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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya Zoya ... Bahut hi Achha likha hai ... Umda Ek dum se ... Dil se Dil tak pahunchne waala ... Kya alfaaz leke aayi ho Tum ... Wah-2 ... Ek Bahut hi manjhe huye likhaari Ke jaise ... Hehehehe sorry but Mujhe aaj aise hi Tareef karne ka Mann ho raha tha ... Kam se kam Angreji istemaal karne ka Mann ho raha tha ... Dil se taareef aise hi hoti hai ... Shukar hai Shravan ne apni galti maan li and usse bhi Shukar hai Suman ne usse maaf kar diya ... Shukariya dost ... Jeete rahiye aur aise update dete rahiye ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Marvellous. With the serial not being aired, your writing is a breath of fresh air to keep hope soaring.
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing ... ye dil maange more...😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved it .
This was beautiful!
True that if you love someone, you forgive them.
And its not like Shravan wasn't guilty.
I loved Sumo's immense confidence in him.
Morning made perfect <3
-God bless
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoyaaa!!!!...
It's brilliant girl!!!
Loved it to the core...
When you love someone so much...you forgive them...
Amazingly penned!!!!...that haq Wala dialogue was the cherry on the cake for me...
👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Resss
Unress
Sorry sorry sorry I forgot to unress ab bacchi ki jaan logi kya 🤣
ZOYA meri taraf se ye chocolate box just for you
Trust me you have no idea moi kab se is tarah k kisi scene ka wait karing but cvs ne mere wait ki l laga di

Sumo's trust on shravan was something I was dying to see but mujhe wo nxt birth me nhi nhi dene wale but u gave me tysm sis
Big hugs to you [>:D <]
And shravan's repentance 😳
then after that ☺️
Edited by 0Bella0 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely... keep it coming dear🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mujhe tho serial dekhne ka anubhav aaya!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
-------
Unress
Me first 🤪

Mubarak ho aapko! You stood first
Vikku muahhh for this update
Le damon wali kissy


Aye haye!
Maar hi daloge!
Damon pappi subha subha!
You made my day!

No episode , boring life n bang!!! Here comes your update
Peediton ki peeda samjhna humara farz hai😆

Shravu's fear of losing her , his guilt is beautifully penned!!
I always feel the dept of his fear is the insainty of his love! Junoon

And that champi scene
I know right!
# KarneDoAchaLagtaHai ye nya hashtag 🤣
Hahaha! Love it🤣
Aditya ko chamat pdi 🤪
Uski kismat mai maar khana hi likha hai😆

She trusted him so much .
How I wish sumo reacts the same way after the relevation !!
Me too

Dialogues apke hamesha hi mashallah hote hain!!!

Mai ab aur tumhari dost banke nahi jeena chahti. Biwi hoon tumhari. Haq chahiye mujhe apne
Ye hui na baat 🤪
Yey😎

Dhamakedar update !!!
Loved it!!
Thank u so much for writing this
Hum masoomo ko kuch pal ki khushi dene ke liye shukriya *dramatically wipes tears*


@Bold
Thank you so much Prii!
Itna masst comment, dil khush kar diya🤗
*Dramaticall gives rumaal*
I love you!
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Wowww veri nice
Plss update more

Thank you so much Piya!
I will ...
😊

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