ShraMan SS: Painful Revelations [A/N, Pg 29, Nov 1] (EDKV Continued)

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Aww this was so adorable man!!

I could so imagine that conversation abt the last 10 years...How I so so wish it happened in the show too.

Thnx for writing it dr...made my day :)

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Izza

@memories_im

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Loved it!
Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 43

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

This was such a treat to read after the shitty ending to the show! Sumo didn't even say I love you to Shravan!

Anyways, coming to the update..

I absolutely love love love everything about this update! ❤️

The way Shravan apologized and Sumo realized that she was at fault too. It was so nice to read the way they got close and sorted out their issues. ❤️

Shravan will take time to sort out stuff with his dad but with Sumo by his side, he will be so strong. 😃

And after talking about their childhood, the way they got intimate was so real.

"If you had read my letter all those years ago we could have been doing that for ten years." He teased with a smile, his smile only grew wider as her face flushed.

"If only we hadn't been so stupid." She sighed pulling at the hair at the back of his neck gently.

"I am going to kiss you again." He murmured, his eyes flickering between her swollen lips and wide eyes.

"Are you going to announce it every time?" She asked, amusement dripping in her voice.

"Depends on if you're okay with just being ambushed with kisses." He murmured.

"I think that should be just fine." She blushed as their lips met again, this time they moved together more surely.

^This was so so cute! 😳

Loved it to the core. ❤️ Please can we get one last chapter eh? 😳

~ Mrina <3

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Anjaaaliii!!

You beauty😳

This part was so beautiful,left me out of words.

Emotions can be best described by you!

Starting with Sumo,you got me.Yes Sumo had played a major role in making what Shravan was today and her pain and guilt was needed since it was not shown due to time problem in the actual show and you did perfection to it. It was as if I was living Sumo.

Then came Shravan's pain and mind you,it was as beautiful as Sumo's pain.So perfectly written and again this time I lived him.

Even Ramnaths emotions were plain but one could feel them very well and also I loved how Sumo did put some sense into Ramnath and did not rush into uniting them in fact gave some much needed Shravan too heal.

The litlle moments of cuteness you gave us were way to cuts and had me smiling.Be it Sumo admiring Shravn,getting back into the same position,Shravan holding onto her or their kitchen moment.

And as I always have said I love how reasticlaly you bring out the kiss through your writings,not over the top unlike in novels etc.

You did magic like always.

Keep writing and keep doing this to us :)

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trayee biswas

@trayee

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

anjali...yaar...cant find any specific wrd to praise u...truly spellbounded me..everytime whn i see ur update my smile gets widen..i feel really bliss to hav u in thus forum...u made our shraman more than alive now..wht cv's faild to do..thanks a lot..keep writing dear.. 👏

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Mehwish

@smart1010

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

It's bloody beautiful!! This is like I wanted my show to be. Sigh!!! Sometimes things NEVER turn out like you always want. Khair!! It's different type of ease and power in your writing, I missed Sumo's side of apologies tbvh cuz CVs didn't allow her to do that. ThanQ for writing this chapter. No regrets but a certain type of satisfaction for a Sumo's girl.

On screen ShraMan story will always be little flawed and unfinished but here IT IS NOT.

Keep writing!!

God Bless you more (ameen)

Mahwish!!!!