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Shivangi

@Vishakha2092

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Mittu!!!...first and foremost...I bow down to this piece dear..

The emotions are wonderfully captured...

👏

Their situation is so simple yet so complex...

Both of their hearts long for each other..

They just have to talk with each other like mature people do...

But they cannot...they are still those teenagers...

Brilliant stuff dear...

Thanks for the PM!!

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LovinglifeGB

@LovinglifeGB

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

They talk and clear things and then only all the rest will follow. Lovely os. Love how you have portrayed Shravans emotions

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: orion23
Res!
Mittu!
I love you!
This was wow!
What imagination ya!
Cuteness personified!
Agreed, they are pieces of the same puzzle..
Write more often now!
🤗

Oreo🤗

Thank You so much!

I love you too .

You have 'My Story; coming up soon 😳

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Lovely piece of writing... A simple talk is a big task for them... But well.

Thank You :)

Don't worry,they will!

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: evaviego
AWESOME... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Thank You :)

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: smart1010
Heyyy!! are you Mitali?? Mitali styles from Twitter O Yeah Yeah I know, basically I know most of y'all (Imagine this line in Namik's accent you will defo blush) Obviously I know you are same Mitali. Coming back to this piece, it's beautifully written, they can live all these 'would be' IF they want to by putting aside their clashes and egos atleast for once and just talk by giving equal space to each other's POVs but things are not usually this simple after all But TIME IS NOW ONLY THEY CAN STILL FIX THIS MESS

only them who could now pick up those pieces and place it in its right position. The time was now,and a talk could fix it all.

Thankyou for writing this tiny picece.

Yes I am Mitali!

Yes mitalistyles from twitter and yes I have heard that from Namik for me :)

Thank You!

Agreed! Lets wait and see how these two idiots get back.

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: saras_7
Very nice.. Realistically & naturally captured - saw most of what you had mentioned among people as I grew up. This is very a easy puzzle to be solved by both. :)
Shravan is a true gentleman, & a wonderful husband. I believe his wife cannot stay apart from him even for a second:)

Thank You :)

I contradict you on the last part currently!

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Zenab78
They are parts of puzzle who complete each other
Mittu you have penned Shravan's dreams so beautifully
Every stage of life they will be together like a happy couple
Awesome 🤗

Lots of Love ❤️

Thank You so much :)

Loads of love!