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Ammy

@--Amulya--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

thanx for this yaar, especially when the whole forum is in such a bad mood

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Beautiful OS! Very well written!!!

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Beautiful.

The show is taking the most dangerous twist now. I am dreading and waiting at the Same time but it would be so nice to see THIS between them.

After all said and done when sumo will face the worst hit of her life, I wish CVs show something like this. It would be perfect and so on point about their relationship.

Anyway, it was amazing.

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Anjali yaar perfect,just perfect. Their relationship is beyond words and the way Shravan emotes his feelings in his heart is so precious and worth cherishing. You've caught every second of Shravan's sensitivity so well and I am so in love with his extremely caring and sensitive soul, which you've clearly depicted in this one-shot.

Actually I too had penned a one-shot...but now I'm in such a dilemma after seeing the promo;it just ripped my heart off because I couldn't bear to see any one,be it Shravan or Sumo, suffering a torturous heartbreak as such. And I don't know if I should publish the one-shot here yaar...

Thanks for ur PM and keeping me in the updates. Luv ur writing!!!

Cheers,

Jassie

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Phenomenal is the word here... amazing write up!!!
I loved the way u described Shravan's feelings regarding Suman... his wishes to spend a life with her... love her.. care for her... it was breathtakingly beautiful!! I was literally able to imagine how Shravan would have been gazing at her, imagining a beautiful life with her!! Loved it to the core!!
Anjali I have a request... can we have an 18+ OS please... something between the chaos of the wedding at Tiwari killa... it'll be super exciting!!! ☺️
I may sound like an utter besharam but I need one to relieve myself of the disturbing and frustrating track in the show!! Please!! *puppy face*

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kennashreign

@kennashreign

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

This OS makes a lot of sense. Good job, Anjali! I hope things get better from now on

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Awww beautiful heart-touching amazing Anjali..Thanks a lot yaar!

Love,

Spandana

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mineforever

@mineforever

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Wow.Amazing. 😊
I want this scene to happen soon since I think nanu will suffer an attack in the show..
I hope whatever u have written happens or maybe something along these lines..

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Beautiful . <3
'5 more minutes'
Then she had to be strong but this time , not alone .

'Ek Duje Ke Vaaste'

-God bless

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astonm

@astonm

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: jassie_17
Anjali yaar perfect,just perfect. Their relationship is beyond words and the way Shravan emotes his feelings in his heart is so precious and worth cherishing. You've caught every second of Shravan's sensitivity so well and I am so in love with his extremely caring and sensitive soul, which you've clearly depicted in this one-shot.
Actually I too had penned a one-shot...but now I'm in such a dilemma after seeing the promo;it just ripped my heart off because I couldn't bear to see any one,be it Shravan or Sumo, suffering a torturous heartbreak as such. And I don't know if I should publish the one-shot here yaar...

Thanks for ur PM and keeping me in the updates. Luv ur writing!!!

Cheers,
Jassie

First of all thank you! And secondly, if you feel like publishing it you definitely should, I know it may not make sense anymore because of the current promo/track, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't post it if you want to :)

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