Gumshuda- Shravan's brain OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heya folks!!! Wassup!!! Fed up with the ego game ?? Dont worry I am back with another OS . This time not on any dish 😆
Kispe???...janne ke liye aage padhiye 😆 . Just for fun . No offence meant

GUMSHUDA

"Help me please !!!" *Coughs*
"Is there anyone??? Someone take me out of this cupboard" *sneezes*


*Sound of footsteps nearing*

"Hey!!! Please save me. Please" *sobs*

"I am Shravan's brain. Help me and I will tell me story . "


*Screeching sound of opening of door*

"Thank you so much guys. I was suffocated by lack of oxygen. " *Takes deep Breath*

Okay so you all saved me I am gonna tell why was I locked in that cupboard? Lets start..


When I was little I was very sharp , you can say genius. *Smug look*
I could solve rubik cube in few mins. Then I met a girl Suman tiwari. I sent signals of love and his heart started beating for her. But she broke his heart and hurt my feelings ...yeah FEELINGS no need to dilate your pupils *annoyed*

I was sad for few days but shravan went to london for higher studies and I got busy but didnt forget her . Her innocent smile, her tinkling laughter, her beautiful face , their cute little fights everything was secured within me. Shravan got a degree and me a nickname 'Oxford grad brain'
He decided to return back to india. I was elated . After 10 long years I will get new information to store. She must have grown up now in beautiful woman *dreamy eyes*

Shhh... dont tell this to his heart . We are not at talking terms. *Whispers*
Ohh so you have sympathy for his heart?? Then go and hear the story from that beloved shravan's heart . *Fakes anger*


* Murmuring voices*

Are you guys apologising?? Ohh no need of that. I have a big heart.
Now what?? *Rolls eyes* Its my personal heart . Ok if I hear one more voice I am not gonna tell you the interesting part ...why and how was I kidnapped??


*Silence*

That's better *grins* . So before you developed feels for his heart where was I ???

When he saw her, his heart started beating erratically. I had to send it signals to calm down but the stupid fellow didnt want to listen . So I told him to ignore her.

What??? *Snaps*
She ignored him when he needed the support of his best friend. Why cant he do the same?? No no i didnt plan to remain angry for long...I can never be. Yeah I am a softy * blushes*


Then an evil man named khosla forged papers of tiwari killa . Sumo was miserable. I couldnt see tears in her beautiful eyes. So I decided to make peace with his heart. Me and his heart are best buddies when we are together we can make wonders happen. So I helped him solve the case. But where did the heart go?? *Frowns*
Ohh!! Its with sumo. Place where it belongs *Grins*
Me and his heart decided to make him confess his love, even his love letter was a part of our plan .
But sumo brought back his mother. This time his heart won over me. His feelings of hatred towards his mother were stronger than my rational thinking. Cherry on the top was his father fueling his hatred since childhood. Many times I tried to argue with his heart but he shut me up as this was not my department.

That was the fateful day when I got kidnapped.

Flashback

Shravan was sleeping peacefully in his room.
Someone sneaked into his room. I wondered who might it be at this ungodly hour.
But my eyes popped out when I found he was his father Ramnath. But what was he doing this late in his room??

"Why is he coming near me?? *Scared*
He came a little more closer , closed my eyes and covered my mouth with his hand
"Arghhh ...how many times do I have to tell you this ?? Ok its the last time . Every inanimate object has a life of its own. We have the same organs and emotions as you guys. Okay maybe somewhat different but still we do have eyes, mouth, heart etc."

Where am I ??? *Touches the wall*
Feels like wall... *touches the door*
Umm its wooden. Is it a cupboard?? Yes definitely its a cupboard *throws up fist in air*
But how am I going to come out?? Poor boy what will he do without me?? *Teary eyed*

-------flashback ends---------

Days passed ,I saw him getting manipulated by his father again and again . Even you guys used to curse me , dont you?? But what could i do when I was locked in that cupboard *Sad smile*
Thank you now that you all are my saviour , I owe you the thing you have been waiting for... happy ending to the love story of shravan and suman. Guys take me to shravan . He is in utmost need of me now. I have to deal with two villains now.. ramnath and aditya . Relax dude!! They dont call me 'oxford grad brain' for no reason . Gimme some credit . I will set everything right . Just wait and watch.



So how was it?? Do hit the like button and drop yor valuable comments if you like the story. If not kafi din ho gye chappal khaye to you can throw them đŸ€Ł Ignore the typos

Hope to meet you soon
Till then take care
Priyam




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Manyata5 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So Shravan is getting his brain back?😆
You truly do give life to everything
First food and now organs
Wonder whats next?😉
It was amazing btw
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good one Priyam ! Love it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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every inanimate objeect has body parts...hell yeah...😆
u r a rockstar... bas. aur kuch nahi..how did u enjoy ur bday????

I wanted to pm u...damn but had sucha bad schedule ki kya batau... jab wapis aayi it was already next day... 😔
i saw edkv also at 12 am.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful awesome
so hope cvs also return oxford brian soon to its right place
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ong...bestes os...reallyloved itđŸ€Ł
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tere Yeh OS ne
OxfordBrain Par Prakaash Dalaa
Tere Yeh OS Ne Mujhe Haaye...
Maar Daalaa , Allah! Maar Daalaa😆

đŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€Ł

Brilliant as always! Bechaare Brain ko waapis laao koi!

Awesome
Next - Uska heart😆😉

Love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brain OS đŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€Ł
Superb..


Dekhne mein hai haseen
Rehti thi ye kahi
Haan kho gayi haan kho gayi đŸ€Ș
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was brilliant 👏
And funny as hell đŸ€Ł
Your imagination needs an applause 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow yet another marvellous take on something unusual!Ur imagination just floors me all the time!I wish u could lend one small pulse or vibe from ur brain to poor Shravan Malhotras brain too...coz even when he had his brains trust was far away from him!!.He needs your support Priyam to not let his brain not go into an ICU again!
More than him it's the cvs brain in cold storage which need to thaw soon!! I hope it happens really soon!
Loved this one the conflict bw brain and heart ..just so much there!
Keep writing!

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