Heal my heart -A Shraman OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Baitu main tujhse pehle!

Priyam ka badla...😆

#BeatThat😉

😆
Ye ressing game hum ni chhodenge 😆

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

Painful ... And surreal ...and happy and sad ... And the way I want this story to conclude. You said it all...⭐️

Thanks a ton wic !!! 😛
Means a lot

Originally posted by: Ana_mika

Priyam meri jaan🤗

This is just so beautiful!!

We are yet to witness the wedding fiasco but i am liking this scenario better.

Love the flashbacks!!❤️

The song selection and their simple yet beautiful confession. just perfect!

Shravan's inner turmoil and Suman's break down is so heartfelt.

You've done it yet again.

Ab kya bolu...tum ne itne ache se saab kuch likh diya!

Mujhe behaad pasand aaya!

Ana my love 🤗
Thank u sooo much darling
So happy u liked it 😃
Lyrics are so apt for shraman . Waise i feel every song is made for shraman only 😆
Thank u 😳
Kuch bhi bol BEHAD nahi ...kisi ki yaad aa jati hai 🤣
Thanks again 😃

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Great update👏

Thank u harshita 😃

Originally posted by: nith125

Priyam Priyam Priyam ❤️
Loved it, will probably re read it many more times !
I just got up and you made my day !

Thank u sooo much nith 🤗
Thats a huge compliment from a talented writer like you .
Your comment made my day 😳

Priyam di! 🤗
Wow! What an os! Jee bavdo ho gayo! 😛 👏 👏
Perfect! Sumo's pain, shravan consoling her and their confession!
Awesome!!

It was fabulous awesome outstanding mind blowing...
Yaar i think is forum me CVs se ache writers hai. Jake sikhao Kuch unko..
And the best part was he made her sit on his lap. How cute was that. It shows he will always take care of her.

Originally posted by: shracraze

Beautiful written! Thank you for such a lovely OS. Much appreciated😊

Thanks a lot 😃

Originally posted by: nicky13

Beautiful

Thank u nicky 😛

Originally posted by: orion23

I was online subha se..

I went off line for 10 mins and she posted😆

Jaa tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi😉

Bahut bda dil hai mere malik ka 😆