Shaadi Ka Khayaal : ShraMan OS

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Another OS! Enjoy!!!


Shaadi Ka Khayaal


"Papa... I love her Papa! Nahi Jee sakta main uske bina. Bohot dard hota hain", he cried at Ramnath's feet. Ramnath lifted him up and ruffled his hair.
"Karlo beta, tum use shaadi. Main hi galat tha, shayad", he heaved. Not that he had started liking Suman as his to be Daughter In Law but then he couldn't see him so hurt anymore. He had to give in!

"Thank you Papa!", he clung to him in a hug. Ramnath smiles a little. This was not the doing of men. This was Destiny that even after a thousand troubles and ten long years if separation, they wanted to be together.



The Next Day

Shravan held her favourite perfume in His hand. A memory flashed :


"Shravan!!!", she roared. "Ab kya hua?", he look so puzzled. He had simply applied some perfume.
"Chee!", she pressed her nose.
"Kya? Perfume to hai! White lilies", he smelled it. So fresh!
"Aree mujhe lily perfumes bilkul acche nahi lagte!"
"Kamaal hain! Lily perfume nahi pasand"
"Tujhe pata toh hoga naa!"
"Are wah! Mujhe kyun pata? Main tumharaa PA hoon kya?"
"Nahi pata toh jaan le! The Suman Tiwari ko Lily nahi Lavender perfumes pasand hain! Mujhe khush karna ho toh Lavender perfumes lagana!"
"Kyun khush karoon main tumhe?", he huffed
"Kyunki mere PA ke alawaa tujhe aur koi job nahi milegi! Hahaha!"


Those peals of unhindered laughter still rang in his ears. Good old days!
But today was no less. It was the Day of his Pyaar Ka Izhaar!

He straight away headed to PCT.

"Sumo!", he called her out.
"Itni jaldi aa gaye Shravan! Par itni jaldi bolne nahi doongi", she chuckled.
"Aree Shravan! Accha hua tum aa gaye! Mera clutched phirse kharaab hain! Aur mujhe tiffin ki delivery karni hai. Mujhe drop kardo naa please!"
And this was surely something he couldn't refuse!
"Chalo!"

Suman was blabbering in the car. As usual, he was listening her grumbles. "Uff yeh dealers! Cheque pay hi nahi karte!"
She went on and on. And he didn't want to stop her.

Finally, the stop came. She got down. Shravan set his hair and cleared his throat.
"Sumo... I love you", he said gravely. Naah! That was too direct.
"Sumo, meri life partner banogi?". Gosh! Typical Hindi film type!
"Sumo, mujhe tumhe invite karna hain!"
"Kahan?", she had just come.

He seemed lost. "Oye! Kahan invite karna hai?"
"Chai par!"
"Kya?"
"Haan... Woh Maine socha ki aaj take Maine tumhe tea par invite nahi kiya... Toh... Papa bhi keh rahe the...", he trailed off.



Shaayad meri shaadi ka khayaal dil mein aaya hai
Isiliye daddy ne mere tumhen chaay pe bulaaya hai
Kya kaha phir se doharaana na
Shaayad meri shaadi ka khayaal...

Pannchhi akela dekh ke mujhe ye jaal bichhaaya hai
Isiliye daddy ne tere mujhe chaay pe bulaaya hai




Shit! His mind beeped with Error!

...

Early Evening

Sumo , directly from PCT came to Malhotra House.
"Aree Sumo! Tum aa gayi!", he came down.
"Suman puttar! Aao aao", came Lalaji.

She sat down on the dining table.
"Suman puttar, tumhe bhook lagi hai kya? Aise table par kyun baith gayi?", he was amused.
"Lalaji! Shravan ne mujhe Chai par invite kiya hai!", she was equally amused.
"Chai par? Yeh toh vaddi acchi gal hai! Tum dost log chai peeyo, tab tak main walk shalk karke aata hoon"

"Bolo Shravan!", she asked, sipping on hot tea.
He looked at the clock. It was 4.

"Suman... Woh!", he stopped.
"Kya"
"Woh tum Hindi pictures dekhti ho?"
"Haan! Sabhi dekhtein hain! Toh?"
"Usmein kaise Hero Heroine aasaani se ek dusre ko apne dil ki baat keh dete hain naa?"
"Haan toh?"
"Toh..."
"Shravan, baat kya hai?! Tumhe kisiko propose toh nahi karna?", she laughed.
"Nahi nahi... Main kyun", he laughed on himself.

"Aree kya hua Bhai?", Ramnath came out of his room.
He chuckled seeing his Son fumble in front of her.

But he steered clear out of it. "Shravan meri meeting hai, main bahar jaa raha hoon", and he left, not before smiling at Suman who was almost laughing.

"Shravan! Ab Jo hai woh bol do!"
"Ek problem hai"
"Kya?"
"Mujhe... Mujhe tumse shaadi karni hai"
"Kya!", she got up.
"Shaadi karni hai mujhse? Aur usmein problem hai?"
"Nahi nahi! I mean Shaadi karni hai... Wahi problem hai"
"Shravan! Tumhaara dimaag kharab ho gaya hai!", she picked up her bag. "Mujhe chodo apne USS Oxford Brain ka ilaaj karvao!"

Humko to yaara teri yaari, jaan se pyaari
Tu chaahe tod de
Tujhko deewana kaise chhod de, kaise chhod de
Hey humko to yaara teri yaari, jaan se pyaari
Tu chaahe tod de
Tujhko deewana kaise chhod de, kaise chhod de

Dil ke heere moti aaja mere dil mein aa
Tu hai daulat meri aa meri manzil mein aa
Haye meri tamanna ab tu kahin na zaa
Haye re haye kahin na zaa
Hey dil ke heere moti aaja mere dil mein aa
Tu hai daulat meri aa meri manzil mein aa
Haye meri tamanna ab tu kahin na zaa
Haye re haye kahin na zaa
Humko to yaara teri yaari, jaan se pyaari
Tu chaahe tod de
Tujhko deewana kaise chhod de, kaise chhod de


"I Love You Suman!", he blurted out.
She turned back, he was already on his knees.

"Buddhu kahin ke!", he lifted him up and blushed. "Itni der laga di?!"
"MATLAB... Tumhe pata tha?"
"Toh?! Uncle ne aaj subah hi baat karli thi Nanu se"
"Accha! Toh tumhe bohot mazaa aa raha tha!", he said angrily.
"Nahi nahi... Mujhe bohot bohot mazaa aa raha tha! Hindi movies!"

"Suman ki bacchi!", and he chased her in the House!


...


Love,
Mahi!
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orion23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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RES
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This is so cute Mahi!
And what's with us and OS-es these days😆
Who am I to complain!
I'm loving it!!
Cute fluff!!
🤗
Thank you for this one!!
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
orion23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Naam toh rakh le OS ka..
Oh you just edited it😆
Love the song selection!!!

Prii👎🏼
1st chodd 2nd comment bhi mera!
😎
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

RES

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This is so cute Mahi!
And what's with us and OS-es these days😆
Who am I to complain!
I'm loving it!!
Cute fluff!!
🤗
Thank you for this one!!

Uff! My crazy net! Left me in the middle!

I know right?! Too much happening! Haha!
Me too not complaining!

Thank you Baitu!
Read it again, some changes ;)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
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Unress
Mahi meri jaan u are on roll
Super cute os ❤️
I am really loving your version of shraman .
Mast , nok jhok , teasing everything is there.
Loved it to core ❤️
And the song selections are perfect as usual

Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Naam toh rakh le OS ka..

Oh you just edited it😆
Love the song selection!!!

Prii👎🏼
1st chodd 2nd comment bhi mera!
😎


Yeah! I know that was late!
Thank you!

Prii, ab toh sacchi kuch karna padega😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Mahi!! 🤗
Much required fluff.
This was so cute.
Keep writing.
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rooh_5896

Hi Mahi!! 🤗

Much required fluff.
This was so cute.
Keep writing.
❤️


Omg Aastha! After ages! How're you dear?!
Thank you!😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever


Omg Aastha! After ages! How're you dear?!
Thank you!😆


Yep yep. I'm back. 😎
Was very busy for the past few months.
Did make a come back post but did not get any response. The forum has all new members now saving a few.
And I'm good. 😊 Thanks my love.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mahi meri jaan
This was cute yr she was enjoying how he is trying to propose her
"Nahi nahi! I mean Shaadi karni hai... Wahi problem hai" this one cracked me up shadi karne main kaisi problem hoti hai 😆
Fabulous OS 🤗
Lots of Love

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