ShraMan OS: Tears and Confessions - Page 2

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

I could feel Shravan's pain literally their confession was beautiful ! In the show they need to get locked in a room that's the only thing that can save them , loved it !

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

I could feel Shravan's pain literally their confession was beautiful ! In the show they need to get locked in a room that's the only thing that can save them , loved it !

Originally posted by: an_chau

That's a nice one... :) Pls keep writing!

Originally posted by: astonm

Omg Sara! I am sooo glad you wrote this! This is such a great piece! Your writing flows so well and you manage to capture SO much in such a concise manner!

With the way you've written this I could imagine this happening, Shravan and Suman still in the clothes from yesterday's episodes trekking up to his room. And I loved how simple the confession was, that is literally all they need. One of them needs to admit their love - preferably Sumo as you've done - and everything will start falling back into place. I loved that she followed him, ah!

And I agree with you, they do need a tear-filled confession, that's just how they are. I loved how you wrote the confession, confessing while wrapped up in a hug and crying, gah!

Once again, I loved this piece! And you should honestly consider writing more because you write really well! ❤️

-Anjali

Originally posted by: nith125

Very emotional ! Loved it 😊 👏

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

That was quite emotional... Liked it though.