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Diya

@Sonai_02

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#821

Amazing update.

I'm sad that this story is ending soon.

I can predict a bit about the upcoming track.

Post soon dear

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Rawish

@Wish6999

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#822

Wow such a cute chapter. Loved how their little expressions are enough to show how much they love eachother; 😃 their longing for eachother, looking through the window, he coming fo the meals and all that. The puppy thing was such an aww too. But I really loved her assumptions about whats under the bed, that was totally a Sumo thing. Mmm...and her nausea and exhausion are telling me that you really are planning something😆.

Cant wait to read further, but dont want it to end yrr.😭

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#823

I just loved your version of Shravan very much.😳 The guy never fail to show his undie love for his Sumo. Each & every time he shows how much he loves, longing for her since she left the house. Sudden his visiting to Tiwari killa or PCT for lunch, breakfast or dinner. ☺️Sumo and her dearest hubby's shirt which become lullaby now a days she won't get sleep otherwise.

His gift to her small puppy. 😛Waiting for her next day to meet her.

Why she is not feeling hungry now a days. Nausea & all it indicating to something else😉 is she preggy but very soon this is the result of not taking precaution during their first intimate day.😆 Shravan's expression would be worth watching

Thanks for PM & sorry for late😉

Vinu❤️

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#824

Beautiful and Vivek kya cartoon hai 🤣 and his Mass Flirting 🤣 and then came Shravan and his 'Oh' 🤣 and Sumo is pregnant right and it's coming to an end 'sigh' what a fun ride it has been

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Endless_sky

@Endless_sky

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#825

aww that was a cute update. It is sad that this story is coming to an end. but good stories need to end on a good note and not be dragged on like our beloved shows :P.

Loved Viviek and his business strategies such a kid.

Shravan and Suman are cute even in keeping distance they are still together.

can't wait to read what shravan does for suman.

waiting to read more

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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#826

Dear Clara,
Your story is quite unique in its own wonderful way...I love reading them n as I hv already stated it many times, I really wait for ur updates...its sad that this story will b ending soon...but then I request you to give it a befitting end...one that only you can give..

rgds
Anuradha

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#827

I'll borrow that puppy face for a bit please.

Apologies!

I'm mighty late.

Sowwiii Lara!

Coming to the update, I can't tell you which bit I liked cause I loved the whole of it!

Special mention to the morning scene between the two lovelies!

😳

And the Doggo! Confession, I thought it was Shravan kissing her as she slept

But cute doggy works too!

Shravan's coaxing will reap fruits soon enough, I see Sumo's resolve cracking...

😃

It's ending

I knew this was coming but I still feel terrible...

End is inevitable and yet still I suck at good byes.

Before you pull curtains on this one, I'd like to tell you this story is very close to my heart. This is the only FF I've stuck by, I get bored easily. But your storytelling is so intriguing I can't help but stay glued! Kudos to you for weaving such a master piece!

And thank you for being such an inspiration!

Love and hugs,

Zoya!

Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

Unres

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Me 1st 😃

Congos! 🤗

Hawww such a beautiful chapter dedicated to me? So sweet of you😳
Thanks a ton ❤️
Beautiful writing as usual...

Aww... love you, dear!

Eww that creepy apron of Vivek🤣 and the caption 😆

Awww Shravan is major goal
Sumo is pregnant, isn't she? 😆

Let's wait and see. 😉

The story is coming to end? 😭

Yes, it is. It was bound to happen someday. 😭

But please keep writing on ShraMan *puppy face* 😔
May short things - os or stuff like that...

Thanks a lot for commenting, dear, and also for your lovely words.
Take care.❤️

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#829

Originally posted by: nuttynuts
Utter fluff! ☺️ The puppy, the secret lover, the mushy romance. Totally worth the wait!
What? BSS is ending soon? 😲

Thanks!😳

Yes, BSS is ending very soon.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: imshveta
Oh my god.

Do you know it's totally a fictional character that you are making us all fall in love with again and again.
They don't make men like that any more. For a while there I thought I was reading some novel where the Prince charming is trying to woo his princess while she looks down upon him from her window sighing with her hand on her heart while he is declaring his undying love for her.
Aww... that's a very dreamy, lovely way to explain the scene, dear. Now, I can't help but think of Shraman in a medieval set - dressed as prince and princess... (sighs)

I was definitely not expecting a puppy. Not that I had ghosts in mind but a certain Prince Charming

Oh you are going to make us wait before that meeting. Not fair

All good things to those who wait.🤗

Well if my comment so far couldn't tell you, it a was beautiful update.

Shveta

Thank you so much, Shveta!
Love you. ❤️

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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