'HONESTY!'-SHRAMAN THREE SHOT - COMPLETED - Page 3

very interesting story, waiting for next update

Originally posted by: poppinss

Mandy did u post this story before? Giving knee adeja vu feeling.

Originally posted by: .shivi396

Mandy
You are handling it beautifully👏
Finally Kamini Chachi did what we all want to heppen in the show.
Well I always think that ShraMan never had a real conversation till date. And that's why they are here today.They really need a real conversation where both speak as well listen to one another. Bcoz I always felt Shravan is the one who decides what their relation is.
Waiting for last Chapter...

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

No this is new. I wrote the first part yesterday. But maybe something in a scene I may have written in the past could be similar. I dont recall. Hope you liked this part!

I think we are all suffering from some Deja Vu here on the forum. Our love birds seem to be going around in circles? Have we been here before? Yes we have! LOL

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Your right. First he did Revenge mode, then Friendzone, then he realised he's in love, then he wanted to confess but Daddy issues stopped him, then he broke all ties with her etc etc. Everytime, he sets the tone.

In their Teens, Sumo decided the pace of their relationship. Now in adulthood, Shravan decides it. So it's high time they BOTH decided something together. Puri duniyako inkepyaar kekabar hai. Whole world knows, they have even admitted it to others, but ek duje ko? Kab kahoge?😡

Exactly
You got my point 👍🏼
But I think in teenage when Nirmala leave Sumo was wrong
But then she came to apologize but our guy didn't even think that at least he should listen what she wanna say but no he choose to leave
Puri Duniya ko khabar hai and they are still not confessing🤢
But than Why the hell Shravan is not trying to listen her😡
Yeah Banda Devdaas banke bhi Ku6 Nahi ukhaad sakta

Mandy, eager to see how your gonna take this forward.

This is something I want to see in the show too, how would Shrav react to Sumo's choices?Will he understand her?

superb ! loved the whole part ! waiting to see more

Finally the whole truth is out
But Nirmala's truth is not out yet
Shravan is holding himself back from voicing out his feelings now
Now Suman had to take some steps if she wants Shravan and his love back in her life
Continue soon

Very well written... Felt every word that has been exchanged between the characters of the story. Good job done.