Imaginary episode#12

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello EDKVians and ShraManians 🤗

One more sunday night ..isn't that great..😆 coz its going to be one more imaginary episode tonight 😃 and that too #12😃😛

chalo lets start this 😉

Here is the small writeup of yesterday imaginary episode #11 precap :

Shravan cupped her cheeks and said "sumo bol kyu nhi deti jo bolna chahti ho..kyu apne dil ki baat zubaan tak aane se rok rahi ho..."

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Try to include the precap in the episode...

So its already 10 pm IST.

note :

1) this episode will end by 11 pm IST.

2) if you put a res for writing episode, then you will have only 5 min to write (unres) your part of story after previous res is unresed by other writer.

3)anyone can participate.

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Shravan cupped her cheeks , made her look directly into his eyes.
"Sumo bol kyun nhi deti jo kehna chahti ho. Kyun apni baat ko apni zubaan tak ane se rok rahi ."
She gave him a sad smile," Har bat batayi nahi ja sakti shravan."
She tried to leave but he held her wrist.
"Sumo, you cant leave without giving the answer." He said
She stood like a statue.
"Bolo sumo." He said now growing impatient.
She tried to free her hand but his grip tightened.
"Ahhh shravan chhodo mujhe dard ho rha hai." She winced.
"Aur tum jo kar rahi ho usse mujhe bahut dard ho rha hai."he said his voice pained , hurt visible in his eyes.
And released his hold.
"Jao chhod diya." He said and turned back to leave .
Sumo stood there dumbfounded , tears rolling down her cheeks.
This was what she wanted , so why does it hurt so much??

Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago

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potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

Unressed.
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"Jao chhod diya."
And those words brought her defensive walls crashing down and the dam of tears burst open. She knew this was the moment. And she knew she was running out of time.
Till now, she had hoped that she wouldn't have to extend her hand to rekindle their relationship but now she was left alone, with the ball in her court. And with her lips sealed forever.
"Aaj tumne sachmein mujhe akela chhod diya, Shravan", She whispered to his retreating figure.
She fell over the bed and kept crying. " Kyu kiya aapne aisa, Ramnath uncle! Kyu aap Shravan ko uske sabse kareeb logo se door kar rahe ho? Kyu aap humaare pyaar ko samaj ne ka mauka nahi de rahe ho? Kyu????

Nanu, who intending to talk to her about the invitees, had stopped dead outside her room listening to Shravan's soft, pleading voice. It didn't take him long to figure out what was going on.

Edited by potterginny - 9 years ago

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nanu was left confused.Worried,he walked inside Suman's room only to notice her sitting on the floor crying helplessly.

Slowly he went to her and kept his hand on her head and said softly"Suman betaa.."

Suman immediately shot up and hugged her Nanu crying her heart out

"Nanu kyun,kyun sab mujhe chod ke chale jaate hai,kyun mein koi khushi deserve nahi karti,KYUN?" She yelled,tears still making their way out of her eyes

"Suman beta...shhh...Idhar dekho aur batao,hua kya hai?Meine tumhari aur Shravan ke baate sunni." Nanu said turning Sumo so she could face him

Suman wiped her tears and narrated the story to her Nanu.

"Mere bete kab itni badi ho gayi,pata he nahi chala.Ruko mein phone milata hoon" Nanu said creasing Suman's hair who now had her head partially on her Nanu's lap.

"Par Nanauuu.." Suman called out worried but it was too late

"Hello,Shravan beta"Nanu said over the phone

Shravan?Why was he calling Shravan?Sumo thought

"Haan voh beta Suman,...Suman ko kuch ho gaya hai..voh aankhen nahi khol rahi..jaldi aoo" And with saying that he ended the call

"Nanuu"Suman asked shocked,her nanu had just lied

Nanu smiled and said while leaving the room ,"Ab Shravan yahan aa raha hai,mein chalta hoon,yaad rakhna meine tumhe kya samjhaya hai"

Edited by SleepyPsycho - 9 years ago

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Shivangee

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res I was waiting For atleast 3 Res before Me😛
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Did her Nanu Just lied For Her.
Now What she will going to do.

Shravan Came In her Room as Fast as he could.
She was Lying There beside bed at Floor.
Nanu was nowhere.
Where Did Nanu Go.
This whole situation made him confuse.

He goes near sumo.
There was a box beside Sumo.
He Take it and See the everything Closely
Their Memories Together.
He was So lost in remembering those Moments that He missed that Girl Lying Few minutes back is sitting Beside him,with A content Smile on her Face.

"Sumo You Remember Everything That Heppened Between Us".
He asked a mere mumble.

"YES" and her answer get him back to his Trance.

So so sorry For being Late

Edited by .shivi396 - 9 years ago

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

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shravan heard her voice saying yes...his emotional eyes travelled towards sumo facing him with a different emotions..

It was not the first time he came to her room,but he used to come into her room all often.,but he never noticed this box or perhaps she didn't let him notice this box..coz after his first visit to tiwari killa after coming back from london, she had packed these memories in this box when he had told her to move on...this box was always near him but time never let him see that box ...perhaps, this was the right time to see this box when they needed to know their feelings for each other..

Shravan hold her shoulders and immediately hugged her...his grip was tight so the hug was...the moment when she let him feel her heart..the moment she was listening his heart beating and a smile curved her face..

"sumo , you love me right" shravan asked her knowing the answer of his question himself...because this memories has told him what she feels for him..

Sumo broke the hug and looked in his intense eye..

ps : ameesha pls continue from here where i left..

Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

Guys i unressed my part
Yagneshri continue 😛

Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago

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Shivangee

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Posted: 9 years ago

Priyam🥺
Dil Tod Diya Dono Ka🥺
BTW beautiful Write-up👏

Edited by .shivi396 - 9 years ago

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res for the end

zoya ..we miss you a lot

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their lips never wanted to apart but their lips parts away to have a breath as both were feeling out of breath .

This could not have been better than this...this moment with their childhood memories lying by their side watching them from their frames ..none of them had thought that this would be happen in this way..

"kyu chup rhi ab tak sumo" he said cupping her right cheek..

"ab toh bol diya na " sumo said .

"tumhari yeh argument karne ki aadat nhi jayegi na" shravan said pulling her closer to himself..

"yeh aadat chali gayi toh tumhe aise kaise dekh paungi" sumo said mischievously..winking at him.

"acha , toh iss fighter ko mujhse sirf fight karna pasand hai" shravan said pulling her more closer.

"aur bhi kuch pasand hai " sumo said in soft voice.

"kya " shravan asked getting romantic feeling from her voice.

"yeh..." sumo said and give him a small peck on his cheek..

he could not do anything accept smiling on her sweet gesture.,

and they remain in their hug once again..feeling each others closeness.

Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago