Continuing OS (name change from one sentence)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys, how are you all today?
I was wondering how we could increase the forum ranking... and an idea struck me...

Why don't we do a short OS on the current track?

No just 1 person writing, but everyone in the forum contributing to it! 1-2 Sentences from everyone and we'll see how far it goes😊 So i'll begin...(Get creative, wild, funky, gutter minded, whatever you guys feel like!) lets see where this leads to😉

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Shravan was taken back with nanu's call, he didn't know what to think, what if he had already found another groom for Sumo? Shravan looked on helplessly as he agreed to go meet nanu.

Continue the story guys😛
[UPDATE: Changin name to 'Continuing OS']
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Posted: 9 years ago
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On his way to Tiwari Killa, he tried to clear his mind and think again about Nanus request. "No it probably is not another groom.

Too soon.

Could it be that Adi told his Nirmala about his lies the night before. Could it be that Nanu and even Sumo are now aware of what happened".

Edit: My reasons for this track. I wanted Adi to be completely taken out of the picture. I wanted Shravan to confess and explain it to Sumo privately so that they may handle this between themselves rather than either Sumo being defamed or Shravan being shown as the instigator of the molestation.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shit! He yelled as he banged his hands against the steering wheel.
Aditya ke harkate meri vajese tho nahi? Nahi! Usne khud ye cheap harkate ki hai...Meri baat kehne ya na kehne se uske character etni hi cheap hothi. How dare he, how dare he touch MY Sumo. UGHH...he abruptly parked the car outside Tiwari Killa and got out
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Posted: 9 years ago
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He entered Tiwari Killa and saw that Suman , Lalaji , Pushkar , Chachiji and everyone in Tiwari Killa was waiting for him .

Shravan : What's going on Nanaji ? Are you Ok ?

Nanaji : I am ok , I want to talk about Suman .

Shravan : What's happening ? are you fine Sumo ? He turned toward Suman with eyes full of concern.

Everyone noticed his concern and started believing Kamini words.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arre this is just likeemy Imagination weaving!!
Next time jab karungi tab tujhe pm kar doongi!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was as if a light bulb lit up on top of everyones head...they were finally seeing what had been their for years. The concern, care, passion Shravan and Sumo had for each other in their eyes.
Shravans concerned look not only confirmed it but also made everyone take a sigh of relief. At that very moment, Nanu noticed how intensely Sumo was starring back at Shravan. Pagal he thought, for my happiness she was ready to sacrifice her own. I will now let them know what the consequences are for not telling and...but i also can't believe i didn't notice this myself! I am dissapointed that i couldn't read her mind, her silent scream for help😭

Shravan, Sumo...Do you both have something to tell us?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Kya tum suman se pyaar karte ho?" Asked nanaji. Shravan, completely dumbfounded doesn't know what to say so he just looks at sumo. She looks right back at him. "Nanaji ye aap achanak aise kyun poochrahe hain?" He starts to panic inside.
"Tumhe ramnath ki kasam sach sach jawab do" he is dead silent. After a while he admits. "Haaan."
Sumo is shocked beyond the seven seas.
He looks up only to look at her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Suman is left speechless...She just looks at him without breaking her gaze
Deep down she knew that he felt for her..but him confessing in front of everyone, she definitely did not expect this. Her breathing and heart rate increased, she could feel herself burning from his gaze...

"Sumo" nanu called out

"Sumo kya tum bhi Shravan se pyaar karti hu?"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The story so far...

Shravan was taken back with nanu's call, he didn't know what to think, what if he had already found another groom for Sumo? Shravan looked on helplessly as he agreed to go meet nanu.

On his way to Tiwari Killa, he tried to clear his mind and think again about Nanus request. "No it probably is not another groom.

Too soon.

Could it be that Adi told his Nirmala about his lies the night before. Could it be that Nanu and even Sumo are now aware of what happened".

Shit! He yelled as he banged his hands against the steering wheel.

Aditya ke harkate meri vajese tho nahi? Nahi! Usne khud ye cheap harkate ki hai...Meri baat kehne ya na kehne se uske character etni hi cheap hothi. How dare he, how dare he touch MY Sumo. UGHH...he abruptly parked the car outside Tiwari Killa and got out

He entered Tiwari Killa and saw that Suman , Lalaji , Pushkar , Chachiji and everyone in Tiwari Killa was waiting for him .

Shravan : What's going on Nanaji ? Are you Ok ?

Nanaji : I am ok , I want to talk about Suman .

Shravan : What's happening ? are you fine Sumo ? He turned toward Suman with eyes full of concern.

Everyone noticed his concern and started believing Kamini words.

It was as if a light bulb lit up on top of everyones head...they were finally seeing what had been their for years. The concern, care, passion Shravan and Sumo had for each other in their eyes.

Shravans concerned look not only confirmed it but also made everyone take a sigh of relief. At that very moment, Nanu noticed how intensely Sumo was starring back at Shravan. Pagal he thought, for my happiness she was ready to sacrifice her own. I will now let them know what the consequences are for not telling and...but i also can't believe i didn't notice this myself! I am dissapointed that i couldn't read her mind, her silent scream for help

Shravan, Sumo...Do you both have something to tell us?

"Kya tum suman se pyaar karte ho?" Asked nanaji. Shravan, completely dumbfounded doesn't know what to say so he just looks at sumo. She looks right back at him. "Nanaji ye aap achanak aise kyun poochrahe hain?" He starts to panic inside.

"Tumhe ramnath ki kasam sach sach jawab do" he is dead silent. After a while he admits. "Haaan."

Sumo is shocked beyond the seven seas.

He looks up only to look at her.

Suman is left speechless...She just looks at him without breaking her gaze

Deep down she knew that he felt for her..but him confessing in front of everyone, she definitely did not expect this. Her breathing and heart rate increased, she could feel herself burning from his gaze...

"Sumo" nanu called out

"Sumo kya tum bhi Shravan se pyaar karti hu?"

Edited by shracraze - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Naanu? Aap?..."
"Haan ya na bol suman!"
"Haaan..." she says softly looking down. Preeti beamed and si did kamini. Pushkar sat gobsmacked. Why was preeti so happy he wondered.

"Shravan beta...mai tumse kuch mange wala hoon...do ge tum mujhe?"
He kneels beside nanaji and says "nanaji aap aise kyin poochrahe hain! Aap bas boliye aap ke liye mai kya kar sakta hoon?"

Naanu puts an arm on his shoulder and says"meri suman se shaadi karoge?"

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