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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

wow just amazing

your stories always transcend emotions n this one is no exception

truly mesmerising

thnx for PM

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

I was thinking that you should totally rewrite all of the PreeKar wedding track to be ShraMan-licious, please Anjali?

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astonm

@astonm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: thefangirllife
I was thinking that you should totally rewrite all of the PreeKar wedding track to be ShraMan-licious, please Anjali?

I have been debating it, but I want to see how they handle this in the end before I start writing anything about it - I feel like ShraMan are going to end up getting married at the end of all of this.

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eleutheromania

@eleutheromania

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Woah. This was even better than the last three similar ones (Desire, Appetence and Reverie), which is quite a feat. You've simply outdone yourself with this piece. And the thing is that your stories seem to fit better with the initial feeling of the show than the actual story.

This was hot, I wish Shravan had done something like this - especially after Sumo had a day-dream about him kissing her. This one is my favourite now, probably only until I read your next story though.

You should really consider writing professionally.

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jazz

@jazmeen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

I reread again lol can never get enough of your brilliant writing

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

I am so sorry, I just realised I never commented on this.

I loved this. You had such a nice and different take on ShraMan during the PreeKar marriage track. I like how you have written it. The emotions flow so well. It's the right amount of romance and communication which we never got...

I have a request to make Anjali, please if you can, try and write your version of the story from the PreeKar wedding track as I feel that is when things started going down...

Thank you for the PM!!

Edited by PrincessAshVik - 8 years ago