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Anamika

@Ana_mika

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Priyam meri jaan🤗

This is just so beautiful!!

We are yet to witness the wedding fiasco but i am liking this scenario better.

Love the flashbacks!!❤️

The song selection and their simple yet beautiful confession. just perfect!

Shravan's inner turmoil and Suman's break down is so heartfelt.

You've done it yet again.

Ab kya bolu...tum ne itne ache se saab kuch likh diya!

Mujhe behaad pasand aaya!

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Priyam Priyam Priyam ❤️
Loved it, will probably re read it many more times !
I just got up and you made my day !

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shracraze

@shracraze

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Beautiful written! Thank you for such a lovely OS. Much appreciated😊

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Baitu main tujhse pehle!
Priyam ka badla...😆
#BeatThat 😉

I was online subha se..

I went off line for 10 mins and she posted 😆

Jaa tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi 😉

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Me first
Res 😉

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Priyam Di 🤗
Sumos outburst was justified that part was so hearwrenching and touchy
Chomu ki toh 😡
Shravan ko realise ho gaya Shravu was guilty and their confession
Fabulous OS loved it

PS: No heels chot lag jayegi and chocolates khatam ho jaye toh batadena Di aur dedungi 😛
Lots of love and hugs🤗

Zenab mera cupcake, my firstie 🤗
Chomu sach me pitne wale kam krta hai
Thank u so much swthrt 😃
Chocolates?? Okay abhi to hai mere pas 😆
Hugs and love 🤗 ❤️

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Ana_mika
Yahan res kiya and next page pe comment aagaya! Brain donation ka side effect😆

Bola tha thoda hi dena 😆

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Haaye haaye haaye
Mar jawan soniye!

Superb! Mindblowing!

No words

Dil khush kar ditta!
#SukoonShanti
#DilGardenGarden😳

Keep writing!

Mahi meri jaan 🤗
Thank u sooo much 😃
Apki khushi se hume bahut khushi mili 😳

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: orion23
Res
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Baitu🤗
Yeh kya kar dala tune
Dil tera ho gaya😆

You used the song! It's cool.. anyway uss gaane ko leke koi inspiration hua nahi tha abhi... but kya likha hai tune!
I loved it!
Cute and sweet!
Itti aasani se confess kar diya, sigh.. obviously their love is a part of them, it should be as easy as breathing...
Prii! Take hugs🤗

Kaash aaisa ho..
And one more thing, you wanted something written on zara si dosti right? Any plot in mind? I have a few ideas😆kuch specific hai toh bol.. likh doongi😃

And love you for this one!

Vikku 🤗
Haye mar jawan 😆
Aww thank u sooo much love ❤️
Hugs right back 🤗
Tu kuch bhi likhegi achcha hi hoga. I am obsessed with that song 😆 ...jaldi likhna han
Bas iske liye *fakes anger*
Love u too ❤️

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
I loved it ! Shravan's inner turmoil was so well written and I could imagine Sumo's breakdown, keep writing !

Thank u so much saleha 😃
Glad u liked it !!

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Vikku 🤗
Haye mar jawan 😆
Aww thank u sooo much love ❤️
Hugs right back 🤗
Tu kuch bhi likhegi achcha hi hoga. I am obsessed with that song 😆 ...jaldi likhna han
Bas iske liye *fakes anger*
Love u too ❤️

Haha!

Thought process chalu hai...

I shall have something up soon..

Iske liye *fakes fear*

😆

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