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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update... Shraman are really cute...
thanks for the PM
Continue soon
Edited by Jerry2308 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hola! I hope you all are doing well. Finally, I was able to write something and update this story.

Part:3

They both dressed up for the day and went downstairs for breakfast. Everyone looked towards the stairs as they heard footsteps. They all smiled looking at the newly married couple.
"Yeh lo aa gayi humare ghar ki sabse nayi jodi" Kamini chachi exclaimed in her excited voice. They both wished everyone good morning before heading towards the dining table. Shravan took a seat while Suman started serving everyone. She wasn't doing it because she was now the bahu and all but because she was so used to doing all this at her own house and with pct she wasn't used to sitting still without helping around.
"Sumo tum kabhi bhi bina kaam kiye nahi reh sakti?" Shravan asked.

"I'm just helping. Tumhe kya problem hai haan?" She complained like a child.

"Arrey Suman puttar! Tera aaj iss ghar mein pehla din hai bahu ke roop mein. Tujhe yeh sab karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai. Tu aaram se baith kar naashta kar."

"Ji Lalaji!" With that she was about to take the seat next to Kamini chachi when Pushkar interrupted.

"Arrey bhabhi! Aap Shravan bhaiya ke saath baitho na" Pushkar teased Suman calling her bhabhi.

"Pushkar! You don't have to call me that. Tum mujhe Sumo hi bulao." She felt really weird being called bhabhi by Pushkar since they were good friends themselves and she didn't want any of the relationships to change just because her and Shravan were married now. She knew deep down that Shravan and her equation was going to change now that they were married but she didn't want to indulge in all the thinking process as of now. So she just ignored all her thoughts and sat down next to Shravan. Shravan was observing Suman all this while and his thoughts were not much different from Suman's. Pushkar nudged Shravan from under the table since he was sitting to his left. Shravan was getting annoyed by his constant nudges.

"Chhote kya kar raha hai? Stop bothering me!" Shravan asked

"Kuch nahi bhaiya! I just wanted to ask if you slept well last night." Pushkar whispered so that only Shravan could hear him but Sumo being Sumo was curious as to what were they talking about so she kept her ears open and was secretly listening. She blushed remembering the night's moments. Shravan's thoughts went back to the night and the way they had slept all snuggled up. Pushkar smirked seeing his brother and bhabhi so lost.

"Kahan kho gaye bhaiya?"

"Huhh? Wo kuch nahi! And yeah I slept very well last night." He replied eyeing Suman

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Later in their room, Shravan was working on some case and Suman was trying to find something from her suitcase. She looked fed up hunting for even the smallest in the big suitcases so she got up and stomped away stopping right at the foot of the Study table.

"Shravan tum yeh kaam baad mein karna. Pehle apne Qutub Minar size ke kapde hatao aur mere kapdon ki jagah banao closet mein." Shravan was a little taken back by her sudden demand.

"Log sahi hi kehte hain ke shaadi ke baad insaan biwi ka ghulam ban jata hai."

"Naatak mat karo aur meri help karo." With that he got up from the chair and inched closer to her.

"Sure my love!" He whispered in her ear making her shudder from the sudden proximity. Shravan had meant to say that in a fun way but the look in both of their eyes told a different story. Shravan couldn't stop himself from getting lost into her eyes that were staring right back at him. He didn't know what got into him when his one hand cupped her face and his gaze held hers. A knock on the door brought them back to reality and Sumo went to open the door. It was the househelp with two cups of coffee.

"Thank you kaka!" She smiled at the old man and walked over to the coffee table putting the coffee mugs down on it.

"Chalo jaldi se coffee pee kar fir closet set karte hain." She didn't want it to be awkward between them so she acted all normal.

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They were done with putting Sumo's clothes in the closet after almost an hour.

"Chalo ab mujhe araam se sab kuch mil jayega" She sighed happily while Shravan looked at her with an annoyed expression.

"Aur mere kapre dekho kaise squeeze kar diye hai tumne. Aadhe se zyada jagah toh tumne le li hai."

"Haan toh! Ab mere paas tumse zyada kapre hain to mai kya karoon"

"Acha acha theek hai! Oh hum shaam ko tumhare ghar bhi ja rahe hai na?"

"Haan! Pagphere ke liye! I'm so happy!" She exclaimed. Shravan decided to have some fun listening to that. He inched closer to her, thus pinning her to the closet.

"Pag phere se ya iss shadi se?Hmm?" He asked mischievously while pinning her hair behind her ear.

"Dono se!" It slipped her mouth.

"Vaise bhi kisi stranger se shaadi karne se acha toh hai apne best friend se hi karlo." She covered up while pushing him away and pretending to look for something in the closet.

"Toh mai tumhare liye sirf ek doosra option tha na?" He tried to ask nonchalantly.

"Han to aur kya. Mai toh jaise tumhari list mein 1st no. Par thi." Hurt flashed Shravan's face for a split second but he was quick to dismiss it.

"Bilkul bhi nhi! Mai kabhi soch bhi sakta tha ke mujhe tumse shaadi karni padegi. Hey bhagwan! Mujhe iss ladki ko din raat tolerate karni ki shakti dena."

"Aye Shravan ab itni bhi buri patni nahi banugi mai ke tumhe mujhe tolerate karna pade." She whacked him and he just laughed while walking back to the study table to finish off some work. Suman couldn't stop herself from turning around and looking at him. A sad smile formed on her face. Mai hi pagal hoon jo iss shadi ko serious le rahi hoon. Wo to bestfriend bestfriend khelne mein laga hai.' She murmured under her breath.
"Khadoos!!" She uttered before leaving the room and banging the door loudly.

"Abb ise kya hua?! Weird ladki!" He rolled his eyes
Edited by Sahiba_07 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Nice update!!
Aage kya chaltha hai yeh jaanne ke liye very excited hoon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
awesome...
loved it...
beautifully penned...
egearly waiting for next update...
thank you for the wonderful write up...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Wonderful update..
Hope shraman realize each other's feelings soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Wow!! Excited for next...please try to update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Such a beautiful update...creates a pleasant feeling inside me...
thank you very much...

Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Wow... such a cute update...!! 😊
And someone was saying it is not good enough. 😳

Loved it...

Pushkar's teasings 😆

Their banters are just ❤️

How i wish they were like this in the show also...

Pls update soon...

Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
sahiba after long time we got update...sorry but read out all chapter once again to to get track of the story😳
but it was a beautiful update...excited to see aage kya hota hai, plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
After so long dear...I went back to last chap to remind the story than I read 3rd part...I have almost forgotten...but nice update just 2 parts left plz update sooner...

Both love each other but can't confess their feelings to each other what stopping them...

Vinu

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