Teri Orr -A ShraMan FF (next part coming soon) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Nicky ..it's beautiful..
Shra wants to talk to her and buy necklace coz she wants..so cute..
Waiting for ShraMan first meeting..
Thnx for pm buddy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Nicky ..it's beautiful..
Shra wants to talk to her and buy necklace coz she wants..so cute..
Waiting for ShraMan first meeting..
Thnx for pm buddy...

thank you so much much 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
oh my god
I am absolutely loving this story
I need more of it
cannot wait for shraman meet
superb
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

oh my god
I am absolutely loving this story

I need more of it
cannot wait for shraman meet
superb
continue soon

thanks dear ... Update it tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Well done 👏it's awesome 😉
But I miss 'g' 😭but koina Mene suman ki sari conversation g laga k hi padi😆
Now in today update they meet first time and I'm sure meeting k baad shrvn jada sochega 😆vese bhi ye to hona hi h kyuki mil Kate h jo bane ek Duje Ke Vaaste 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Well done 👏it's awesome😉

But I miss 'g' 😭but koina Mene suman ki sari conversation g laga k hi padi😆
Now in today update they meet first time and I'm sure meeting k baad shrvn jada sochega 😆vese bhi ye to hona hi h kyuki mil Kate h jo bane ek Duje Ke Vaaste🤗

aww thanks dear ... Sorry woh some people said don't use g so much so in this update I avoided it ... Yes they are meant to be Ek duje Ke Vaaste so Milna tou hai hi ShraMan ko but you have to wait n watch how it will happen... Usse pehle thoda masala tou banta hai 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

aww thanks dear ... Sorry woh some people said don't use g so much so in this update I avoided it ... Yes they are meant to be Ek duje Ke Vaaste so Milna tou hai hi ShraMan ko but you have to wait n watch how it will happen... Usse pehle thoda masala tou banta hai 😊

Of course masala to banta hi h vese bhi bina masala k majja nhi aata and it's ok g hm khud se jor denge h na ji to change ji tussi fatafat update karte rhi ji hm feedback dete rahega ji changa ji😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Teri orre

Part 3

Shravan and Pushkar both reached at airport ... Pushkar was waiting for Preeti ... But she didn't come yet.

Shravan-ok thank you buddy ...

Pushkar - ok matlab ????

Shravan - matlab mujhe drop karne ke liye... Will c u after 1 week and he hugged him.(he totally forgot Ke usne Pushkar ko bola tha Ke Preeti is also coming to the airport)

Pushkar - Lekin tu tou keh raha tha ke Preeti Bhi aane waali hai airport ... !!!!!

Shravan laughed - sorry Pushkar woh tou tu senti ho raha tha iss liye Tera dhyan divert karne ke liye bola tha...

Pushkar gave him an angry look- Shravan tu mere sentiments ke sath khel raha tha... Mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi yaar... Mera best buddy ho ke tu mere sath aisa mazak karega ... Maine kabhi yeh sapne mein Bhi nahi socha tha... Jao mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni or main tujhe lene Bhi nahi aaonga jab tum vapis aaoge... Ja raha hoon main bye...

He was about to go but Shravan stopped him and- arre yaar Kya hai Pushkar tu Bhi Na ... Achha baba sorry ... Lekin ye lo Preeti ka driving licence ... woh meri gadi mein girr giya tha jab hum log kall shopping ko Gaye the... Tum jaate-2 de jaana and usi bahane tum usko mil Bhi Lena ... And he raised his eyebrows ...

Pushkar become happy and he hugged Rey ...

Pushkar - thank you my dear ... Tu na mera true friend hai... Love u yaar and I will miss u too... Jaldi-2 aana theek hai ...

Shravan - Pushkar tu Bhi na ... Sach mein majnu ko Bhi maat de de ... Preeti ke naam pe na kuchh Bhi karva lo tumse...

Pushkar - yeh Pyar hai mere dost jab ho jaata hai na ... Bas kuchh Bhi karvata hai insaan se... Jab tumko hoga na tab samjhoge tum...

Shravan - woh- woh ... Plz-2 Pushkar tu firr matt shuru ho jaana ... Yeh Pyar vyar jo Bhi hai na tu apne pass hi rakh... Mujhe na isse thoda door hi rehne do... Plz

Pushkar - thank God tumne thoda door hi bola hai ... Jiyada nahi... Matlab thoda door se tou Pyar hone ke chances jiyada hain...

Shravan- oh Plz ... Never ever Pushkar ... Bye ja raha hoon main ... See u next week and take care :)

Pushkar - bye and take care u too:)

Both hugged each other again and both went to their own ways.

Shravan done the check in and he was waiting for the boarding but it was almost 1 hour for his flight to go...

Usko dhyan aata hai ke usko call karke Suman ko batana tha and poochhna Bhi tha ke usko pick karne kaun aane waala hai ... So he called her...

At the same time at Chandigarh Suman was busy in her shopping and she was at her boutique and was trying her wedding lehnga and her phone rang. She picked up her phone...but she doesn't know that it was Shravan's phone...and she starts speaking in punjabi.

Suman - hello g ... Kaun Bol riha?(kaun Bol raha hai in Hindi )

Shravan - is it Suman ... Ji main Shravan baat kar raha hoon ...

Suman - oh rabb g Tusin... I mean to say aap Bol rahe ho g... Sorry hai g woh bina dekhe phone utha liya tha ...Kaise ho aap? Chal pade wahan se? Kitne vaje pahunchoge g? Flight on time hai na g?

Shravan was smiling - Suman ... I m fine... Abhi Mumbai airport pe hoon and flight on time hi hai abhi half an hour mein chalegi... Or kuchh poochhna hai aapne g ?

Suman - na g or tou kuchh nahi poochhna... Matlab aadhe ghante takk flight chalegi or 2 ghante ki flight ka time laga Lao g aap ... Matlab aap dhai ghante mein Chandigarh pahunch jaoge... Theek hai ... Aap na aisa karo mujhe na apni fresh photo send kardo abhi...

Shravan - what??? Meri fresh photo!!!!kion? Uska tum Kya karogi?

Suman- varmala dalongi... Arre yaar aap Bhi na Bahut swal poochhte ho... Ab aapko airport lene aana hai tou appko pehchanege kaise...

Shravan laughed- oh ok ... Tou tum lene aa rahi ho mujhe airport pe... Tumhari tou shadi hai na ... Tum kaise aaogi?

Suman - nahi main nahi aa rahi g... Or agar main nahi aaongi tou koi or tou aayega na g... So abhi fresh photo kheencho aap and send me g... Waise Ek baat poochhon g aap se?

Shravan-haan poochho...

Suman - aapke phone mein camera tou hai na g?

Shravan -excuse me mere paas I- phone 6s hai ok...

Suman - haye sachin... Firr tou g same pinch ho giya g... Kaun se color ka hai... Mera tou g golden colour ka hai...

Shravan hits his forehead and thinks - hey Bhagwan ... Kahan panga le liya Maine ...

On the other side Suman - hello g Shravan g aap ho Kya wahan... Hmm mujhe lagta hai phone ka color yaad nahi hai iss liye kaan se utaar ke color check kar rahe honge... Arre Shravan rehne dijiye aap aa tou rahe hi ho yahan main tab dekh loongi...

Shravan oh so sweet of u Suman ... Thank you haan... Ok chalo bye milte hain firr...

Suman - haanji-2 milte hain g... Perr woh apni fresh photo bhej dena g Plz ... Ok g bye-2 g... Happy and safe journey g...

Shravan - Ji theek hai g abhi bhejta hoon g... Bye-2 and thank you ...

Both hang up the phone...

Shravan to himself- chal beta Shravan apni fresh photo kheencho and bhej do Suman g ko and he clicked his photo and then send to Suman ...

Suman got Shravan's photo and send him a text massage that... You have a beautiful smile and eyes :)

Shravan was stunned to c Suman's massage and he replied just- thanks :)

Shravan was thinking- yeh Ladki Bhi na ekdum se pagal hai... She likes my smile and eyes... Ab takk logon ne meri smile ke liye mujhe compliments diye hai .. Lekin kabhi Bhi kisi ne meri eyes ke baare mein kabhi kuchh nahi kaha...khaas karke kisi Ladki ne tou bilkul Bhi nahi... Suman is first girl who said this to me... Then he opened the same photo and try to find out about what she said and then he smiled :)

After two and half hour Shravan's flight reached at Chandigarh airport ... He collected his luggages and came out from the airport.

Shravan was thinking- hmm so finally you reached Chandigarh Shravan ... Suman's city... But suddenly- hey wait-2 Shravan tu itna khush kion hai or yeh Kya Suman ka city .. Man tu yahan pe apne mom dad se Milne aaya hai... Or Suman ki shadi hone waali hai... So just control...

Again Shravan to himself- so shadi hone waali hai tou Kya ... Main Bhi tou usi ki shadi attend karne aaya hoon na...

Then he looks here and there to try to find ke usko lene koi aaya hai ya nahi... Then suddenly he saw a girl in a white top and blue jeans ... She was looking so beautiful and sweet but what is this she was waving her hands towards Him and she called his name...Shravan ..

She came close to him- hello g Shravan Welcome to Chandigarh ... So finally we met... Aap na bilkul hi apni photo ke jaise ho... Wohi smile and wohi eyes...

Shravan was confused and he asked her- Suman ? Tum Suman ho?

Suman - o g bilkul g main hi Suman hoon g... Lekin aap ne kaise pehchan liya ... Maine tou aapko apni photo nahi bheji thi... Maanna padega aap Mumbai waale Bahut tez hote ho g...

Shravan smiled- thanks... Waise ye comment tha ya compliment tha...

Suman - aap na g kuchh Bhi samjh lo... Maine tou g aapki tareef hi ki hai g...

Shravan-tou Maine Bhi aapko thanks bola hai g...

Suman smiled and Shravan was about to lost in her beauty and innocence... But then Suman said- chaliye-2 meri gadi woh wahan khadi hai ...

Both reached near the car Shravan saw her ambassador car and he looks so confused and amazed he asked Suman

Sharavan- this is your car? And he raised his eyebrows...

Suman- ji Haan this is my car ... Aap aise Kion hairaan ho?

Shravan- aww Na main hairaan nhi hoon ... Waise r you sure hum Iss car se Tumhare ghar pahunch jaayeinge ... Mujhe nhi lagta ...

Suman- excuse me Mr. Malhotra aap meri dhano pe doubt kar rahe ho ... Main Iss car ko 5 saal se chala rahi hoon and it is in a very good condition.. Haan kabhi-2 iske clutches mein thodi problem hoti hai otherwise it's really good...

Shravan- really.. Sorry woh Maine aisa model kabhi dekha nhi hai Na so thoda doubt mein tha ... Waise Tum sure ho Ke hum ghar pahunch jaayeinge?

Suman patting her car and said- Chal dhano dikha de tu Ke Kya kar sakti hai aaj Teri or Teri Sumo ki izzat ka swaal hai ... And she opened the doors and loaded Shravan's luggages in the car and Suman sit in the driver seat and Shravan on the passenger seat. She started the car but she was quite and was just driving... Shravan was feeling bad Ke Suman ko uski baat ka shayad Bura laga hai .. So he started the conversation...

Shravan- sorry Suman woh Maine tumhari dhano I mean car Ke baare mein aisa bola ... I don't want to hurt you ...

Suman replied with smile- arre nahi aap sorry Na bolo g Mujhe tou aadat hai most of people aise hi doubt karte hain meri dhano pe ... I m used to it now.. So don't worry... I m fine ...

Shravan - oh thanks...

They were on the way to home but they were quite... At last Shravan start the conversation

Shravan - tou aur bolo Suman kaise Chal rahi wedding preparations...

Suman- it's going good... Busy-2

Woh firr se chup-chaap drive kar rahi thi...

Shravan- Tum Bahut kam bolti ho Suman? Kuchh bolo Na kuchh baat karte hain ...


Suman haste huye- main Bolon!!! Don't ask me infect main tou Bahut jiyada Bolti hoon.. Mere Papa g kehte hain... Iss Ladki ko tou mauka milna chahiye bolne ka... Firr kisi or ko mauka nahi milta... So iss liye main aapse keh rahi hoon ke mujhe mauka na hi dijiye aap... Aap kahiye Kya keh rahe the ..

Shravan - aww ... Haan ... Woh ... Nahi kuchh khaas nahi tha ... Main tou yahi poochhne waala tha ke tum tou yeh keh rahi thi ke tum airport mujhe lene nahi aa rahi ho ... Firr Bhi tum aa gayi...

Suman - achha woh... Kya Karoon g main Ek do logon ko phone kiya Lekin sab log na busy the tou bas iss liye hi aa gayi main aapko lene...

Shravan - hmm thanks ...

Suman- no thanks g ... You are our guest and Ramnath uncle Ke bete ho aap tou aap ko tou special treatment dena hi hai Na ...

Shravan- oh like that... Hmm cool .. Now I m feeling special and he winked and smiled...

Shravan- Waise Ek baat poochhon Suman?

Suman- o g Ek Kya jinni marzi poochh lo g ... Waise v vakeel Bahut questions poochhte hain and she laughed..

Shravan- o really aisa hai Kya ... Theek hai tou nahi poochhta ... And he turned his face and started looking on the other side...

Suman- uff aap Bura maan Gaye ... Arre you can ask what you want to ask... Please I m sorry Shravan... Main tou kuchh v Avin bolti rehti hoon ... So just feel free to ask...


And both looked at each other and smiled :)

Shravan- Lao main tou bhool hi giya Kya poochhne waala tha ... Firr Kisi time yaad aaya tou poochh loonga...

Hey my all sweety pies ... Here is the another update ... So I hope u all will like and enjoy it... Plz-2 give your feedback ... Thank you

Love you all

Nicky :)

Precap - ShraMan talk about Suman's wedding...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
U nailed it yarr...it waz damn good ... 😉
Specially punjaban sumo... 😆 ...talking express hai... 😆
n shravan has unconsiously has started to fall for her..
😃
u r too good..hope to get more soon... 😃

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