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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Fabulous os dear...
Shra and his manipulation awesome..
Adi and his gunde.. 🤣
Superb

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Jannat

@Sana_Jannat

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

👏
lawyer mind started working 🥳 nice one

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Such a splendid OS !

Loved it to the core!

Loved the sassypants lawyer😳

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an_chau

@an_chau

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Wow Nith, aaj ekdum Fight Master Nith ke role mein! 😆
But fight sequence was mast...
And that last scene where she runs to the door 😳 It was so appropriate for where these two are right now in their relationship... You really write well!

PS: Apna Shravu kidnap hoke bhi apna sass nahin chhorta! That's our swagboy!

Edited by an_chau - 9 years ago

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Preeti.xo
Love this!
Very well written. Shravan manipulated them well!

Thank you Preeti 😊

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very good..

Thank you MysticRiver 😊

Love your username 😳

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya
AHA ... Surreal continue Nith ...😊

Thanks Wiccamaya 😊 Glad you liked it !

Not planning to continue, scared it will loose its charm 😉

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: LovinglifeGB
Awesome.. would like to this on the show...👍🏼

Thank you LovinglifeGB !

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Nimik
Did mot understand the last part very well!!😕
So Shravan was dreaming, was he?
Any ways, it was awesome👏👏

Thanks Shikha 😊

No Shravan was not dreaming. Sumo does come to the door. She was worried because he was late and once she sees that he is ok, she goes inside. You see, she doesn't want to step out the door without him since it is the vidayi 😊. But they both continue to hide behind their masks, one wears self respect and the other hatred.