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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Sanjh u r fab writer buddy..
Awesome update dear..
Love it..
Thnx for pm dear


Thank you so much... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey saanjh waiting for update.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naamika

Hey saanjh waiting for update.


Sorryyy it will take more 2-3 days... Yeh saare assignments ne band bajake rakkha hai! Please have patience !😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hmmm. Nothing is more important than study. First focus on it. sorry if you felt that I'm being impatient but what to do? studying law is not an easy task so i just wanted a small break. Once again sorry.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naamika

Hmmm. Nothing is more important than study. First focus on it. sorry if you felt that I'm being impatient but what to do? studying law is not an easy task so i just wanted a small break. Once again sorry.😊


Arreee naam k sath padai bhi! Same same! Wah ji wah! I mean with shravan of course... And ur name with namik! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh


Arreee naam k sath padai bhi! Same same! Wah ji wah! I mean with shravan of course... And ur name with namik! 😃

Ohh god I'm literally smilling like an idiot after reading your reply but honestly its credit goes to my parents because they are the one who named me as naamika and wanted me to peruse career as a corporate lawyer and I'm pretty happy with it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry... Sorry...sorry... Was really busy with studies, assignments ..and hell lot more... And yes... All the pm-s I got.. Because I was late to post... Those pm s just made me jump with joy... So much love... Which I didn't expect! So... Here goes the next chapter!...

It'll be from Suman's pov!

This chapter is for Vyshnav...


Chapter 9


It was much, much better! Last night I kissed him, I still remembered the feeling and the sensation! But now.. .the way he was kissing me, it was more than a kiss! He was just pouring his bliss, love, agony; every emotion he was feeling!

We had to pull, we were both out of breath, panting heavily! I looked at him and found his eyes were still closed.! To my astonishment, a lone tear escaped from his right eye!

"Shravannn.. "

"Give me a moment please..."

Then he opened his eyes.. " You can't understand Suman, how I am feeling right now... It's just overwhelming!"...

His eyes searched mine, I could see the dilemma he was going through! He wanted to say something, but as if he was out of words..

"Suman, it just that..."

But somehow I understood his inner turmoil, I hold his face..

"You.. .look at me Mr. Shravan Malhotra,
I.. I would never leave you.. .whatever be the situation, trust me..kyunki.. .mujhe vaagna nahin aata! "

He looked at me with those light brown eyes, and sighed...

"I have never imagined, that selfishness can give, this much of happiness!"

"Now stop it, will you... If you continue to blabber these stupid things, I will break my promise, and leave you!

Instantly, his arm tightened around me.. " that day would be the last day of my life!"

"Shravan.. "

"Suman.. "

My brows furrowed! "BTW why are you calling me Suman! "

"I thought that was your name! "

"Don't try to act smart! You always call me Sumo... Abhi kya ho gaya! "

"hmmm... I thought of calling you love, sweetheart, instead of Sumo! But if you insist I can call you Sumo... "

He pecked my lips..

"But shravan.. ."

"Achcha chodo... Waise kal woh sab kya tha... Haan... Kya kaha tumne sab k samne... My gorgeous boyfriend! Sooo you were checking me out hmmm? For how long... "

This time nudging the crook of my neck.. And his hand was drawing a pattern on my bare waist!

"Shravannn woh... "

"hmmm... My love... You.. Know you have some kind of floral ...no... Kind of wild flowery smell! It's just intoxicating!...mmm"

"Shravannn...mmm pleaseee... "

"hmmm..."

"Waise you aren't angry with me... "

He arched his perfect eyebrows...

"...no I mean... Shaadi mein what I did.. To Alisha... " I whispered!

He smiled...

" Can't you see... I can never be angry with you, love... But yes.. Kal thoda zyada ho gaya... But it's okay! Kyunki kal kisine mujhe apna boyfriend mana... And usne kissed me in the car... .so you see.. .."

He again went for a kiss .. But...

Two light knocks...


*****


"Bhaiya.. "

I stood up from his lap... But he didn't let go of my hand he was holding!

"come in chote.. "

Pushkar entered, but his face was lacking that brilliant smile he possessed! He looked at me and gave the newspaper to Shravan!

The whole story.. Of Alisha's wedding, was there, with every word I said, there was a picture of mine, holding the mic! And icing on the cake was, Alisha's interview, stating, I purposefully ruined her marriage, and of course I was with Shravan because he was a billionaire and so on..

"Papa wants to talk to you bhaiya, right now.. And sumo I think you should leave now... "

That expression of Pushkar alarmed me! There was something I was missing for sure! What if Shravan's parents didn't approve of me! What if...

Shravan squeezed my hand and nodded!

"Bye... "

"Sumoo... Call me when you reach home.. Okay? I'll be waiting! " shravan smiled!


*****


"Yeh lo... Aa gayi... " mami said as soon as I reached home! I sighed! I should have guessed!

"Kal jab Pushkar ne phone kar ke bataya ki tum ghar nahin aa paaoge... Tabhi humko samajh jana chahiye tha! Yehi sab karne jaati ho wahan... Chi chi... Ab to akhbaron pe bhi aane laga yeh sab!... Hum keh dete hai babuji.. Is ghar mein yeh sab nahin chalega! Meri bhi ek beti hai, kalko uski bhi shaadi karni padegi... Kaun apnaye ga is ghar ki ladki ko!"

What could I say! Whatever I had done, there was no proper explanation! "Nanu... " I really felt bad for nanu! He was sitting on the sofa with so much humiliation, I was sure mami had started her drama long ago!

"How could you... Suman... Priya ki beti ho kar...I didn't expect this from you! "

"Nanu, I am sorry nanu.. "

"Ab maafi mangne se kya hoga! " Mami shouted!

"Ohhh Manju please.. Usse bolneka ek mauka to do... " mama tried hard...

"I love him nanu, and he loves me too.. " I explained!

"Yeh lo ab ek apahich se pyaar ho gaya isko.!"


"Please maa, kam se kam di ko bolne to do... " this time Preety intervened!

"Tum janti ho tum kya keh rahe ho...Suman life is not a game! Bahut soch samajh k kaam karna padta hai.. What if you regret in future! " Nanu sighed!

I wanted to say something, but nanu nodded... "Go and change, Suman... I'll talk to you later! "


*****


"Why he is not answering the phone!" this was the fourth time I rang... I hoped everything was okay.. I rang again... And he answered!

"Hmmm bolo... " he sounded tired..

"Shravan... What happened? Everything is okay right? "

"Hmmm.. I... I will talk to to you later okay... Bye.. " he hung up! I thought I heard a sorry too! Was he saying sorry... But why...

"Di jaldi bahar ayiye... " Dabbu knocked..


Mr. and Mrs. Ramnath Malhotra.. Both were sitting there, mami seemed genuinely happy.. "jaldi aa Suman.. Dekh to kaun aaye hai.. Yeh tere rishte ki baat karne aaye hai... ."

Ii just astounded me! What was she saying.. .rishta..matlab me and Shravan! I didn't know whether to be happy or not!

"Yes.. .Suman... Banogi mere ghar ki bahu.. ." his voice..so similar to Shravan.. It just made me startled! "Karogi shaadi.. Pushkar se... "

Wait what.. ."Pushkar?" something broke inside me...

"Haan.. ."

"But Shravan.. ." Somehow I managed to find my voice!

"He knows... "


Okay okay... How many chappals are coming...please please hold on a second...Everything you see, is not true... This is the same case here too! Just wait and watch aage kya hota hai...tell me which part you liked the most.. And which part you didn't! Though I have the idea... Which part you didn't... *sigh*



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Posted: 8 years ago
It's going awesome bit at the end marriage proposal for pushkar and Suman??? Pushkar and ramnath know everything 😕
Ohh I'm confused but I'm sure in next part it will be clear si now waiting for next part. All the best 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
yeh ho kiya rha h
suman...shaadi...pushkar...???????
but wait wait wait...may be this is test of sumo's love for shravan from ramnath



update soon I can't wait to know...what will happen
thanks for pm 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Saaanjhhh😡 i just want to kill you for this stupid cliff hanger but i will not...are bhai nhi to aage ki story kon likhega😆 THE MEAN ME😉 itna chotu chapter??😭 but filled with feelings emotions awesomeness and a stupid cliff hanger but you can be forgiven if you update soon...so please update soon like real soon take this as a dhamki or request your wish😉😛😆
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago

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