GHAYAL RETURNS - A Shradityaman OS

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Hola peeps!!! Excited for today's episode ?? Lets have some fun till the episode airs. Shall we??
Spoilers say that chomu will return to take his revenge 😈 . So here is a Shradityaman OS 😆
It is your very own post so feel free to barsofy gaaliyan chappals on chomu and mujhe bhi if you didnt like the story 😆
Enough of my rambling. Here you go...


GHAYAL RETURNS




Sitting in his room he recalled the incidents . What possessed him?? Why did he turn into a beast? How could he force himself on a girl whom he loved with every fibre? He was ashamed of himself. For the first time in his life he couldnt meet his mother's eyes. He really stooped low this time and it was all because of that SHRAVAN!!!! He had apologised to his mother. He knew she hated him at the moment but will eventually forgive him. Right now he needs Suman's forgiveness. The girl whom he had hurt the most.

He drove off to Tiwari Killa. Mustering all the courage he entered inside. Kamini chachi , pushkar , lalaji and Nanaji were sitting in living room. He stopped to listen their conversation.

"Tiwariji humara Shravan aur apki Suman ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hain, sachcha wala wo bhi bachapan se . To main soch rahi thi ki kyun na in dono ki shadi kara di jaye" Kamini said with a bright smile

He was furious beyond words, after spoiling his life how can they dream a happily ever after.

"Bahut pyar kiya tha maine tumhe suman. Aur tumne kya kiya?? Mujhe dhokha diya. Ab tum dekhogi Aditya Ahuja cheez kya hai. Apni barbadi ke liye taiyar ho jao." *Evil smirk*

BGM* Nayak nahi ..khalnayak hun main*

"So where do I start from?? PCT!!!!
Jaan hai na tumhari wo? Ab dekho jaan (Suman)kaise main tumhari jaan nikalta hun ."
He opened the door with spare key once she gave him. "Poor suman you trust everyone so easily , I pity you!
You are so proud of this place na ? Now what will the food ispectors say after they see this mess." He muttered to himself
Rats were nibbling the left overs. Cockroaches crawling on the floor. He smirked at his victory.

Next morning Sumo got up early . She had a lot on her plate. Orders to complete, collect paychecks, and most important talk to shravan about this wedding. She had already called him before leaving for work.
She opened PCT and was shocked to see rats and cockroaches happily feasting on the last night dinner left overs.
But she clearly remembered she had cleaned this place before leaving. She took out her phone to dial preeta , a voice startled her.

"Miss Suman. "
She turned back to see the food inspector.

"S...s...sir aap!" She stuttered.

"Yeh sab kya hai??Itni gandgi! Humne pehle bhi apko warning di thi. Wo to achcha hua hume kisi bhale admi ne inform kar diya warna aap to ye ghatiya khana khila ke pata nahi kitne logo ko bimar kar deti. " He said angrily

"Sir aap jaisa soch rahe hain waisa bilkul nahi hai. " She said in her defence

"Miss tiwari hum soch nahi rhe hain , apni ankhon se dekh rahe hain . Aap ko nahi dikhta kya? " The officer snapped.

"Anyways bahut ho gya . Ab hume us jagah ko band karna pdega ." He picked the lock to close .
Sumo held his hand "Sir aap aisa nahi kar sakte hain. Ek mauka to dijiye . Please sir." Sumo pleaded
He jerked off her hand and she lost her balance. She closed her eyes anticipating a fall but two strong arms caught her before she landed on ground.
She opened her eyes and Shravan malhotra , her friend who once promised her he would never let her fall stood there to fulfill his promise. He never let her fall , her guardian angel, her saviour. She smiled at him fondly.
His voice broke her trance.

"Tum thik ho? " He asked in a concerned voice
She nodded.
He turned to face the officer.

"Ye kya badtameezi hai ? Ye kaun sa tareeka hai kisi ladki se bat krne ka? Aur aap is jagah ko aise nahi band kar sakte . Jayiye pehle court se orders le ayiye. I hope itna kanoon to aap bhi jante honge na" He asked fuming
Suman interfered " Sir please ek last chance de dijiye . Is bar main koi shikayat ka mauka nahi doongi . Please" She said folding her hands

The officer left from there giving her a last warning .

"Kya jarurat thi us officer ke samne hath jodne ki?" He sounded annoyed

"Kya jarurat thi us officer se jhagda karne ki?" She snorted

"Mere sawal ka jawab sawal se dena jaruri hai ?" He asked.

"Meri life me ab kuch nahi bacha shravan , ek PCT hi to hai. Ye bhi nahi raha to main kya krungi " she said in pained voice

Her words , the sad look on her face stabbed him like a knife. His guilt was eating him alive.
Sumo looked at him. All of sudden he was so silent.
She snapped her fingers at him.

"Kaha kho gye? " She asked , he shook his head

"Sumo main tumse ..."
"Wo sab bad me pehle chalo meri help karo ye sab saaf karne me ." She ordered him

He felt something crawling on his jeans. He looked down to find two cockroaches playing ringa ringa roses on his jeans

A loud shriek escaped his mouth. Sumo looked at his horrified face and then down . She burst out laughing.

"Tum bilkul nahi badle. Qutub Minar jaise ho gye ho aur ek cockroach se darte ho " she said between her laughs


FLASHBLACK

"Chal chashmish shuru ho ja. Pehle wo bookshelf saaf karna bad me pura room. " She said throwing duster at him.

"Chhee!! Kitna ganda room her tumhara . Lagta hi nahi isme insaan rehte hain" he coughed as the dust irritated his respiratory tract.

"Jyada chee ki na to dungi ek ghuma ke " she threatened him showing her fist.

He panicked . She was lethal so he quitely resumed his work.

"Acha sun tu aaj mujhe golgappe khilane bahar le chal rha hai " she ordered him.

*Silence*
"Chashmish!"
"Behra hai kya ?? Sunayi ni deta?" She yelled

*No response*

"Jyada kam kara liya kya maine ?Behosh to nahi ho gya?" She muttered to herself.

He was frozen on the stool.
"Abey kya hua ??" She asked

"Cock...cock ...cockroach " he stammered and pointed towards his shirt

It flew and gracefully sat on his hair. He shrieked and lost his balance.
Sumo was standing right below so she fell with shravan on top of her . Both of them burst out laughing.


He was mesmerised by her tinkling laughter. It had been months he had heard her laugh. He kept staring at her. She noticed him staring at her and stopped laughing.
*Ahem ahem * she cleared her throat

He came out of his reverie
"Kam shuru karein" she said

There was an awkward silence between them. Shravan decided to break the silence

"Tumhe achi tarah yad hai raat ko tumne ye jagah saaf ki thi" he asked , she nodded

"Raat ko yaha koi COCKROACH... "he made a face of disgust and she laughed .

"Nahi koi COCKROACH nahi tha" she imitated him. He scowled

"Chabhi to tumhare pas hi hogi to phir koi aur to yaha aa bhi nahi sakta " he said feeling proud of his sherlock's brain

"Chabhi!!"
"Shit!!!"
"Kya hua??" He asked in a curious tone

"Aditya ke pas ek spare key thi. Wo investors ko yeh jagah dikhani thi aur maine shadi ke kamo me busy thi to use ek spare key..." her voice trailed off

"Aditya!! How can you be so foolish sumo?? Itni smart ho kisi pe bharosa nahi karti , mujh pe bhi nahi aur us aditya par." He was hurt

She flinched at his tone . He noticed and apologised .

"Iska matlab hai yeh sab us aditya ne kiya hai. Is bar main use nahi chodunga." He said anger visible on his face.

"Shravan please kuch aisa mat karna jisse tumhe chot pahunche." She said . He could see in her eyes , she cared for him , she for worried for his safety. He nodded and left with a smile.

Sumo called the pest control department. She cleaned every nook and corner of PCT. Satisfied with her work she dialled Preeta's no. There was a knock at the door . She opened to find aditya standing at the door. She tried shut but he caught the door.

"Niklo yaha se" she said. She was furious

He roamed his eyes , the place was spotless.

"I see fir se bacha liya tumhe tumhare S.H.R.A.V.A.N ne ? Fir se hero ban gya tumhari nazaro me" he said taking a step closer to her . She moved a step back.

"Par kya hoga jab tumhe pata chalega ki tumhara hero hi tumahri life ka sabse bada villain hai" he said with a cruel smile

"Kya bakwas kar rahe ho?? Jao yaha se" she said in a stern voice

"Na na bakwas main nahi kar rha. Janna nahi chahogi us din bachelors party me kya hua tha?" He smirked

Her heart started beating erratically . She wasnt sure if she wanted to hear this.
"Shravan come soon" She prayed silently
He repeated the words shravan said in the party.

A sound of slap echoed in the room.

"Get out...i said out" she screamed

"You spoiled my life shravan I spoiled yours . Now we are even bro!!!" He muttered to himself . His cheeks burned from the slap but he was happy , happy to get his revenge.

Shravan entered with police officers , he grabbed his hand

"A ...aa kaha chal diye dulhe raja? Le jayiye inhe inki asli sasural." He said handing him over to the constable

"I didnt do anyhing wrong ?" He said

"You tried to molest your would be bride. You forged property papers and entered someone else property without permission." Shravan explained .

Sumo was clueless about what was happening

"Forged?? "Aditya asked
"Yes Mr.ahuja , the land still belongs to Mr. Malhotra and we have a witness who knows all about this.
Shastri..." the officer called shashtri

"Kaun shastri? I dont know him" Aditya said getting frustated.

"Kyun jhoot bol rhe hain sir . Us din aap hi to aye the mere ghar . Aap ne mujhe Rs.50000 diye the ek sign ke badle . " Shastri lied convincingly

"Officer dont believe them . I have the original papers. They are trying to frame me ." He said

"Ab jo bhi kehna hai court me kehna . Le chalo ise." The officer handcuffed him

"Officer ek min . Kuch baat karni hai jara inse." Shravan said.

" Original papers tere pas hain ,mere wale forged hain . But you cant prove it .
Bro!! Remember a simple funda in your life . Never mess with Shravan Malhotra " he walked away with a swag

Sumo ran into his arms and hugged him.

"Kya hua sumo?Did he hurt you??" He asked in a concerned voice

She shook her head in no

"Dont worry wo ab humari life kabhi nahi ayega .I promise " He assured her . She believed him . He never broke his promises. He will always be there for her ...always

Aditya was lying on the floor in the lockup. Shravan played with him ..again he was tricked , he thought .
He had loved her . He still loved her . But she will be never Suman Aditya Ahuja , he sighed making patterns on the floor

*BGM Har kisi ko nahi milta yaha pyar jindagi me *

So how was it?? I believe if aditya tells her the truth he would be slapped right then . Because sumo trusts shravan more than he trusts her. Morever i wanted this story to be funny so skipped all emotional scenes. Do let me know what you think about the story. Please ignore the typos .

Hope to meet you soon
Till then take care
Priyam


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res me first! 😃
Unres
I just loove it!! Shravan came to fulfill his promise of never letting her fall! Uss Adi ki toh. 😡
Shravan scared of cockroaches! Qutub minar ki height ka ho gaya par cockroach se darta hai? 🤣 🤣 Flashback! 😆 😳
That chamat! 😆 And kya maza chakhaya uss Adi ko shravan ne! 😈
Maza aa gaya! Tussi chaa gaye! 🤪 👏

Love
Ramya 🤗 ❤️
Edited by ramya06 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res!
...

Unress!
Cockroaches playing RingaRinga Roses in his pants 🤣🤣

And my Fav Khalnayak Song for Adi!😆
Hey Bhaggu! Flashback was Awesome!😆

And that dhamakedaar Chamat! Wah!😉😛
Mazaa Aa Gaya!
I wanted Dhulayi Returns also but this was fantastic!
Lmao!🤣

And that Har Kisiko...
Perfect!

And lastly
THANK YOU PRIYAM FOR...
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Writing the story! Kyun, tujhe kya laga?😉🤣🤣

Love!
Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
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Priii yeh jo bhi tha kamal tha...
I can't get enough of this stupid kamal dialogue 😆
Anyway coming back, nayak nahi khalnayak hoon mai🤣
And yeh tareeka choose kia woh... 😆
I thought he will make a bid on shravan's life, yahan sirf chuhe aur cockroach ki jaan gayi!
He's afraid of cockroaches! It would be fun to see a 6'4" run for his life, from an insect!
Kya chamat maari hai! Iss thappad ki goonj😆
Sumo hugs him! Again...
Sigh!

Prii maza aa gaya!
👏
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Meri dhamal chaukadi ka ek sath res 😆
I like it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Meri dhamal chaukadi ka ek sath res 😆
I like it!!


Unressed first! Yayy!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice! I like your take on this!
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Aditya lol kya halat kar Di uski
Superb OS Di
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Res!

...

Unress!
Cockroaches playing RingaRinga Roses in his pants🤣🤣

And my Fav Khalnayak Song for Adi!😆
Hey Bhaggu! Flashback was Awesome!😆

And that dhamakedaar Chamat! Wah!😉😛
Mazaa Aa Gaya!
I wanted Dhulayi Returns also but this was fantastic!
Lmao!🤣

And that Har Kisiko...
Perfect!

And lastly
THANK YOU PRIYAM FOR...
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.
.
.
.
.
Writing the story! Kyun, tujhe kya laga?😉🤣🤣

Love!



Ringa ringa roses ek din Ana ne yad dilaya tha 😆
Me too but dhulayi ka jyada scope ni tha 😆
Thank u so much jaan 🤗
😆 shaitaan bachhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres. Ghayal returns 🤣 The title itself cracked me up. I love this Shravan. Kya swag hai 😎. But I miss this on the show 😭 but koi na jb Pri ho yaha toh fikar kaheka. Tu saari kami puri kr deti hai. Your BGMs are always hilarious. I love the Har kisiko nhi milta one. Can perfectly imagine chomu's pichka hua face. And the slap was a cherry on the cake. Love you 🤗
Edited by Perpetuity - 9 years ago

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