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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very well written..👏

Thank You :)

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sptrno
Awww lovely beautiful adorable...

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: spshastr
aMAZING DEAR.. and so true a talk could fix it😊

Thank You!

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Vishakha2092
Mittu!!!...first and foremost...I bow down to this piece dear..
The emotions are wonderfully captured...
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Their situation is so simple yet so complex...
Both of their hearts long for each other..
They just have to talk with each other like mature people do...
But they cannot...they are still those teenagers...
Brilliant stuff dear...
Thanks for the PM!!

Thank You soo much😳

Means a lot!

Agreed! But lets hope these two become some mature adults now and get their brains back!

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: poppinss
Good one 😊

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: LovinglifeGB
They talk and clear things and then only all the rest will follow. Lovely os. Love how you have portrayed Shravans emotions

Agreed!

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anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

this os was so beautifully penned mitali...i loved it...it had so many emotions...the hapiness of being married, having babies, their marriage, at age of 80 ...u hv described their love n cute fight at each stage of life very beautifully ...
n at last the realization that only talk can solve ths...
the title really suited it... they r really like puzzle pieces ...

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.khaleesi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Really beautiful!!
Loved it ❤️

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

awesome

absolutely brilliant

totally loved it

superb

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Poulami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

WOWWW!!

The only word I can say i's just WOW!! 👏

Such a brilliant piece..

From Shravan's POV the way you have described their beautiful journey as newly married couple to a would be parents to a most happiest parents to the grandees, really praise worthy. 👏 👏

A complete journey as the happiest & most lovely couple of which anyone can dreamed of..

Really, a simple OS but it's so intense so lovely so mature... It's just One in all... 😳 😳

I wanna see these all but.. 😭 😭 😭 😭