Damaged- A FF on Sharaman Part 62 (Pg 150)

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Wiccamaya

@Wiccamaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#881

Part 59

So sweet!! Sumo acting all wife-ly(is that a word?)😳

Caring for her Shravu and pretending to be all nonchalant.

And Bae ki gaadi kaha chal di ... Finalisation of the last Will and Testament of Shravan Malhotra..eh??😕😎

Preeti, you jealous shrew... Bin pende ka lots... Thali ki ugly baingan!!😡🤢 Stop nosing into matters your pea-sized brain isn't accustomed enough to understand. I pity Pushkie now!!

She ruined everything man!!

Suman is all gutted... The 'Sab kuch' completely makes her unhinged!😭

Poor bae!! All his efforts down the drain.

Loved how he bajaofied airhead's band.

She was going to stay. Sigh!!

Shravan is so worried for her. Who will he leave her to??? Toh marna cancel??

So its the last night... Day 6 simply slipped out of their hands.

And all he wants is one gesture from her side and he will stay. Phir wahi manzar pe le aai zindagi.

P.S. loved the way you crafted the way to climax. So the crescendo is all built!! Can't wait for the next update.

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First of all take good care of yourself... its chilly now.

aankhon mein jal rahaa hai kyuun bujhataa nahin dhuuan
uthataa to hai ghataa saa barasataa nahin dhuaan

chuulhaa nahin jalaaye yaa basti hi jal ga_ii
kuchh roz ho gaye hain ab uThataa nahin dhuaan

aankhon se ponchane se lagaa aanch kaa pataa
yuun cheharaa pher lene se chhupata nahin dhuaan

aankhon se aansuon ke maraasim puraane hain
mehamaan ye ghar men aayen to chubhataa nahin dhuaan

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#882

After reading last two chapters, i was literally😭 Kab sab thik hoga! The way shravu reacted, it was 👏. preety's dimag has lost in gutter i guess! 🤢 Perfect bahu of kamini chachi! And lastly you, awesome writing!🤗 Perfect blend of every emotions! Already waiting for the next one! Thank you for the pm. ❤️

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Amisha.r

@Amisha.r

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Posted: 8 years ago

#883

Kasam se aaj jee kar rha is dumbo preeti la khoon kr doo (phir case shravan larh lega 🤣 )
Jis ki khushi k liye sumo shravan se door hue wahi aaj in ki dushman bani phir rhi h selfish
Wiccamaya is ff me pushkar ka is dumbo se divorce karwa do plzzz

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Joyness

@Joyness

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Posted: 8 years ago

#884

Preeti selfish girl...loved shravan gsve her back...hope shraman are able to stsy together and sumo accepts that she cannot leave shravan

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#885

awesome update

absolutely loved it

continue soon

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Nileshni Devi

@nileshni679

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Posted: 8 years ago

#886

Lovely and sad update all Shravan's attempts gone down the drain thanks to preeti😡. Only one night is left and what will the 2 of them do its becoming a mystery.