|| Shraman Five shot: Journey || Updated Part 4 on pg 13

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Hello my lovelies!! Remember me? 😡 😆. I was eid ka chand for so many days that I won't mind if some of you forgot me 😆 I had started writing a five shot on our Shraman a week ago but didn't feel like writing at all so wrote some today. Also NiMik being on a roll helped to make me feel a little at piece đŸ€Ș

Regarding the story, here they do not hate each other when they got married. There was no Aditya involved. Nanu being sick wanted to marry Sumo asap and that leads to Shraman marriage. They both have not acknowledged their feelings yet and are just best friends. Rest is all like in the show. 😛

Here it goes,

Suman and Shravan were escorted to their room by Preekar, Vandy and Varun. They had decorated the room with beautiful flowers all over and the bed had two hearts made of rose petals. Shravan and Suman looked at each other embarrassed.

Shravan: "Pushkar iss sab ki kya zarurat thi?"
Suman: "Haan! You guys didn't have to do all this."

Preeti: "Kyun nahi di? Aaj aapki suhagraat hai."

Suman glares at Preeti and sneaks a look at Shravan. They hadn't expected all this. This was going to be awkward, they by Advertise"> thought. Varun motioned Vandy, and Preekar to leave them alone.
"Chalo bhaiya abb hum chalte hain. I'm sure you can manage the rest." Pushkar winked at his big brother and bhabhi. Preeti chuckled and left the room followed by Pushkar.

Awkward silence filled the room. "Now what?" Suman blurted out. Shravan looked over at her and a smirk formed on his lips.

"Uhh Suhagraat of course!" He stated in a matter of fact tune. Suman gaped at him with an open mouth and hit him on his forearm.
"Ouch Sumo abhi se pati pe zulm start kar diya" He cried dramatically. She just rolled her eyes at him.
"Nautanki kahin ke! Koi pati vati nahi ho tum mere"
"Par wo to mai abb hoon. Tumhe iss fact ke saath jeena padega" He smirked.
"Acha toh phir mai bhi tumhari biwi hoon. Tumhari har cheez par mera poora hakk Hoga" Shravan's heart jumped listening to the word Hakk'. He ignored it like he always did.

"Sumo tum bachpan se meri best friend ho aur hakk to tumne tabse mujhpe jamaya hua hai" He laughed.

"Han to tum kaunsa kam ho. Jab chaahe mere room mein ghuse chale aate the. Wo kya tha?" He just smiled in return.

"Acha yeh sab chhodo. Abhi ke liye let's decide few things." He saw her fiddling with her dupatta and realized she might be uncomfortable in that heavy lehenga she was wearing.

"Haan tum kuch keh rahe the Shravan?" She found him looking at her.

"Woh main..! Tum pehle change karlo. Tumhe waise bhi itne heavy kapdon ki aadat nahi hain."

"Haan! Pata nahi kaise pehen lete hain aise kapde."
"Woh toh phir ladkiyan hoti hain na!" Suman couldn't believe he said that and on top of that he was laughing. How dare he!

"You are so dead Shravan Malhotra!" She said while moving closer to him. A devilish grin formed on her face making her brand new husband gulp in fear but to his surprise she moved past him toward the closet where her luggage was kept. He sighed in relief and sat on the bed removing his coat alongside. It was a long day for both of them. They had transitioned from best friends to being husband and wife but nothing seemed changed. They were still fighting like kids. He shook his head and at the same time othe bathroom door opened.
Suman stepped out of the bathroom wearing a red colored silk gown which was one of her friend's gift to her. She had planned to wear this to show Shravan how much of a girl she was. She smirked at the way his mouth hung open. Shravan was surprised to see the jhalli Sumo wearing a sexy gown. He knew Sumo wore this on purpose to prove him wrong and she had done it successfully. Just the that Sumo was his wife and right now stood in front of him wearing a nightie on their wedding night, was just too intimate for him. Suman had only meant to prove him wrong but the way he was looking at her was making her feel things she never felt before.

"Shravan?" She called out. That broke his reverie. "Hmm!" He replied casually.
"Tum pehle kuch bol rahe the." Saying so she came and sat beside him on the bed scattering the rose petals some more.
"Yeah I was saying that we should decide few things as we are going to live together from now onwards." Their eyes met and the gravity of the whole situation dawned on them. They were husband and wife and were going to spend their entire lives together. It was still hard for them to believe all this since they had never thought of each other as more than best friends.

"Shravan humari ho chuki hai" She said as if in disbelief with her eyes dramatically wide.
"Aur ab hum pati patni hain" he said in the same tone.
They turned to look at each other and fell backwards on the bed laughing hysterically. Once they were calm, Shravan started speaking.

"Bed ki right side meri aur left tumhari."
"Okaayy!! What about the cupboard? I'm girl I need more space but since you have more clothes than most of the girls do, we can share it equally" she chuckled looking at his expression.

"Shut up Sumo! Next rule: whoever leaves first for work gets to use the bathroom first".

"That's so obvious!" She said and he rolled his eyes.

"Next tum batao"

"No hitting me while sleeping lambu!"

"Ab meri height itni hai to ek do baar baj bhi jaaye to koi baat nahi. Agar zyada pareshani ho to par so jana!" He said with a straight face earning a whack from her.

"Kaise pati ho tum!? Akdoo kahin ke!"

"Haww tum mujhe aur kaisa pati expect kar rahi thi? Naughty girl!!" He teased her to no end making her fume.

"Apni gandi soch apne paas rakho aur next rule bolo."

"Hmm!" He took a pause for a second and continued "no waiting for me to eat if I get late from work."

"Ohh Pleasee! Main aur tumhari wait! Yeh waise bhi kabhi nhi hone wala."

"Tumse yahi umeed thi aur mujhse bhi yahi umeed rakhna."

"Haan haan! Ab next suno! Raat ko sote time mujhe room mein light ki aadat hai to ek light on rahegi"

"Theek hai! I don't have any problem with that." They for some while but couldn't come up with anything else at the moment.

"Aaj ke liye itne boht hai! Ab tum bhi change karlo aur chup chaap aakar so jao."

"Tumhe sharam nahi aati apne kuch ghante purane husband pe aise hukum chalate huye!?"

"Shraavaan!! Tum itna drama kyun karte ho?"

"Sab tumhara asar hai"

"Shut up! Ab jao mujhe sona hai"

With that he got up and went to change into his night clothes leaving Sumo to her thoughts.

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dhanyata thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yayyy !!!! So sweet of you !! Came up with this interesting plot.👏 No fights No Aditya, so with all amusement, can witness how they are transforming from besttt friends to hubby wifey . Eagerly waiting for the next shot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello
I am Cas
This was so hilarious 😆
And cute 😳
Just like how best friends turned spouses generally act!! 😛 😆
Dramatic Shravan and Fierce Sumo...
Waiting for the next chap!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Like the concept ! I miss their banter :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow...loved the update..cutest ShraMan..😊
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Very nice. So mych banter and positivity
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Cuteness personified #ShraMan...😳
Update soon...😊
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Awesome One... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Continue soon 😊
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Cute n fun ride all d way!
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Thanks! 😳

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