Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 38

Originally posted by: ReebaS

It was very very very very very very very very very very very nice dear... Each and every part is beautiful... Everything is sorted now even Shrawan is on his feet... Lovely yaar... Please update the next part asap... And a very very thank you for Pm.

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Yes...its really a dhamekadhar update !! u nailed it completely.

Thank you...

Sumo was bang on !!

I was very happy to see her like that. Excellent give back to those who tried to test her 👏 Of course, she understood shravan's mom and dad and their fear ! But as she said, Pushkar and Shravan can't do this

Her anger is justified. But its okay, no one wanted to take a chance after whatever happened. So its much needed confrontation.

True...

Shravan's outburst was awe. I only remember our Namik who did hungama at sumo's PCT and broke everything. I imagined the same anger, same outburst.

I did remember that same scene while writing that part!

And then their reunion...so love.

By God, the last part. Shravan finally on his feet. Can there be a better situation to bring him back. so amazing. Can't wait for next one now.

p.s But even after he is normal, we need some more shraman moments before you think of closing this. FF. Its a request

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Sanjh dear a big wala thank u & 🤗🤗

My prediction was right... 😉 they were taking test whether she really loves Shravan or a gold digger...😳

Haha... 😃 I am happy that you liked it.

Write from Shravan's POV also from Pushkar came with newspaper & said Ramnath wants to talk to Shravan & after that what happened in Malhotra mansion before coming to Tiwaris... 😳

Will have shravan's pov in next chappy

Sumo outburst also correct... How can they think she is like that idiot Alisha... There is no comparison... Even Pushkar knew her very well he couldn't be done like this... Shravan didn't agree for this... Chalo atleast be trust her... Ohho angry bird Shravan he wanted to destroy everything... He has become so furious.!.. Sumo knows how to cool him down... 😡

Haan... True.. 😃

So finally u made our Sharavu to stand on his feet... Chalo is bar na no sad feeling... Everything is happy happy so far...🥳❤️

Shravan apne pairo pe kada hogaya iss bath pe dance to banta hai...

Haha... mad you are! 😆

Agli baar toda jaldi update karna nehin to pitegi mujhe Sumo ka Shravan ko dekhna hai apne pairo pe kada hote huwe kaise dikta hai... Sumo or Shraru ka reaction dekhna hai...

Chalo ek aur gundi aa gayi... Nahin nahin.. Agla update will be soon pakka! 😊

Thanx for the PM

Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

Thank you so much for the wonderful update
finally finally, he is standing on his own legs
Thank you thank you thank you so much
🤗

Originally posted by: krutish22

Wonderful update

Thanks finally Shravan is standing on his leg. One doubt is he fully recovered or need some time

Now the story is more interesting.

Update soon

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Yeyyy.. finally sharavan thik hogaya..
Poor sumo, they shouldn't have doubted but on the other hand sharavan's parents r also right..
Update was bang on...sumo' s outburst'''
Waiting for next.. Plz update asap

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Yayyy sanjh is back with the update *starts dancing*...omg!!! Seriously sanjh dedicated this update to me...*nearly dies with a heart attack*...ese heart attack mat diya kar pls...behosh ho gyi thi me pata h kitni mushkil se hosh aya 🤣 varna story kese padhti me...ok bad one i know but i was more than overwhelmed to know ki tune ye update mere naam kar diya..haha bol to ese rhi hu jese proprty mere nam kar di ho 🤣 ok again a bad one ...i thought i was good with comedy but mujhse na ho paega i am good being your don ... ok enough of my stupid blabber ...coming to the update it was super duper fantastic awesome mesmerising breathtakingly beautiful...bas itne hi praising words ate h so blame my bad vocab...thank God tune pushkar se uski shadi nhi karvayi varna pata nhi me tere saath kya kart...and the last part fir shock diya naa...fir cliff hanger pe chod diya na😡 adat se baaz nhi ayegi ...gandi bachi (ok i don't know bachi h ya nhi...so suit yourself) and update soon...is bar thoda lamba tha next time ZYADA lamba rakhna samjhi? *you know na greedy me*😆 me kabhi nhi sudhar sakti ...so meet you soon with your update and thanks a lot again baby for dedicating this🤗 ...i loveee you bohooott sara like real bohoot sara ❤️

Love,

Teri gadhadhari and don😎

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Saanjh what an update yaar

Thank you...

Main to reti deewsni ban gayi

Awww😳

Sumos outburst was soo justified
Uske saath shravan ka pyaar mein pagalpan...
He proves tht he doesn't want yo live without her

Uska pagalpan aur bhi dikhegaa...

Yepiii shravan is on his feet...
Ab to romance ka barish hoga...

Woh to hoga! and usme need your help... You are very good writing those stuff! 😉

Jaldi jaldi update karna plzzz
Mat satao hume