Shraman Two Shot (TS)- PAIN- note on page 2, last part- pg 3

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

It was beautiful! Keep writing on ShraMan!

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Flibbertigibbet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

This was really nice! Great work! Keep it up!

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Beautifully written dear... 👏

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Mehwish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Keep writing girl. It was sucha well written piece from a new writter, beautifully pennes down & even good ending.

Much love.

Waiting for next story

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Suzaina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

This was better than the last one

Infact in was perfect

I loved their conversation

And the reunion was beautiful

Keep writing

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

perfect ending
absolutely brilliant
loved it

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Shubhangishubhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Amazing👏...Though ending was so perfect 😛but a part of mine wants you to continue with your write up on shraman after the confession, just like the way you described their emotional meet in part 1

Apart from this the sweet moments of the two brothers was so overwhelming...plz come up soon with your write ups on Sharman's married life...adi and shravan's bonding ...so that we'll able to catch some of their sweet tiff and banters 😆