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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

Super good. Adya is really cute. Dad and his little girl relationship is beautifully penned. Keep writing😃

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its very nice... Plzz wite more

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awww... that was breathtaking bro
Hugs to u for this... 🤗
Written so beautifully... you really managed to capture their essence and i w as enthralled reading this.
Adorable Daddy Malhotra and his sexy Mummy Malhotra... damn... these words sound better than Mrs and Mr. Malhotra 😃
I am so desperate to watch something like that now!! 😭
By the way, the poem was in my English syllabus in std 12th and is one lovely poem 😳
Thank you for this... keep writing!! 👏

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Akriti12

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Posted: 8 years ago

hey dear, itz very very sweet..Perfect Family..

loved Adya & her fairy tale..

really liked authoritative sumo..

Poem is also very nice..😊

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

Its really amazing. ...adya is soo cute

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks :-)
will reply individually soon !

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pal655

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow. Amazing. Hmm well that's going to be the the future of Mr Malhotra.

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

unressed at page 1

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is so so real. Seen it happen so many times with so.many ppl. Loved lil Adya n ShraMan are always love. Beautiful

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

So cute adya I loved daddy & daughter bonding😛

Shravan & his stories😉

Shravan reliazed his mistakes ... thanks to Sumo for his realization

I likes daddy malhotra & mumma malhotra👏👏

I liked the poem so meaningful

Keep writing

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