Shraman FF : Become one

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One everything will come out and no lies can survive after.


It's shaadi time in Malhotra house, everything will start with sangeeth.

The reserve a grand hotel for the event.

Both families come first in the venue.

Shravan wears a green hot kurutha and Suman in pink lehenga.

Suman tries to avoid Shravan but e just glares her.

Mamiji announces that first pandit ji will do a pooja for the couple.

Kamini makes faces.

Pandit ji comes and starts the pooja.

Everyone sit.

A family come with a guy.

He comes to mamiji, he takes her blessing.

Mamiji : Adithya kaisi hoo tum?

Adithya : Me bilkul tikko aunty ji.

Mamiji : Beto beside Suman.

Adithya : Hi suman, you look beautiful.

Suman ignores him. Shravan fumes in anger to see this guy beside Suman.

Pandit ji asks butter.

Mamiji checks the bag : I forget the butter.

Suman : I will buy it.

Pandit ji : No beta we need butter of bride's house.

Suman : Ok so I will go to Tiwari's villa.

Nanaji : Suman you can't go alone.

Suman : Per...

Aditya : It's ok I will accompany her.

Nanaji : Okay.

Shravan is disturbed to see them together.

They leave in sumac's car.

One hour passes but they don't come back.

He feels anxious.

Kamini comes to him : Kya waa puthar ji?

Shravan : Kuch nai chachi.

Kamini : Accha can you go to see about them please? They don't pick up my call.

Shravan : Ok chachi.

He leaves.

He drives to her house. No one is here.

Shravan thoughts : Damn it where is she?

He drives and sees someone like Suman's buying samosa.

Shravan stops the car beside her.

Suman is surprised to see him.

Shravan angry : What are you doing here? Where is your phone? And where is this man? I mean Aditya?

Suman : First relax, I am fine by car broke. He goes to repair it.

Shravan has tears.

Suman feels sad to see him like that. She wishes to hug him and let his pain gone but can't.

Shravan : Sit in the car.

Suman : No I will wait for Adu.

Shravan : Adu?

Suman smiling : Yaa, Aditya his nickname is Adu.

Shravan : He will come, you come with me.

Suman : No

He forces her to sit.

Shravan also sits and starts the car.

There is no noise.

Shravan in his mind : If something happens to you Suman I will die. I can't let someone near you other than me.

Suman glares him.

They come to the venue.

She enters in it while he is parking his car.

Everyone start the prayer.

Vandy bhabhi : Now the guests will come so we will be ready for the sangeeth.

Every couple dance, Suman to irritates Shravan dance with Aditya.

Shravan feels hurt. He leaves from here with tears.

Next day, it's mehendi and haldi ceremony.

Designers come to apply the mehendi.

Suman is the last to apply the mehendi.

Shravan enters in same time with haldi.

Designer : Name?

Suman : Shravan.

Designer writes on her two hand Shravan's name.

Suman is stunned to see his name on her hands.

She runs the the bathroom to remove it but can't.

She goes to the kitchen to prepare for the tea.

Shravan comes to drink water and perceives his name.

Shravan : Suman you write my name. Why? Do you love me?

Suman : No galti se...

Shravan comes near her : Admit it Suman.

Suman : Shravan leave from here.

Shravan : I will make you confess it.

Shravan puts a kiss on her cheek.

She blushes when Aditya passes, he thinks it's for her.

Suman goes to her room.

She thinks that why she has to go away from Shravan for his dad. She will make him understand that she is the right choice for him.


Precap : Shraman romance. Ramnath will learn from his mistake. One everything will come out and no lies can survive after.

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