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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 1

Shravan was at his apartment in Mumbai and he got a phone call from an unknown number ...

Shravan - arre yeh kiska number hai ... He picked the call but the voice from the other side was very familiar.

Shravan-hey dad aap ho... Lekin yeh tou India ka number hai... Iska matlab aap India mein ho... Kab aaye aap?

Shravan's dad- Shravan itne saare questions Ek sath ... Haan yeh India ka number hi hai or main Aur tumhari mom India mein hi hain kall raat hi pahunche hain...

Shravan-what??? Aap kall raat se India mein ho or mujhe abhi bata rahe ho... This is not fair dad and mom ne Bhi mujhe nahi bataya ke aap log India aa rahe ho? Ok boliye konse hotel mein hain aap log main lene aata hoon...

Shravan's dad- woh Kya hai na beta time hi nahi mila tumko batane ka...and hum log Mumbai mein nahi Chandigarh mein hain...

Shravan was surprised- Chandigarh mein!!!! Kion wahan kion ho aap... Ab yeh Kya baat hui dad ...?

Shravan's dad- beta hum yahan pe Ek shadi attend karne aaye hain... Sirf 2 weeks ke liye hi hain yahan...

Shravan - Shadi!!! Kiski????

Shravan's dad- woh mera Bahut hi achha dost hai Baldev singh Shergill uski beti Suman ki Shadi hai... Balke humne hi Rishta karwaya hai... Ladka London se hi hai ...

Shravan - oh theek hai... Lekin aap Shadi ke baad tou Mumbai aaoge na dad...???

Shravan's dad- nahi Shravan woh possible nahi ho payega... Iss liye Maine tumko phone kiya hai tum yahan Chandigarh mein aa jao... Ek tou hum Bhi mill lenge and secondly tum yeh Shadi Bhi dekh loge... Balli Bhi tumse milna chahta hai... So tum yahan aa jao ..

Shravan-ok dad main ticket book karva Ke aapko batata hoon... Mom kaisi hain?

Shravan's dad- she is fine... Shopping ko gayi hui hain... Nahi tou tumhari baat karva deta... Ok then son see u ... .

Shravan-Ji dad... Bye and take care.

Shravan's dad- bye beta...

Shravan was so happy and he called to the travel agent to book his ticket and luckily he got a ticket next day in the afternoon. Then he makes a call to his best friend Pushkar..

Pushkar - hi Shravan what's up dude?

Shravan - hey Pushkar I have a gud news...

Pushkar - tou Kya Preeti maan gayi... Mujhe pata tha ke tou usko mana lega... Wah yaar dost ho tou tere jaisa... Thank you Shravan... You r great meri jaan... Tu nahi jaanta tune aaj Kya kiya hai mere liye ... Tune meri love story ki gaadi ka pehla gear daal diya mere dost Ab tu na dekhna baaki ke gears main kaise daalta hoon... Love u mere yaar mere bhai...

Shravan - oye Preeti ke Preetam ... Break lagao ... Kya tumko Preeti ke bina or kuchh soojhta hai!!! Kya yaar Pushkar koi or news gud news nahi ho sakti Kya?

Pushkar bit his tongue and closed his eyes - hey sorry-2 dear ... Ok bolo Kya gud news hai...

Shravan-mom dad India mein hain...

Pushkar - wow that's also a gud news yaar ... Kab aaye woh log ... Main aaj hi unse Milne ko aata hoon ...

Shravan - nahi tu unse Milne nahi aa sakta...kionki...

But isse pehle ke Shravan apni baat complete karta Pushkar hairani se and udas ho ke- kion ... Tu naraz hai mujhse kionki Maine pehle Teri baat poori nahi suni or beech mein hi Preeti ki baat shuru ki thi... Tou uske liye main sorry Bol chuka hoon ... Tu mere sath aisa nahi jar sakta... Haan Bol deta hoon main tumko...

Shravan was irritated now- hey Bhagwan Pushkar tu kabhi Bhi poori baat sunta hai meri ... Hamesha hi meri har baat mein bolta hai or uske do-2 bure result hote hain... Ek tou main apni baat karte-2 bhool jaata hoon and doosra mere phone ka bill Bahut jiyada aata hai... Kionki tum baat ko itna kheench jaate ho... Jao mujhe tumse baat nahi karni...

Pushkar - ok baba m sorry ...Ab yeh ladkion ke jaise baat karna band karo ... Or poori baat batao and I promise ke jab takk tum apni baat poori nahi karoge main beech mein nahi bolonga ... Paka promise yaar... A gentleman's promise...

Shravan - oh really... Do you think that u r a gentleman?

Pushkar - oye matlab Kya hai tera... Hoon main gentleman ok... Ab baat kaun kheench raha hai...

Shravan - ok-2 tou suno... Mom dad dono Chandigarh aaye huye hain... Wahan dad Ke kisi dost ki beti ki Shadi hai ... Or mujhe Bhi jaana hai... Maine kall ki ticket book karva Di hai ...

Pushkar - matlab Aunty uncle Mumbai nahi aayeinge? Or tu kitne time ke liye ja raha hai?

Shravan - nahi woh nahi aayeinge yahan... Or mujhe Bhi one week lag jayega... Tou tu peechhe se Preeti Ke saath mil kar humare case dekh Lena ...

Pushkar - oh theek hai...Preeti Ke sath main Kuchh bhi dekh sakta hoon firr yeh cases Kya cheej hai ... Waise Kitne vaje niklega tu?

Shravan-hmm around 12 vaje ghar se niklonga 3 o'clock ki flight hai tu 11 vaje takk aa jaana ... Theek hai airport chhodne tu aayega na?

Pushkar - ok theek hai pahunch jaonga boss... But don't u think one week jiyada nahi... I will miss u yaar...

Shravan - oye best friend hoon main tera boyfriend nahi... Tu na apni Preeti ko hi miss kiya karr ok... Chal Ab rakhta hoon mujhe dad ko call back karna hai... Kall milte hain... Bye.

Pushkar - theek hai bye...

Shravan dialed the same number from which he got the call few hours back. But the call picked up by a girl.

Girl- hello g kaun Bol raha hai g?

Shravan was surprised- Ji main unka beta Bol raha hoon jinka yeh phone hai...

Girl- Ji!!!!!! Kya kaha aapne ... Aap uske bte hain jiska yeh phone hai... O g Lao g mera beta Bhi hai or mujhe hi pata nahi hai g ... Kab huye the g aap...

Shravan-matlab ??kaun Bol rahi hain aap???

Girl very proudly- Mera naam Sumo hai g Suman Shergil... Aap kaun Bol rahe ho g??

Shravan - bond James bond Bol raha hoon main...and he laughed.

Sumo - very funny g ... Aap mujhe ullu bana rahe ho g... Aap james bond kaise ho sakte ho?

Shravan - kion? Kion nahi ho sakta?

Sumo- kionki mujhe pata hai g James bond ko na Hindi bolni nahi aati hai g...

Shravan smiled- very intelligent you r... Waise main Mr.Ramnath Malhotra ka beta hoon main...

Sumo - Kya!!!! Aap Shravan ho g Ramnath uncle g ke bete ...Sachi mein... Kaise ho g aap... Aap ke baare mein uncle g se Bahut suna hai g...finally aapse baat ho hi gayi g... Haye uncle g keh rahe the ke aap Bhi meri Shadi mein aane waale ho g... Kya Sach mein aap aa rahe ho g,...

Sumo was speaking continuously and Shravan was thinking- hey Bhagwan ye ladki kitna bolti hai... Pushkar ki behan hai bilkul ... Bechara woh ladka jiske saath iski Shadi hogi... Mar giya woh tou ... 24 hours isko jhelna padega...

But his thoughts breaks when Sumo asked him- O g sun rahe ho Shravan g aap...

Shravan-aww haanji sun raha hoon g... Tou aap ho Sumo jinki Shadi hone ja rahi hai... Congrats

Sumo- thanks g...

Shravan - Kya aap mere dad ko bula dengi Plz ...?

Sumo- nahi g abhi nahi bula sakti hoon g kionki main na market mein hoon aapki na main ghar pahunch ke baat karva deti hoon g... Theek hai g?

Shravan in the same tone like Sumo - Ji theek hai g ... Ghar pahunch ke baat karva dena g... Suman g... Main wait karonga g... Tou main phone rakhon g???

Sumo smiled- Ji theek hai g ... Waise Kya aap meri nakal utar rahe ho g?

Shravan - na g na main aapki nakal nahi utar raha g... Woh Kya hai na g mujhe na aapka yeh style Bahut achha laga g ...

Sumo- Sach mein g?? Thank you ... Main ghar pahunch ke aapki baat karvati hoon g.. Bye-2 g

Shravan-bye-2 hai g Suman g...

Shravan phone rakhne ke baad- God g Kya ladki hai yaar main uski leg pulling kar raha tha or woh mujhe thank you Bol rahi thi... Hmm Bahut hi innocent lagti hai ... Haan bolti thoda jiyada hai... Pata nahi kaisa hoga woh ladka jiske saath iski Shadi ho rahi hai... Iske jaisa hi ho tou achha hai... Warna pata nahi... Hey-2 Shravan tu uske baare mein itna kion Soch raha hai ...? U ok man... Come on yaar packing Bhi karni hai tujhe... Chal-2 don't think too much...


So my dear friends I hope aap logon ko yeh pasand aayega g meri iss story ka first chapter:)... Plz give ur feedback g:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So many g's!!Oh my mata!🤣
next time se thode g's kam kar de!
Itni zyaada mithaas hogi to diabetes ho jaayega!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimik

So many g's!!Oh my mata!🤣

next time se thode g's kam kar de!
Itni zyaada mithaas hogi to diabetes ho jaayega!

ji theek hai ji 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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oh my god
that phone conversation
superb
absolutely loved it
cannot wait till they meet
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

oh my god
that phone conversation
superb
absolutely loved it
cannot wait till they meet
continue soon

thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Wah ji kya badiya likha h ji tussi to cha gaye ji shandar ji
Or ye Jo ji wala concept h ye bhi vadiya h ji thanku ji is update k liye ji😆
I really enjoyed it infact m ye os bus stand p pad rhi thi and m jati hu kese Mene apne aapki hassi control ki everyone was looking at me but I enjoyed alot ji
To jaldi next update. Dena ji changa ji😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wah ji, kamal kar ditta tussi ji!
Yeh toh bada hi shaandaar tha ji..
Dil khush ho gaya ji!
This was damn cute!
I was smiling throughout!
Ek phone call, and Shravan already uske rang mai rang raha hai ji!
I'm loving it!
Thanks for the PM!
Continue sooinsh ji!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wah ji, kamal kar diya he ji!
Dil khush kar gaya ji!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yeh update bahut acha the g. Ab kab next update karoge g. Loved it g
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Wah ji kya badiya likha h ji tussi to cha gaye ji shandar ji

Or ye Jo ji wala concept h ye bhi vadiya h ji thanku ji is update k liye ji😆
I really enjoyed it infact m ye os bus stand p pad rhi thi and m jati hu kese Mene apne aapki hassi control ki everyone was looking at me but I enjoyed alot ji
To jaldi next update. Dena ji changa ji😉

aww thanks so much g ... Will update today 😊

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