ShraMan SS: Painful Revelations [A/N, Pg 29, Nov 1] (EDKV Continued)

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Fantastic part!!

Shravan-Daboo parts wer damn cute!!

So shravan is goin to talk to his mother finally!!

And d Shraman parts wer too good☺️

Waiting for the nxt part😳

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netflicks

@netflicks

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#132

you definitely covered everything we were waiting to see on the show...are you interested to be the writer for EDKV2??!!!

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

I enjoyed this part...!!!

Cute Daboo & his Shravan jiju, his teachings about rubik cube... Sumo thinking herself how Shravan will take care of their children... The way she was staring him... Nanu & Maasi face smile grew when they realized Sumo was lost on Shravan...!!! 🤪

Papa & son's conversation...

Their first kiss & romance in the kitchen... OMG they turned kitchen in to bedroom... That is also infront of chachi... If chachi would have seen... She would have told puttarji romance woh bhi kitchen mein... Kuch bhi aanvyi...🤣

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Thank for update

Waiting for next part...

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divya_j

@divya_j

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Foremost...am so happy this has become an SS, coz the plot always had that potential, and each chapter just kept getting better, emotional sumo, rattled shravan...guilty ramnath...even kamini chachi..are all so well etched characters...going thru their own turmoils...and your writing just does all justice to the ending that never happened...

I have always felt that writing helps to understand characters, their different facets and dimensions better...apart from a whole possible places that you can take a story to...superbbb...am so looking forward to the next update!!!👍🏼⭐️

Now, I know this is gutter-mind working...but is this going where I think this is going...☺️😉...u have aced love scenes in all your other ShraMan works so..theres no doubt on what can go into this...!!!...am sooo impatient for the next one...

loved the icing scene, dont even want to begin describing...the imagination it invokes when I think of even something remotely similar being scripted on Nimik...

please keep it going...this SS is awesome..

thanks for the pm😊

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an_chau

@an_chau

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Anjali... may you always, Always, ALWAYS write such super long, and achingly endearing pieces! Each update brings something new and infinitely more special... That Dabboo-Shravan chat was superbly penned! Who would ever ask Shravan for love advice - but Dabboo!!! 😆

I love the way the ShraMan relationship is progressing... them taking the time to cherish every aspect of their newfound intimacy was lovely!

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

You fulfilled one more wish of mine Shravan finding Memory Box otherwise in show it remained just that how I wish they would shown it would have loved to watch Shravan's reaction to it would have been so good and Namik would have done such a good job sigh never mind wishful thinking but coming to the update loved it last bit was hot

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

amazing update

absolutely brilliant

continue soon

superb

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

OH EM GEEE.

The part with Sumo being lost watching Shravan interact with Dabboo & imagining their own children was so cute. I wanted to see that so bad, Sumo just being lost in Shravan and everyone picking up on it.

LOL "Manju Mami's absence was probably the reason for Naanu's recovery". I CAN IMAGINE SHRAVAN BEING THAT SASSY.

Dabboo and Shravan having a talk, man-to-man, SO EFFIN CUTE. Sumo would so tease them about it too.

AHHH THE MEMORY BOX THE MEMORY BOX. I am so glad that she gives it to him and looks through it with him, and all the little details YOU ARE KILLING ME ANJ

That sexual tension though, I like that they don't jump head first into sex but I love that they don't shy away either!

AWW SUMO PLAYING WITH HIS HAIR BECAUSE HIS HEAD IS IN HER LAP MY FEELS

I like that Shravan gives Ramnath attitude!

THE KITCHEN SCENE WHY IS IT SO CUTE AND HOT AT THE SAME TIME

I CAN IMAGINE SHRAVAN KA CHEHRA BEING ALL SMIRKY AS HE MESSES WITH SUMO WHILE CHACHI IS IN THE KITCHEN AHHH

THE TENSION OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Anjali 🤗
Pta hi nhi lga kab end ho gya... 😆
Awesome update dear... 👏

Daboo and shra with Rubik cube and sumo lost in shra...
Daboo and his love interest..aww so cute and funny.
Finally memory box unlocked and ShraMan scene so good... ❤️

Cake preparation aww maza aa gya..naughty and romantic ShraMan..
Kamini ka bhi dar nhi... 😆

Just love it... ❤️
Thnx for pm dear 🤗