Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 53

Originally posted by: Nik03

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Hey dear ...Soo happy that you are back home...😊

Thank you...

Coming to the update...It was as usual mind blowing dear..!!!

Again a thank you.

Sumo is really impatient... 😳
And Shravan is feeling inferiority complex here...ohh!!!
Hope to see him fit n fine soon...!!

And whats wrong with Aditya????
Is he turning into a negetive character???

No no he is a positive character by far! Here the destiny will play the gray charcter.

All in all it was wonderful dear...Can feel connected to ShraMan completely..!!

Thanks for the PM n plzz update soonish...eagerly waiting!!!

Will try to update asap.

Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing update

totally brilliant

continue soon

superb

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Brilliant update... Really liked it...

Eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Faith28

Happy new yr!! Great update as always...problems problems on the way😕 Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Sunain

Hiii...

look whoz here😃

will surely read all the parts n then unres😉

Ressi res🤗

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Bunny!!Bunny!!Bunny!!...i missed u shoo much🤗🤗

Firstly Happy Happy Happy New Year...🥳

may this year bring lots n lots of happiness in ur like...stay blessed👍🏼

now coming to the upii...m going to unres update by update ok...so here we go...😉

Chapter 9

Oye hoye...literally fanning my self...their romantic moment..haah...outstanding!

Shravan just cant think of his life without her yet dosent want to ruin her life by being selfish which he thinks hes being but in actual hes also doing a favour to Sumo by letting her be a part of his life.These two love birds r just meant to be❤️

ohh that newspaper faisco scared me...mami as always the accusing one n whn she called him apahich it was like i was boiling with anger literally i just wanted to strangle her 😡 ..how dare she.

WT*???

Pushkar and Suman's Marraige😲 n Shravan knows that and has no objection..???

this is insane

Chapter 10

the start was hell shocking... i was literally feeling pity for Sumo...i already had a sense of fishyness🤓

Whn she said Yes a loud loud gasp left my mouth n my Paa was staring at me giving a wht happened look...i just laughed and said just reading an intruging story n in return he gave me tumhara kuch nhi ho sakta look..😳😆

Her outburst was👏 ..literally i was feeling so so bad for her.

Ram n Nirmala were merely testing her n they didn't realise how much hurt she could be by their stupid plan wel cant totally blame thm as thy only wanted the best fo their very own son and to be fully assured tht their this decision also not come out as a catastrophic mistake.

and so is Sumo's anger n hurt justified as her very own bestie didnt stand for her n her very own love too...

OMG!!!

their heated argument was hell exciting n thn Shravan's next step got me hell shocked

his state made me 😭😭..poor shravan..😔

O to the G the effing M😃

shravan back on his feet...🥳

Sumo got hurt..awwh..

Chapter 11

hash...finally he got rid of tht wheelchair😃

oh..thy both staying in the same room gave me butterflies in my stomach😳

n their moment was.. ..i can just have a shower loads of flower for tht on u it was tht beautiful...loved it to core

n his teasings made me blush harder☺️

u knw i envy Sumo sometimes as wht she has i dont have😆 ..this imaginary perfect shravan is just like to be totally devoured😳

ohh their dirty talk..🤪

tht song was lovely...loved it!⭐️

i wud say the bestest upii..👏🤗

Chapter 12

Just phenomenal..👏

Shravan just cant stop loving her...i wud say eery second his love only increases to the rate of infinity...lovely❤️

Pushkar just cant keep things to himself😆 ...told Preeti too...😆

ADITYA..????😲 ...why m not getting any positive wibes by his presence n i guess so is Shravan🤪

Mr Malhotra kay jealously hormones jag rahay hain😳

hmm so Pushkar intrested in Preeti...this is just getting more n more intresting😃

ohh their kiss was engaging

really jealous Shravan is just fun..cutie pie😳 ...this aditya is losing no chance to get on Shravan's nerve n pissing him off😆

their moment again outstanding..loved every bit n the songs were⭐️

Marry Me???

woah...soo intruging😃

Chapter 13

finally!

Sumo asking him to marry her but he just cant lead her life to the dark whole he has been in for such a long while...its just difficult for him to be selfish.atleast in her matters.he just dosent want to hurt or destroy her cheerful life as he loves her to core.

N i can understand her desperacy😳

they both love eachother insanely n just cant live without eachother...its just his predicament which is not satisfying him to go with the flow.

oh that proposal...❤️..aawwhh...but his honesty cracked me🤣..but he always wanted to dedicate thoz lines to his love n so he faithfully did which i respect a lot!

ohh thoz devil three musketeers...eavsdropping🤣🤪

n yeah he was so rite us ki puri zindagi infact donno ki puri zindagi ek dosray ko manaty manaty hi guzar jaay gi😆

the family moment was really really cute...❤️...n emotional too😭

O to the M the effing G😲

wht did just happened after movie...thoz creeps tht tini mini ugly fight...Aditya out burst Sumo's anger and Shravan's dismay n helplessness completly evident in his voice...holy sh**

this is bad this is so so so bad🤢

Shravan just cant stop under-estimating himself n this stubborness of him is pissing Sumo really badly n this cud be really bad for their relationship...

He thinks hes not capable for her yet cant stay away from her n stop loving her...its just in his silly head all he has to do is believe in himself thts it!

Feeling really bad for thm😭

M hell scared...wht will be his nxt step...😕

Soo captivating..haah yet frustrating feel like pulling my hairs through my fists...why the hell life is so complicated...well there are always so dark days and some light days and after every dark day there is a light day n we shud strongly face our dark day's challengs coz its merely a test from God more likely an exam😳

Hope he dosent make a nasty decision.

TADA!!!🥳

finally i completed mu unress..wohush😎

you have done a tremendous job with ur FF...hats off man👏

i loved every bit of it each twist and turn...woah bae u r really good at tht😉

mera bas chalay tu puri chocalate factory tumharay naam kar do..muuh🤗

i so much missed ur upiiz...😳

i hope u wont be minding my such long unress...as i promised u i'll be unresssing each one of ur unres so heres the start😉

I really enjoyed reading it...it was literally sheer pleasure!😃

Loved it! n Love u shhooo much Bunny!🤗

til nxt time...

Take Care!

Chunna❤️

Originally posted by: krutish22

Hi Sanjh, Hope u r feeling well

Wish U Happy New Year dear...

Lovely update... All parts r good... but specially goons part... feeling bad what shravan feel after hearing aditay's words... He hurts deeply...how does he take these words...eagerly waiting for nxt part

Continue soon

Originally posted by: sptrno

Glad u r fine now dear...take care

Story...Awww beautiful wonderful emotional as always dear...

Thank you!!

Love,

Spandana