ShraMan SS: Painful Revelations [A/N, Pg 29, Nov 1] (EDKV Continued)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Absolutely stunning!

Super loved it!!

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago

Quote

-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Thanks for making it a TS Anjali.. I had really wanted the OS to go on forever while reading it.

And thanks again for making this update super long

It's so beautiful I don't want it to end❤️

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

.SardiKiDhoop.

@.SardiKiDhoop.

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

I'm so, SO glad you decided to make this a three-shot! I really thing this is what we had all really wanted to happen - no one was satisfied with the way EDKV ended, and I'm so happy that you're gonna be writing this alternate ending b/c from the first two parts, it's been brilliant!

LOVE that little morning scene, I've always wanted a morning scene between them, where they wake up in each other's arms and I was so disappointed we didn't get one in the actual show. I'm really enjoying the way they're taking everything slowly, taking the time out to ask each other questions and listen and sort everything out, and of course, the fact that Shravan isn't going to forgive Ramnath THAT easily. Tbh, while I understand why the writers wanted to tie the show up with a happy ending and Shravan forgiving his dad...I did NOT appreciate the fact that despite everything, he's apparently still his "hero" and he still "loves him more than anyone else in the world" NO, NO, NO! Gaah! I'm still so annoyed with that, haha. But, anyway, I really enjoyed how Sumo confronted Ramnath in the kitchen - it was very reminiscent of the way Kamini confronted Ramnath in the actual show.

Love all the little cutesy, happy moments, too! ShraMan's conversation in the kitchen and then them on the couch and their first kiss *happy sigh* Everything was so well done and I can't wait to read more!

Quote

dhanyata

@dhanyata

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Oh my God !! 😊 No Words! No Words! No Words! No Words to explain how beauuttiifuull this was.

Simply adorable ! These two are just talking past, present and future the whole day. But how cute that was. you wrote it so well. I don't think, this adorable thing can be just brought in any screens too. the feeling we get only by reading a chapter, just beyond anything.

I used to feel lucky, that I came across a nice show like EDKV, Now feeling more good that you are the fan of the same show. Only then we got to see your good works. Keep it up.

Quote

an_chau

@an_chau

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Part 2 was awesome, Anjali... Fabulous writing as usual... your pieces are so worth looking forward to!

Quote

PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Anjali this was EVERYTHING I wanted to happen on the show. Sad we could not get that but I am glad you wrote this! As always a brilliant piece!!! Thank you for the PM!

P.S: Will you continue this? Or does it end here?

Quote

pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

awesome update

absolutely brilliant

continue soon

too good

Quote

astonmwritings

@astonmwritings

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik
Anjali this was EVERYTHING I wanted to happen on the show. Sad we could not get that but I am glad you wrote this! As always a brilliant piece!!! Thank you for the PM!

P.S: Will you continue this? Or does it end here?

Thanks Sara! <3 I meant to leave it as it is, but I am debating continuing it but I'll see if inspiration strikes and what I feel like when I wake up tomorrow hahaha.

Quote

astonmwritings

@astonmwritings

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: .SardiKiDhoop.
I'm so, SO glad you decided to make this a three-shot! I really thing this is what we had all really wanted to happen - no one was satisfied with the way EDKV ended, and I'm so happy that you're gonna be writing this alternate ending b/c from the first two parts, it's been brilliant!

LOVE that little morning scene, I've always wanted a morning scene between them, where they wake up in each other's arms and I was so disappointed we didn't get one in the actual show. I'm really enjoying the way they're taking everything slowly, taking the time out to ask each other questions and listen and sort everything out, and of course, the fact that Shravan isn't going to forgive Ramnath THAT easily. Tbh, while I understand why the writers wanted to tie the show up with a happy ending and Shravan forgiving his dad...I did NOT appreciate the fact that despite everything, he's apparently still his "hero" and he still "loves him more than anyone else in the world" NO, NO, NO! Gaah! I'm still so annoyed with that, haha. But, anyway, I really enjoyed how Sumo confronted Ramnath in the kitchen - it was very reminiscent of the way Kamini confronted Ramnath in the actual show.

Love all the little cutesy, happy moments, too! ShraMan's conversation in the kitchen and then them on the couch and their first kiss *happy sigh* Everything was so well done and I can't wait to read more!

LOL, it was meant to be a two-shot, but I am debating on turning it into three now. Awww, thanks girl, you're so sweet! <3

Omg yasss, I was waiting for cute ShraMan scenes like that because of their comfort level and personalities which differed so much from typical shows, their "cute/intimate" scenes would have been sooo good! LOL, Ramnath needs a redemption arc in my opinion and he needs to suffer a little + think he's losing his son to knock him ego & misogynist attitude down.

Aw thanks againnn!

Quote

astonmwritings

@astonmwritings

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
awesome update
absolutely brilliant
continue soon
too good

Thanks!

Originally posted by: an_chau

Part 2 was awesome, Anjali... Fabulous writing as usual... your pieces are so worth looking forward to!

Aw, thank you, you're so sweet!

Originally posted by: kennashreign
This was so good. Full of all the mush and fluff. Great going, Anjali!

Thanks girl! I am glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: kanash

Wow..simply wow...could visualize the entire scene...

Loved it..

Thank youuu!

Originally posted by: Jasleen
Beautiful part Anjali! I love how you addressed all the lingering issues Shraman had, thank you for a great ending!!!

Ah, thank you so much!

Originally posted by: -Shilpaa-
Thanks for making it a TS Anjali.. I had really wanted the OS to go on forever while reading it.
And thanks again for making this update super long
It's so beautiful I don't want it to end❤️

Awww, thank you so much, I am glad you like it!

Originally posted by: dhanyata
Oh my God !! 😊 No Words! No Words! No Words! No Words to explain how beauuttiifuull this was.
Simply adorable ! These two are just talking past, present and future the whole day. But how cute that was. you wrote it so well. I don't think, this adorable thing can be just brought in any screens too. the feeling we get only by reading a chapter, just beyond anything.

I used to feel lucky, that I came across a nice show like EDKV, Now feeling more good that you are the fan of the same show. Only then we got to see your good works. Keep it up.

Aw, you're sooo sweet! Your comment put a smile on my face. Thank you so much and I am so glad that you liked it!