Ashiq Tera - A ShraMan OS - #6MonthsofEDKV - Page 11

Originally posted by: Chaits_04

Thanks Zoya...

🤗

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibet

This is so beautiful <3 loved every bit!! What wouldnt we give to watch this unfold on the show! Lovely pice! Inpeccably written!

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing
absolutely loved it
superb

Originally posted by: sman2195

Hey Ori,

Thank You sooo much for the pm! Loveddd this OS... BRAVOOO👏👏👏 for giving us a beautiful piece. my my... in fact, i had only downloaded the song last week.. and really liked it. i had it in my playlist playing repeatedly. uff... and when i read the story while it played... i could understand why it connection to the story..

Dialogues were beautifully written yaar. Shravan's whole speech... was heart wrenching...despite, how badly he treated Sumo in the serial or in your story, not sure why I can't have or hold a grudge against Shravan.. His dialogues were right on the dot... "maar jayungi..."... then he collapses.. usually its the heroine who collapses.. but this was totally the opposite.. he is not weak.. but his Ashiqui... made him this week.. kya kya karwa deta hain pyaar aadmi ko...

Anyways, 🤗 for writing a beautiful story and remembering to sending a pm. Thank you again.

Best of luck for the next one...

ps. apologies for the late response

Originally posted by: indranigupta

Zoya

This is intense...i could very well envisage SS in this state...But, I want to see Shravan in more pain...sorry, thats the sadist in me😆

I loved it...loved it to bits..

this scenario can very welll play out..without the marriage scenario😉

Ah!... the power of love which leads to knowledge and rejuvenation😳

Our sweetest songs that tell of saddest thought😃

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Zoyi..it's so soothing cute and beautiful..
ShraMan fighting and then their confession .
So good..
Enjoyed dear..
U r fab writer and thanks dear for beautiful OS...❤️