ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

silverleaves

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Loved it! Was waiting for an update and we got such a nice long one!! The way they act with eachother is so cute!

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Ananya Agarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

I am obsessed with this story. Your Shravan-Suman are epitome of cuteness. I love 'em

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.SardiKiDhoop.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

THIS IS LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!

This update made me so happy, ah! They're so adorably awkward with each other, especially with the whole bed arrangement thing - the bit where Shravan purposefully pulled Sumo back on top of him was too good. And I LOVED the bit where she was tracing his face, thinking he was asleep, it reminded me so much of Shravan watching Sumo while she was asleep in the show. The way you've written their thoughts, as well, was awesome and so true to them - like I've said before, you keep so damn well to the characterization.

Shravan trying to get Sumo's attention was so adorably sweet - I could definitely picture him doing that - and that kitchen scene was so reminiscent of the one in the show, especially with how he just casually picked up that laddoo and bit into it and walked away. Ooh and now Sumo KNOWS he was purposefully trying to fluster her, I wonder what she'll make of that?

GO PUSHKAR GO!!

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Fabulous anjali..
Love it..❤️

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Waiting for the next chapter!

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hiral_2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Oh my god! I just can't.. express... myself such a beautiful update!!❤️ the start was so amazing👏 that closeness...those feelings u described it so well👏 I read the chapter twice already😳 oh poor shravan finding ways to talk to her 🤣but I just loved that part and the ladder thing oh my god 👏 kitchen part was also really nice 😳 and their position there was ❤️ pushkar coming again to disturb I can imagine shravan's expression🤣 and pushkar in full teasing mode 🤣 I wonder sumo would've turned to a tomato🤣 overall an excellent chapter👏 amazing writing skills 👏❤️

Update soon... waiting😳

Thanks for the pm❤️

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