ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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anonymousanju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

hey anjali...my name is also anjali...have read ur edkv index n also few shraman os ...I must say u really take me to different shraman world...ur just amazing yar ...loved the way u penned their love story and everything...I was speechless after reading that...I made this account especially to msg u, thank u ..pls write some more os of shraman if possible for u..n if u don't have any prblm can u pls pm me all ur shraman OS's name? love u yar ...n u wrote qubool hai index. God I also liked that serial but left in between ...I must say somewhere our choices are same ;)

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.SardiKiDhoop.

@.SardiKiDhoop.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

This was awesome! Loved how you've included Aditya and that jealousy factor in here! And I love Pushkar's character so much - I'm pretty dissatisfied with how he's been sidelined in the show currently and his lack of reaction to the Aditya-Suman marriage, especially since he's known all along that Shravan and Sumo are in love - but you've handled him beautifully here.

This handcuff idea is super cute, I love how Shravan reacted when he accidentally pulled too hard on the handcuff. And his reactions to everything are exactly how he'd behave in the show, I love how you keep SO well to the characterization. Can't wait to read what happens next! <3

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

I read this last night before bed and didn't get the chance to comment on it but I just want to let you know that I LOVE YOU FOR THIS STORY. I wish this was what the show was like :(

I am so looking forward to the next chapter UPDATE SOON DOST!

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Riya

@Ri21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

OMG OMG. THIS IS SO AMAZING. NEXT PART UPDATE IT SOON PLEASEEE

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

fabulous chappyy👏

adi s funny here😆

continue soonish😊

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pal655

@pal655

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

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ok late comment sorry . was struck with some stuffs.

i cant tell you how much i wIT FOR YOUR STORIES AND OS. you always naiil it. i always look forward to them. i just loved your previous ss meant to be and this one is also love.

thank god that you brought back the brain of malhotra boys and special thanks for sending preeti and tiwari clan US😆. pushkar character again is love but as we know the superstars are shravan and sumo .

thankgod that aditya is taken, who is the unlucky girl😛.

uff you have rocked it , thanks for the pm, and UPDATE SOON.😃

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Chapter 4:

Pushkar teasing ShraMan is always a treat! 😆 So now Pushkar is putting his plan into action! 😃 Uh-oh, Adi made an entry and Mr. Malhotra is jealous! 😳 GAH, seriously Shravan... use your brains.

Finally the kids take a trip to the farmhouse.. Didn't go too well with putting the 2 in the same car! 🤔 Pushkar needs to come up with some serious plan. 🤔

WOW.. Pushkar-Preeti and Adi's plan is fool proof! 😆

Hum Tum ek hathkadi se band ho.. aur chaabi kho jaaye... ❤️

Eagerly waiting for the night! Continue soon Anji... 🤗

~ Mrina <3