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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: 0Bella0
Priii awsum work
Gaur se dekhiye is masoom chehre ke peeche chupe is wahshi darinde ko 🤣 🤣 my fav line

her confessions cute and hilarious

sannate ko cheerti hui sansani Phir degree dastak 🤣🤣

I can clearly imagine shravan's reaction after hearing her confessions 😳

Thank u so much pritha 😃
Wo seedhe show se tapi hui lines hain 🤣
Wanna continue??

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet
Amazeballss!!! I love it! Continue soon!! Cant wait to read more!

Thank u so much flibb!!!
Dont wait to read ...write something na??

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Pritha roy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Thank u so much pritha 😃
Wo seedhe show se tapi hui lines hain 🤣
Wanna continue??

Lol yeah I know still that's mah fav
I think I have some idea so I wanna continue but will update at night I hope it's okay 😳

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: 0Bella0
Lol yeah I know still that's mah fav
I think I have some idea so I wanna continue but will update at night I hope it's okay 😳

You can surely continue. I will book d second part in ur name then. Pri two shots ya four shot hain yeh? Accordingly we can book it.

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

@pri what a dhamakedhar start it was. Dhuye dhar dhamakedar... Aaj tak wahi feelings yaad aa gayi..🤣

Superb beginning ladki..maza aa gaya.. Can't wait to see how @0bella0 continues.

I m updating d index. You change d title Darling.

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Pritha roy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Sorry sorry big sorry I know I promised I will update at night but I slept curse my sleep not me sacchi meri koi galti nahi

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Thats when by God's grace electricity was back. She opened her eyes to find a pair of light brown eyes staring at her .

"SHRAVAN!!!!"

Darna zaruri hai part 2

Her breathing quickened seeing shravan this close to her there was just mere gap of few inches bw them. On the other hand shravan still hadn't recovered from the shock of her reaction. Her screaming literally made his ears bleed. He had to cover his ears to prevent his ears from further damage. Finally when he heard her calling him he recovered from shock.

"What the hell Sumo who shouts like that in the middle of the night" he shouted at her and Sumo being Sumo could she take it.

"And who the hell enters someone's house like a thief at this hour of night" She retorted back

"You're calling me a thief"

"Yes"

"Great here I came here to check on you and you're calling me a thief just great"

"You came here to check me and may I know why wanted to check me." She said raising he on eyebrow

"Wo... Pushkar told me that you are alone at home so I thought to check you "

"Why?????"

"What do you mean by why didn't I told you the reason. "

"Yeah you did but you could have called me why you came here????"

"I was worried for you "

"Really " she said again with an eyebrow raised and an amusing smile which looked like a smirk. Smirk seriously how dare she smirk at him. He needed to wipe that smirk from her face now and he knew very well how to do that

"So when I came here I heard you were confessing something." He saw her eyes widening and mouth took a perfect O shape with realisation ... he heard everything. Tables turned he thought.

"What... what was I confessing" she tried her luck for the last time but seems it wasn't in her favour. They were still standing close to each other and now suman got aware of it so she took a step backwards

"C'mon sumo don't you know something like you gave my harry potter book to kabadiwala" he took a step forward not wanting to increase the gap

"I did by mistakenly " she whined takin a step backward

"What about my fav black tee" again a step forward

"Tina's tommy torn it I didn't do anything sacchi" she said with a cute pout how he wish he could kiss that pout but he need to control atleast for now. And again a step backward

"That chipkali" a step forward

"You couldn't have accepted that you are scared of them if I hadn't did it" and again a step a step backward but she stopped realising that there was a pillar behind her.

"And now most important one what about the letter" he said caging her bw his arms

"Wo...I ...main... woh... actually... .AAHHH"

"WHAT THE"

Edited by 0Bella0 - 9 years ago

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Shivangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Priyam!!!...what an amazing part yaar!!!

When I first read the title...

I thought shayad actually horror story hogi...

But it is too much fun...

Eagerly waiting for the next part...

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: shalz_123
@pri what a dhamakedhar start it was. Dhuye dhar dhamakedar... Aaj tak wahi feelings yaad aa gayi..🤣
Superb beginning ladki..maza aa gaya.. Can't wait to see how @0bella0 continues.

I m updating d index. You change d title Darling.

Thank u so much shal 🤗
Haha mujhe bhi 😆
Me too. Bella update jaldi jaldi
Done. Should I mention index updated??

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: poppinss
Good one.

Thank u Radha 😛
Congrats you are a dazzler now 🥳

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Vishakha2092
Priyam!!!...what an amazing part yaar!!!
When I first read the title...
I thought shayad actually horror story hogi...
But it is too much fun...
Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Thank u so much Shivangi 🤗
Ohh I actually wanted to write a horror story but it turned to be a comedy 🤣
Me too ...waiting