Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1

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wileysh

@wileysh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1161

Liked it very much. Thanks for updating. New side of shravan is very intriguing. Let's see what is un the store for us.

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Sumodreamer05

@Sumodreamer05

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1162

Shravan's answer 😉
Ab Shravan ki PA ho toh Shravan ke saath hi rahogi na sumo madam 😃
Sumo realising the difference between Shravan she fall in love with and the one who is there now..
Italian resrturant mai jakar sandwich maang rahi hai 😉
Shravan and his possesiveness 😃 😉 fired viraj because he was looking at sumo, obviously aisa toh hona hi tha 😃
Lift mai bhi romance 😉
After damaging that jerk aditya 😡 Shravan can't leave sumo alone..
Tashan e ishq is going on, dekhte hain kya hota hai..
Thanks for pm

Love
Shrujani

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Sunain

@Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1163

Cuddles!!!🤗

Wel before coming to the Upii lemme tell you something...

You knw wht..I read this chap of urs last Saturday late night...and scroll karty karty jab end par puhnchi and apna Name totally bold highlight mein dekh i was like...

Hiala meinay kya kiya ki Cuddles nay all of a sudden mere zikar kiya...so when i read the para i was on Cloud nine and a huge grin was playing on my lips knowing woh Lift wala part specially mere liaay tha😃

TBH while i was reading tht part i so was resembling it with "darker"...but i though Sunain tu kuch ziyada hi sooch rhi bas ap apnay dirty guttry brain ko sleep mode par wapis lagay day par whn i read ur 2nd last para i was like yahan hum jasaay shareef aur bhi hain bhai...Kya baat hai🤪😆

Chalo ji enough of my nonsense...coming to the upii...

Cuddles I so wanna hug you soo tightly ki kya bataon!

I so so so loved and enjoyed reading it..literally to infinity!❤️

So Shravan wants to keep her close enough to keep a constant check on her..to take care of her to stare at her lovingly...Awwwh...

Oye hoye...Us Viraj ki kya chuti ki Shravan nay...ek dum Mast!👏😃😆

Shraman's argument on her Saree was amazing!😳

Aur elevator scene ki tu poocho hi maat...Urr kar 7th asmaan tak puhanch gae mein

tu...❤️

Oh their sizzling moment was hell hell engaging and hell Beautifully penned!👏

Kaashh...ek aur DEMO mil jata

Mjhy tu Shravan ki outburst bhi bari hot lagi😳

Cuddles!...Cuddles!...Suno na...plz...bhalay intense Grey na milay oper oper ka Grey hi bana do Shravan ko...woh kya hi na meri andar ki Lalach khatam honay ka naam hi nhi laay rhi..please na...day do na thoray aur scenes...PLEASEEE...!!!

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Sunain

@Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1164

Opsi ghalti say do do post ho gaay!
Koi nhi I'll continue my rest comment here😉

Oh when Shavan replied "Mera sar Chalega"...I literally cracked into laughter🤣
Oh Cuddles You are Fantastic⭐️

Shravan's conditions his care his concern his love his possessiveness for her r justOverwhelming❤️

Oh Pushkar is a sweettheart!😳

Pishkar ki baat mein solid dum hai!
Now Shravan is no more a weak soul n woh apni Sumo ko bachanay k leay kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta ha!

2el aditiya k aath tu bilkul theek kiya Shravan nay but i hope i dosent back fire on himself kahein Sumo Shravan ko hi ghalat na smjhay😕

Oh Cuddles m totally flattered Dear literally i so love ur FF and m so Glad u make it to Three 5hreada!

Congos dear⭐️

N please meri req par guhar zarooar karna!😳😛

Love
Lalchi❤️

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1165

sanjhji please next part update kariye naa...Ab to new year bhi lag gya...kitna wait karaogi??

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1166

Originally posted by: sweksha
sanjhji please next part update kariye naa...Ab to new year bhi lag gya...kitna wait karaogi??

there is another thread, check here

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4821259

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1167

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
there is another thread, check here

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4821259

I know Yrr I am talking about chapter 25...actually I had commented here by mistake...

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1168

Originally posted by: sweksha
I know Yrr I am talking about chapter 25...actually I had commented here by mistake...

Oh sorry, I thought you didn't know about the other thread. I think you should comment on other thread now for the update...

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1169

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Oh sorry, I thought you didn't know about the other thread. I think you should comment on other thread now for the update...

okk dear I will cmnt on thread 3..and don't say sorry

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1170

Bro from yesterday I hve been reading destined only 😳 finally completed thread 1 & 2 n Ch 24 !

Thank gayi Mai .. But did not wanna stop .. loved ur story progression 😳

But ye Aditya ke saath mere personal dushmani hai .. kisi Bhi Angle aur FF mein muje woh pasand hi nahin 😕 hope Uski jaldi se story mein tikana mil jaaye 😛

Aur Badass Malhotra is back ❤️ to win his love back 😳 waiting to see what happens further in Destined 😛