab aayega behen...seriously can't wait now
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Eeshaal

Hi saanjh luv the update reading it made me thought ke chodne ka haq sirf shravan ka hai Kya , hopefully u will update soon can't wait , undoing amazing



Thank you so much...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiii28

I have read all the chapters in one go
Yu are wonderful writer di
And yr story is marvellous
Plz update soon 😊


Are you serious, and tum bore bhi nahin hui... Wah ji wah... But thank you so so much...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

JUJU...🤗
Pechana meko??Yaar forum pe mai 6 din nahi aayi toh sab bhul gaye😭😭
Bhai waah...👏Amazing stupendous fabulous outstanding...👏
Kya update diya...Zabardast...⭐️
Aur kya u r trying to wrap the story???Bilkul nahi...Dil maange mor
e..😃😃
Shuru kaha se karu???Mind boggling update yaar...😛
Well meri aakhen bhar aayi sumo gayab hai ye sunkar...
Par nanu par shravan se pehle mujhe doubt aaya..😆😆
Shravan thik ho gaya...Bhai waah...ek pe ek dhamaka ho raha hai...
3 Mahine se sumo gayab??aacha huya...Shravu thik toh hua...
Company take overing...Humara Shravan hai he kamal...Sumo ko milna ke laye kuch bhi karega..😃
Sumo moved on??? Shock laga bohot bada ...aise kaiise moved on yaar??
Par koi mahi...Shravan udko sab yaad dilayega..
And yhay kasu dialohue from dhadkan...tabhi mai kahu kahi suna hua hai..😃😃
Waiting for your dhamaka...Well i have a idea abt it...😆😆
Update soonish...
Love,
Zehrili Chidiya..😳😳





tujhe main kaise bhul sakti hoon my zeherili chidiya... I am happy that you liked it... and let's see kya idea hai tujhe... will update in an hour.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Maggot16

Next update kab aayega behen...seriously can't wait now



Abhi ayega...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay time for a new update! But before that a clarification, in previous chapter we've seen, Preety gave a letter to Shravan. But what was written on the letter, we didn't know, as Pushkar didn't ask Shravan. But you people will get to know, eventually!
Okay, this chapter is for all the people sho have commented on last chapter.
This will be from Suman's POV.


Chapter 18


Delhi, Mumbai and now Bangalore! It seemed I was never going to settle in one city for long, and I would never going to have my loved ones in my life! Fair enough! That might be my destiny!

"Aaj firse late ho jaungi! Project file kahan rakh di maine... "




"Areee Suman, you are late... " Anjali sighed.

"Haan, woh project file, tumhara chehra aisa kyun hai... "

"Aaj management change ho raha hai... "

"Matlab... " I didn't hear anything before.

"Haan.. Woh MnR compamy ne humari company ko take over kar li hai... Aur you must go to conference room now... Meeting shuru hone wali hai abhi... "

MnR company... .I had heard this name before...but didn't think much, being so flabbergasted by the news, I ran towards the conference room.



And I saw him...



Shravan Malhotra...sitting in front of me...

The only thing I felt was happiness, I was absurdly happy, I was seeing him after whole 3 months. And how I missed him. How I managed to stay away from this greek god, how ruined my life was, I wanted to plunge in his arms, but suddenly I remembered the vilest of words he had used that night... No I would not be able to forget that... Ever...


"So Miss Suman, aap mujhe dekhte hi rahengi, ya andar bhi ayengi... " he got up from the chair and came straight to me...but... He was walking...without the crutch, with steady, confident steps, he stopped in front of me.. And said.. "It's nice to meet you... "

Again it was a shock for me... My Shravan, walking without the crutch.. ."Tum aise... "

"Tumne kya socha itni jaldi picha chudwa logi is pagal se... Nahin sumo... "

So much confidence, I had never seen in him! Like his whole persona had changed in this three months.





After the meeting, everyone went out of the room, but I stayed.

"Kya... do you want to say something... "


"Yeh kya natak hai.. Shravan... "

"Natak.. Kaunsa natak..."

"Please Shravan...tum jaante ho maim kis bare mein baat kar rahi hoon! "

"Sumooo... "

"It's Suman for you... "

"Okay Miss Suman Tiwari... Main janta hoon, maine ghalati ki hai... " he got up from the chair and came straight to me.. "Par...iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum mujhe chod ke chali jaogi..."

"Shravan... Listen.. I have moved on... Main sab kuch bhul chooki hoon..aur tum bhi mujhe bhool jao.. .. Please.. So let me live in peace... " I couldn't forget that night.. No not all!

"Sumooo... " he pulled me in his arms.

"Shravan chodo mujhe... " I could not melt in his touch.. My whole body was aching to touch him..

"Sumo...main tumhe bhool jaun yeh ho nahin sakta.. Aur.. ..tum mujhe bhool jao.. Yeh main kabhi hone nahin doonga..." My heart skipped a beat! The way he was looking at me, with those light brown eyes, it was not at all easy to take off my eyes from his.


"Please Shravan chodo mujhe... " this time I pleaded. "Koi aa jayega.. Office hai... Kya sochega... "


"Mujhe fark nahin padta...mujhe bass tum chahiye.. Kaun kya sochta hai... Mujhe usse kuch lena dena nahin... " he glared.


"Ahem. Ahem... " Pushkar! "I think I should go...you people take your time. " he smirked and went out of the room.

But I was watching Shravan only... Me in his arms, his eyes bored into mine...his breath, touching my face. His cologne mixed scent, oh god I missed it so much!



"Mr Malhotra.. " somebody knocked.

"Leave me Shravan... Please... "

"Thik hai jao... Par tum kab tak bhagogi mijhse bhaglo... Jaoo... " He pushed me away and went to sit on the chair!

"Come in... " that was the queue for me to leave.




After office, I came running out...I just didn't want to face him again. But it had never happened what I wanted right! A loud honk, I instantly knew who it was.. I kept walking.

"Sumo...gadi mein baitho.. ." his car was by my side.

I ignored.

"Sumo gadi mein baitho... "

Suddenly the purr of the car stopped! And he almost ripped the door out of the car!

"Sumooo" he yelled and I jumped. He grabbed my hand.. "Sunai nahin deta kya..."

"Mujhe kuch sunna hi nahin... Chodo mera hath Shravan... Just stay in your limits... Lagta hai woh thappae bhul gaye tum.. Hann... "

"Kuch nahin bhula main... Please Sumo don't make this difficult for me... ..chalo gadi mein baitho.. " he pulled me with him...again I was overwhelmed by his attitude... I couldn't understand, why I was liking it...

But I couldn't show this to him.


"Stop ogling Sumo... And come with me.. ." he smirked.

"I am not ogling! "

"Hmmm chalo abhi... Warna main tumhe utha ke leke jaunga.. ." he warned and then got in his car and started .

He rolled down the my sided window and leaned.. " just get in Sumo.. "


My eyes narrowed, and I was debating whether or not to make a run for it.

"I'll just drag you back," he promised, enjoying the chagrin on my face when I realized he meant it.

Didn't want to scene create more, I opened my door and climbed in..


"Put on the seat belt.. " he instructed.

"Shravan.. What do you want..." I asked him, while putting on the belt.

"You..."

"Why...want to insult me more? "

"Please Sumo.. .please.. .at least... Listen to me once..." he sighed.

"Chodo... Where are we going.. .or should I rephrase, why are you kidnapping me.."

He didn't answer.. But the way he was clutching the steering, his knuckles were getting all white.. "Abhi yeh gadi todke rahega.. ." I muttered under my breath.

He just glared at me.. But one thing I had to admit, this new Shravan Malhotra was much more attractive than before...his temper, his attitude was making him more irresistible!

"Chalo utro... " I didn't realise that he had already stopped the car.


UB city mall!

"Hum yahan kya kar rahein hai... " I asked while getting out of the car.

"You will get to see that... And wait inside, while I park the car. "

"Yeh pura pagal ho chuka hai... " I nodded and went inside.. .



The place is vast with great interior and labels. It's definitely built for the Uber rich! Of course being a millionaire, Shravan would choose this mall. The whole setting gives a classy appeal to the place. Great to have nice romantic dinners...these are my thoughts after entering the mall. I had heard about this mall but couldn't manage the time to come...wait.. Romantic dinners... If that was in his mind, then definitely he would walk out from here with food on his head!


A light tap on my shoulder.

A man in a green shirt and trouser, with overly smiling face, and a grand bouquet standing there.

"This is for you mam.. "

"Mujhe nahin chahiye..."

"Then what would I do with it.. " he was still smiling.

"Put it on your head, it will suit you as you are already looking like a plant in this green outfits."

"Great sense of humor mam.. " he smiled again. .

"Listen you.. ." I was about to break his teeth..

"Suman.. " my name echoed from every corner of the mall.

"Ab yeh kya naya natak hai... " I mumbled.


A big flash light suddenly lit on me.. Making me almost blind...wait.. Did I hear a guitar playing somewhere near me.. .


But I couldn't see anything because of the flash light...and then I felt something...a shower of rose petals on me...what is happening.. ."Shravannn" I shouted...


And then I heard him...singing for me again after all these time... And how I missed his voice...



Still feels like our first night together
Feels like the first kiss, it's gettin' better, baby
No one can better this...
Still holdin' on, you're still the one.
First time our eyes met, same feelin' I get
Only feels much stronger, wanna love you longer
You still turn the fire on...

So if you're feelin' lonely"don't
You're the only one I ever want.
I only wanna make it good
So if I love you a little more than I should...


I felt a pair of hands surrounded me from my backside.


Please forgive me
I know not what I do.
Please forgive me
I can't stop lovin' you
Don't deny me.
This pain I'm going through...
Please forgive me if I need you like I do.
Please believe me.
Every word I say is true...
Please forgive me
I can't stop loving you

He kissed on my hair...
"Shravann" I mumbled.


Still feels like our best times are together.
Feels like the first touch, still gettin' closer, baby
Can't get close enough.
Still holdin' on, you're still number one.
I remember the smell of your skin,
I remember everything,
I remember all your moves
I remember you, yeah!
I remember the nights, you know I still do.

So if you're feelin' lonely"don't
You're the only one I ever want.
I only wanna make it good
So if I love you a little more than I should...

Please forgive me
I know not what I do.
Please forgive me
I can't stop lovin' you
Don't deny me
This pain I'm going through.
Please forgive me if I need you like I do
Oh, believe me.
Every word I say is true.
Please forgive me
I can't stop loving you.


He came in front of me, and held my hand, pulling forward ...


One thing I'm sure of is the way we make love.
And one thing I depend on is for us to stay strong.
With every word and every breath I'm prayin'
That's why I'm sayin'...

Please forgive me
I know not what I do.
Please forgive me
I can't stop lovin' you.
Don't deny me.
This pain I'm going through.
Please forgive me if I need you like I do.
Babe, believe me.
Every word I say is true.
Please forgive me if I can't stop loving you.
Never leave me
I don't know what I'd do.
Please forgive me
I can't stop loving you,
Can't stop loving you.


He knelt down in front of me...with tears in his eyes.. ."I am sorry Sumo.. .I am really really sorry... ."

"Shravannn" I didn't know when my own eyes started brimming with tears..

"I had insulted you, in front of everyone, I am apologizing to you, in front of everyone. "


"Shravan main... "

"Please Sumooo please... "

How could I...how could I...what about the promise I had made...


"I am sorry Shravan...tumne bahut der kar di... "

He got up from his knees, "Matlab..."

"Tumne mujhe dhoomdne mein bahut der kar di... "

"Sumooo mujhe pata bhi nahin tha tum kahan ho... Main pagalon ki tarah tumhe dhoondta fir raha tha... "

The pain on his face... As if someone was tearing him apart...

"Kyun dhoonda mujhe Shravan kyun..."

"Kyunnn ...to fir iska kya matlab... Iss letter ka kya matlab Sumoo... " he threw the letter on my face... And grabbed my arms almost bruisingly!


It was my writing, my last writing when I left Tiwari killa...


'Agar main kahin ghum ho jaon... To kya tum mujhe dhoondne aaoge... '

Preety for sure... I shouldn't...write it though!

"It was a random writing, it wasn't meant for you.." I tried to free me from his hold.

"Random writing.. " he didn't believe me...

"Haan chodo mujhe... "

"Kya choopa rahi ho Sumo... Kya choopa rahi ho... " he cupped my face..

"Shravan... "

"Bolo Sumooo" I could feel his restlessness.

"I am sorry Shravan...I am sorry.. " for a moment his hand loosen, and taking the opportunity, I ran out of his iron grip...



Okay... Now...this is going to be another hurdle for Shravan... But let me tell you... There will be a dhamaka in next chapter... I am sure you people have already guessed it. Hope you all will like it, though not like the previous one.
But please let me know whether you liked it or not... Through your comments, messages. Will wait eagerly.

The song I have used is "please forgive me" by Bryan Adams. My all time favourite.

P. S. Sorry for the typos.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Juju!!!!🤗
WHT AN UPDATE!!!...Tremendous👏...Out Class!⭐️
The twist you bought into ur FF is Beyond MindBlowing!..Literally i was so surprised and m so so so curious to knw wht Sumo has been apologyzing to him continously...i mean wht did she actually do...DOOONNNTTT TELL me shez commited with someone else by now...ohh...Shravan wud be beyond furious abhi tu kuch nhi...Juju savh mein my curiosity and excitement is on the highest peak oh MountEverst aur Sumo k sorry or cant do anything state nay meri dimgh ki nasein pharnaein tak ka program bana leaa hai..tu plz plz plz plz mera dimgh par dya karo aur pressure cooker phatnay say phlay jaldi say apni Most Wanted update day do...plz plz plz update super dooper soonish...a hearty request*puppy eyes*

Wel coming back to the update...

The song choice was profoundly Apt!⭐️...its lyrics were delivering his emotions and feelings so well and it literally touched my heart❤️...it was so beautiful!
To my relief she still loves him to core and missed him as much as he missed her..it was so clear the way she was getting more and more attracted towards him and the longed feelings hit her back whn she saw him after 3 whole months!

The cutest thing was the way Shravan confessed every now and thn tht all he wants is her with so much ease as if shez a choclate bar and he wants to devour it😳

The surprise was Aaamaazing!
When she said he'll be walking out of the mall with food on his head..ohh tht was a good one😉😆...and so was tht garden man's part too😆

the apology part was damn emotional😭..touched my heart!..so so beautifully penned!

Hy whts the mystry behind the letter..oye koi Sumo ko blackmail to nhi kar raha😲...n shez trying to save Shravan😕..arey bhai meri thoughts or figuring out ki bullet train aisay hi chalti rahay gi...plz halt par lanay k leay Jaldi update kardo na Bunny*pleading eyes*

All in all it was hell Stupendously Penned!⭐️...Hats off bae👏
I loved and enjoyed it to core❤️
Gazillion of hugs and kisses for u my dear🤗
Love You!



Tadaa!🥳
Ur lalchi❤️
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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God I had to read from chapter 15 courtesy god for sake of exams
I had missed out on sooo much
This ft is turning out to be more beautiful update by update
Main stuff:
1.Shravan was such an ass when he insulted Sumo, but that was his way of pushing her away kind of Co insides with the way sumo pushed away shravan in the actual show, brute there brute here. That slap was well deserved how could he doubt her love.😡
2. Sumo gayab but I had predicted nanu would be knowing😎
3. Shravan theek Ho gaya. Tres bien.
4. The swag shravan is pulling off greatly swooped me off my feet😳
5. Main tumhe bhul jaun Yeh Ho nahi sakta aur tum mujhe bhul jao Yeh main hone nahin dunga. ...sunil shetty@ dhadhkan... tu haan kar ya na kar tu hai meri suman
6. Agar main kahi kho jaun to tum mujhe dhoodne aage. ...shraddha kapoor@ ok jaanu
7. What is it sumo is talking about? Hope everything gets sorted soon. 😊

Great going
Take care JUJU🤣( what does that even mean)
Arpita

Edited by ArpitaSingh1806 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
no Pistu🤣
twelve secs late sweetheart!🤣

I Won!
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update this one was .. 👏That was a quite a very romantic way to say Sorry .. But again a cliffhanger !! now what hurdle !! There problems aren't going to end .. 😭

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