Sumo ka Shravan & Shravan ki Sumo - A Shramanalysis - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beagleboy

An indignant and broken heart is of use to no one. At the moment, Shravan's heart is both indignant and broken. Indignant for being scorned, once again, just as it opened its doors- albeit reluctantly- to love. Broken - having been mended with great care. So, his actions are directed by his mind which is entangled in games, virulence. His mind, that is puppet whose strings are held by people outside. His mind is hardly in his control. So dented is he by his experience that he is blinded by a visceral pique that prevents him from thinking logically and clearly.

So anything he does and says now will not reflect what he feels. His heart is indisposed and his mind impaired.


question is - how much of this indignant and broken heart be healed - give the future anticipated turn of events, love wont be difficult but how can it learn to trust again - irony - as trust was never his forte and is the foundational pillar for any other form of emotion?

so will he remain a troubled soul?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: QUIRKY333


question is - how much of this indignant and broken heart be healed - give the future turn of events, love wont be difficult but how can it learn to trust again - irony - as trust was never his forte and is the foundational pillar for any other form of emotion?


Quirky - Shravan's heart is familiar with a lot of half truths but has been kept veiled from many life altering truths that would/could form the basis of a trust that has been absent for most of his adult life. When he discerns these facts that were kept hidden, his heart will heal and he will be able to move forward unfettered. But, already, love is surreptitiously making way to the fore, even without full disclosure. He cannot deny who he is. By changing his fashion, he cannot change the PERSON he is - Sumo's Shravan.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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perfect analyasis.. sharavan needs some hints.. but let it be hidden.. we will enjoy when it come slowly.. i m ready for "shadi sirf naanu ke liye"..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As usual the ironies, what he says and what he actually means

Main sirf Naanu ke liye rukha tha - main bas tumhe ek baar dekhna chahta tha
Mann nahi hai - jab tum is haal mein ho to main kaise kha sakta hoon
Apna khayal rakha - kaash main yahan ruk sakta tumhare liye

Apart from this, I had this one point to make which I think we should remember when talking about Shravan.
"Sumo ka Shravan aur Shravan ki Sumo", now the "Sumo" is important, simply becuase Suman had witnessed and survived a big tragedy even before she met Shravan, so if there is no Shravan, there is no Sumo, but Suman will still be there. Consider Shravan's case, the greatest tragedy in his life was two pronged, his mother and his love were both lost at the same time and Shravan's who is truly, madly and deeply in love with Sumo disintegrates when his Sumo is no longer with him. It has happened before when he decided to leave India but Sumo came running to him and that one incident of her coming back gave him hope for 10 years without any kind of communication, my heart breaks to see such love, all it will probably take for Shravan is some kind of an assurance from Sumo, he will deny it first but he is too much in love with her to lose her.

Beautiful analysis! 👏


These lines particularly struck me.

What he says and what he means...👏Excellent way of explaining Shravan's duplicity...😆

And what you said about Sumo and Suman and Shravan...👍🏼

Suman can exist as an empty shell without Shravan...Sumo would disappear forever...

Shravan would disintegrate and fade away without his Suman/ Sumo...

That is how much of stress they both can take...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sptrno

amazing beautiful as always dear

Thanks sptrno ! Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Nith,

Amazing analysis again..
🤗

Thanks Rosh 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

As usual the ironies, what he says and what he actually means

Main sirf Naanu ke liye rukha tha - main bas tumhe ek baar dekhna chahta tha
Mann nahi hai - jab tum is haal mein ho to main kaise kha sakta hoon
Apna khayal rakha - kaash main yahan ruk sakta tumhare liye

Apart from this, I had this one point to make which I think we should remember when talking about Shravan.
"Sumo ka Shravan aur Shravan ki Sumo", now the "Sumo" is important, simply becuase Suman had witnessed and survived a big tragedy even before she met Shravan, so if there is no Shravan, there is no Sumo, but Suman will still be there. Consider Shravan's case, the greatest tragedy in his life was two pronged, his mother and his love were both lost at the same time and Shravan's who is truly, madly and deeply in love with Sumo disintegrates when his Sumo is no longer with him. It has happened before when he decided to leave India but Sumo came running to him and that one incident of her coming back gave him hope for 10 years without any kind of communication, my heart breaks to see such love, all it will probably take for Shravan is some kind of an assurance from Sumo, he will deny it first but he is too much in love with her to lose her.

Beautiful analysis! 👏


These lines particularly struck me.

What he says and what he means...👏Excellent way of explaining Shravan's duplicity...😆

And what you said about Sumo and Suman and Shravan...👍🏼

Suman can exist as an empty shell without Shravan...Sumo would disappear forever...

Shravan would disintegrate and fade away without his Suman/ Sumo...

That is how much of stress they both can take...

Thanks chick ! Glad you liked it 😊
He is disintegrating, first the anger, second the drinking and now he is lost. He is doing everything he can to run away without running away physically. As you say they can't take it anymore.
And Sumo is long gone, we have had Suman for quite a while now but I think what Preethi said has got her thinking and it is Sumo who is in PCT 😊
Thank God this is fiction 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marybarton

Aww mighty looking Shravan is so vulnerable I adore this analysis and Shravan for this reason.


He is vulnerable indeed. But the problem is he chooses to listen to his Father, if only he would listen (actively listen) to Kamini 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beagleboy

An indignant and broken heart is of use to no one. At the moment, Shravan's heart is both indignant and broken. Indignant for being scorned, once again, just as it opened its doors- albeit reluctantly- to love. Broken - having been mended with great care. So, his actions are directed by his mind which is entangled in games, virulence. His mind, that is puppet whose strings are held by people outside. His mind is hardly in his control. So dented is he by his experience that he is blinded by a visceral pique that prevents him from thinking logically and clearly.

So anything he does and says now will not reflect what he feels. His heart is indisposed and his mind impaired.


Actually, I am amazed that he is still holding up. Beautifully written beagleboy 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beagleboy


Quirky - Shravan's heart is familiar with a lot of half truths but has been kept veiled from many life altering truths that would/could form the basis of a trust that has been absent for most of his adult life. When he discerns these facts that were kept hidden, his heart will heal and he will be able to move forward unfettered. But, already, love is surreptitiously making way to the fore, even without full disclosure. He cannot deny who he is. By changing his fashion, he cannot change the PERSON he is - Sumo's Shravan.

He is and has been Sumo's Shravan for a long time now and will be forever. He can not deny who he is but he can hide it. He is trying to do that but the mask keeps slipping but his recovery is fast. Trust will take time and once it comes it is not going away.

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