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Posted: 8 years ago
Its been almost 20 days since you updated! Atleast give a short update!
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Sorry for being so late of course because I've been busy with exams, my exams are over though but Still could not complete the chapter, this is the half one! Will update the next part by tonight or tomorrow.

Chapter 22
(part 1)

She forgave me! She forgave me! I couldn't contain my happiness, yes she forgave me, for everything, for marring her forcefully, for ruining her relation with her nanu! Now that she willingly came to ask me for a dance, and then admitting she couldn't dance! I stifled a laugh! My Sumo had never failed to amuse me!

"Mujhe kisi aur ke sath dance nahin karna" it sounded like a song to me! I felt the same, I didn't want to leave her from my embrace but still "can't break the pattern no! " She smiled at me, sadness in her smile was so visible that my heart did a back flip, she wanted me! But to my dismay lights went off suddenly but for couple of minutes! I stood there, expecting her to return in my arms, but where was she!

"Sumo..." I turned around, took out my phone and dialled her number, my jacket's pocket vibrated! "Oh shit, usne to dance ke pehele mujhe rakhne ke liye di thi! She must be in washroom." I thought! I went to the ladies washroom and shouted from outside of the closed door, "Sumo tum andar ho... Sumo... " . An aged woman opened the door and said "Andar koi nahin hai..." looking at me weirdly she locked the door!

"Kahan ho tum Sumo!" I went again into the banquet hall, hoping to see her, but no! I called papa this time, " papa sumo wahan 2nd floor pe ayi hai kya! " All the elder people were there at the second floor, and we were at the 1st. "Nahin to.. Woh yahan kyun ayegi! " he paused "hua kya hai Shravan, kahan hai Suman? "

"Pata nahin papa,, maine sab jahga dhoonda, par woh kahin nahin mili!"

"Nahin mili matlab? " papa sounded angry "Tum ruko wohin main aur Nirmala aa rahe hain! "





It had been four hours, till Sumo's missing! "See, commissioner, it's my daughter in law I am talking about, Ramnath Malhotra's Daughter in law, I don't care about what your law says! I can't wait for 24 hours, do whatever you want, but want my daughter in law! " Papa snapped.

"Papa, Bhaiya,... " Pushkar hastened through the door! "Maa ka phone mila, sabse pehele jo bhi flight mili, aa gaya! Par yeh Sumo..." he paused looking at me " don't worry bhaiya woh mil jayegi! Please stay calm! "

"Pata nahin kis haal mein hogi woh! " my whole world was falling apart, "And these bloody hotel persons, what is it with them Papa, ek footage laane mein itni time! " Yes I demanded the CCTV footage of the party, I just wanted to see on my own eyes!




"Sir... " a person arrived with kamal there and gawked at me "Footage aa gaya sir! " Pushkar sprang from my side and put the CD in the CD player. There was nothing much to see, except for Alisha talking to Suman, "Yeh ladki Suman k sath kya kar rahi hai! " Maa pointed!

So this was the reason of Sumo's sudden change in her behavior, only God knew what she told to Sumo! There were glimpses of me and Sumo dancing, but then the screen went dark! "Yeh kya hua! " Papa shouted to that man,

"Sorry sir, technical problems ki wajah se current off ho gaya tha, aur kuch record nahin kar paye, pura system corrupt ho gaya hai sir! "

This was my limit, "Main nikal raha hoon! " I grabbed my car keys "Main aise yahan pe baith nahin sakta, pata nahin Sumo kahan hogi! Police ke bharose raha to.. Pata nahin... "

"Haan bhaiya., thik socha aapne, chaliye main bhi chalta hoon aapke sath! " Pushkar followed me outside to our garage!

"Bhaiya, aap chodiye main drive karta hoon! " he nodded at me, I barked a laugh, true, I couldn't even stand straight right now, as if earth beneath me shaking horribly just to engulf me into itself!

"Bhaiya baitho.. "

"Hmm"

We were about to exit through our gate, suddenly Pushkar halted "Bhaiya... "

"Sumo... " I gasp!





"Sumo.. Kahan thi tu... Hum itne pareshaan ho rahe the! Raat ke 3 baj rahe hai! Aur tu... " but Sumo didn't budge! I knelt down in front of her, caressing her face, "Sumo... Please kuch to bolo.. Kahan thi tum? Please.. Sumooo.. "

There something must had happened, if not, why would I feel uncanny! Suddenly Sumo jolted, as if she was sleeping, she looked at me, those eyes, the emotions in those eyes, I couldn't fathom, but it twisted my gut...

"Tum jante the? " she whispered!

"About what Sumo? " Somehow I managed to utter, but this was bad something terribly bad!

"Tum jante the? " this time she asked more louder "Aap sab jante the? "

"Kya jante the beta bolo beta? " Maa asked her.

" Unka accident.. " she mumbled!

"Accident? Kiska? "

"Mere Maa Papa ka! You all knew it right, from the very beginning right? That was why Maa offered me job.. " she howled!

"No beta main tab nahin janti thi! Ram ne baad mein tumhare bare mein pata lagaya to pata chala beta... " Maa tried to reason!

But I knew, the damage had been done, nothing left, not anymore, I had lost her!

"Suman beta, there was a reason beta, you need to calm down to understand, you don't know the whole story! " Papa pleaded to her but I could feel his eyes were on me!

"Story, whole story, I care a damn about that! I was living with bunch of cheaters!" she sobbed "I was in love with a lier! "

"Was.. " I looked at her, "Already a past Sumo? "

"Yes, past shravan, you just... Just... " she ran towards our room.

Again a bada wala sorry! Please have patience! And yes please let me know what do you feel about this!
Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Sorry for being so late of course because I've been busy with exams, my exams are over though but Still could not complete the chapter, this is the half one! Will update the next part tomor


It ok dear...
Take ur time... will wait for ur update 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shaggy8


It ok dear...
Take ur time... will wait for ur update 😊


Shagufta, already updated the part 1 please give it a look.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh



Shagufta, already updated the part 1 please give it a look.


Oh... silly me... 😆 ...
Anyways thanks for update dr...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res..
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OMG... yeh Kya hogaya...😔 ...
Jab sab theek hone jaraha tha...shraman were so happy...and suddenly this accident revelation... ... i think adiya must have revealed this 😡 ...
Toh sumo ke parents ka accident malhotras ke waje se hoaa??? ...
Poor sumo... she must be in pain... but she needs to listen to the full story and then come to any conclusion 😕 ...
I 'WAS' in love... 😔 ... so emotional part dr... very well written... 👏 ...
Eagerly waiting for next part... 😊
Edited by shaggy8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my...Wats the new twist???
Feeling very bad for ShraMan...
Poor shravan his happiness got ruined in one minute...
It's really curious to know abt Malhothras connection with sumo's parents accident...
Omg...can't see ShraMan separated...already they suffered a lot...
Waiting for next...
LavSriya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank god sumo is safe, i thought aditya kidnapped her!
What a twist at the end!!! Again sumo hates shravan!
Update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 😳
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Unres
Lovely update Saanjh... 👏
Shravan's condition after not being able to find Sumo was beautifully penned down dear..❤️
But!!
Sumo came back herself!😲
And Malhotra's knew about Sumo's parents death...!!
Kahi Sumo ke parents ka accident Malhotra's ke saath to nahi hua tha...Sumo's parents passed away n Malhotra's came to know about Sumo being their child afterwards n thats why they gave job to her!! 😲
Oh my my!!
Tab to ShraMan... 😲 😭
Hell exited for the next part dear...!!

Thanks for the pm n do cont soon 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Where did she go, nobody kidnapped her I thought someone kidnapped her, but why Malhotra's are behind her parents accident...it's interesting now, again Sumo leave him & go?

Update next part soon

Vinu

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