ShraMan SS - A New Beginning| Ch 5 - Pg 24 (Completed)

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shaggy8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

All the 5 chapters r awesome dr... loved it... and thanx fr pm

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anonymousanju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

when I read above completed, my heart sank :( ...why it ended...I didn't want it to end but then I thought everything's to be end ...loved all chapters n the last one was so beautiful... loved the way u started it...shraman cute nok jhok ...so cute n lovely... n then fb ...ramu is such an evil ass...destroyed his son's life... n how shravu stood up for sumo, loved it... n then u made kamu a good lady :-p sai hai...how she n lalaji questioned ramu n shravu's outburst on this whoa...amazing...n then their marriage with all rituals n happily ever after wat else as a freaking, die hard fan would I want..n then how lalaji n kamu revealed nirmu ka truth... n shravu decided to move with sumo...good...thanks for pm's Kenny...loved this ss ...will wait for ur next pm...pls continue writing on shraman...:)

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

wow

beautiful ending

to a beautiful story

thank you for writing it

superb

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Meera

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Amazing chapter... shraman's cute nok jhok... shravan realised that nirmala Nd sumo are always there... beautifully written

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vimikrao

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Nice SS...

All the chap r sooper...😆

Beautiful penned... 👏

Only romance was missing... If u have written little bit romance sone pe suhaga hota... 😭

Anyway keep writing⭐️

Send PM in future if u write something about Shraman...

Edited by vimikrao - 9 years ago

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_anukulgr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

amazing chappy..👏.read the full story once again...this is one of the best SSs i hav read on this forum🤗...do come up with more aur uus waqt pm kar dena😳luv u dea..!!!😊

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kennashreign

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: shaggy8
All the 5 chapters r awesome dr... loved it... and thanx fr pm

Thanks😊

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kennashreign

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
This was love :)

Thanks😊

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kennashreign

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: anonymousanju
when I read above completed, my heart sank :( ...why it ended...I didn't want it to end but then I thought everything's to be end ...loved all chapters n the last one was so beautiful... loved the way u started it...shraman cute nok jhok ...so cute n lovely... n then fb ...ramu is such an evil ass...destroyed his son's life... n how shravu stood up for sumo, loved it... n then u made kamu a good lady :-p sai hai...how she n lalaji questioned ramu n shravu's outburst on this whoa...amazing...n then their marriage with all rituals n happily ever after wat else as a freaking, die hard fan would I want..n then how lalaji n kamu revealed nirmu ka truth... n shravu decided to move with sumo...good...thanks for pm's Kenny...loved this ss ...will wait for ur next pm...pls continue writing on shraman...:)

Thanks a lot! 😃

I really appreciate your comments. I am glad you liked the story and how it ended. I had to end it someday. i thought of this as a good place to end. 😊