A selfish me - A Shravan poem

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nith125

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu
Wonderful 👏

Thank you ! 😊

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nith125

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Take a bow lady
I love you!😳

Mahi 🤗 Thanks !

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: nith125

Mahi 🤗 Thanks !

But apart from this, don't you think he's given rise to a selfish Sumo, under the cover for 'sacrificing for family'?

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Roshni2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: nith125

Thanks Roshini ! Glad you liked it . I get your point, he is ruthless , I do not mean selfish in a bad sort of way. In fact I think its about time both Sumo and Shravan stop being so selfless, their own happiness is also important 😊

I know right... Sumo shouldn't have agreed to Ram's deal in the first place.. See what Preeti said that day.. Ut was wrong for her to agree to this blackmailing... Whatever would have happened it could have been handled then.. Preeti was right here.. Shravan n Sumo should be selfish for once..

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nith125

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Roshni2015

I know right... Sumo shouldn't have agreed to Ram's deal in the first place.. See what Preeti said that day.. Ut was wrong for her to agree to this blackmailing... Whatever would have happened it could have been handled then.. Preeti was right here.. Shravan n Sumo should be selfish for once..

Yes, Preethi was right. But Preethi will say that, she doesn't have to deal with feeling indebted all her life. We all bash Sumo all the time, but there is only one person she actually doesn't feel indebted to, that is Shravan. Even with Naanu, she had to do what he asks for, she had to oblige but only Shravan is truly hers, she did not think twice before hurting him so much because she believed that he was her own, but her trust is now broken.

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simran_singh_24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Beautiful Nith!

But today my heart has lost,it knows your real face

When you chose him, over me,for my rightful place

This captures Shrav's feelings so well. In the epi, I saw Shrav thawing when they had the eye lock over the pheras & vows. He was edging closer to some kinda realization before flirty fiance dropped the bomb.

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nith125

@nith125

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

But apart from this, don't you think he's given rise to a selfish Sumo, under the cover for 'sacrificing for family'?

I'd rather have a selfish Sumo than the selfless one, honestly.

Selfish Shravan = Selfish Sumo = ❤️ ❤️

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spshastr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: nith125

I'd rather have a selfish Sumo than the selfless one, honestly.
Selfish Shravan = Selfish Sumo = ❤️ ❤️

Wonderful Nith.. Selfish Sumo will also come now. And I hope the only peopl they are selfless to is each other..😳

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nith125

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: simran_singh_24
Beautiful Nith!

But today my heart has lost,it knows your real face
When you chose him, over me,for my rightful place

This captures Shrav's feelings so well. In the epi, I saw Shrav thawing when they had the eye lock over the pheras & vows. He was edging closer to some kinda realization before flirty fiance dropped the bomb.

Thank you !

Yes, he would have spoken if the Adithya had kept his mouth shut, but we can't expect that from him can we ?