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Shikha Singhania

@Nimik

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow nith!

U beautifully penned down their feelings!!

Awesome👏

Do write more often

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: EasternViolet.
Awww wish it was so easy for Suman to tell Shravan what's actually wrong. She can finally let it out. Very well written x

She has to try, being rude and pushing Shravan away is only going to make it worse.

Thank you !

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Manyata5
Sumo had enough now, didnt she?
It was really beautiful
Shravans dialogue had me in tears
Keep writing

Glad you liked it ! Yes and about Sumo, I think its about time she gave up.

Edited by nith125 - 9 years ago

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: .shivi396
This is Amazing🤗
I always think that it is too easy To go with Simple yet Beautiful Story.
IDK WTH CVs are bent to complecate it😵

Thank you 🤗 I agree with you. Its getting very complicated now. If they both have to be married they should be able to share everything. I personally believe Sumo should have told Shravan and Shravan should have asked as well.

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Ishfying

@Ishfying

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Very beautiful. I loved it ❤️
One small request can you please write more?? I loved your style of writing

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish
Very beautiful. I loved it ❤️
One small request can you please write more?? I loved your style of writing

Thank you so much ! Glad you liked it. Will definitely write more.

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Beautiful❤️

I loved it from starting to the end.

All the emotions beautifully and perfectly written.

Do write more😊

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Mind blowing OS nith125 seriouslyy it was amazing!!!
Like I loved each n every bit of it
Just hope this to happen in the show as well 😳
Just want to read it again and again 👏 😳

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho
BeautifulHeart
I loved it from starting to the end.
All the emotions beautifully and perfectly written.
Do write more😊

Originally posted by: Ammiey
Mind blowing OS nith125 seriouslyy it was amazing!!!
Like I loved each n every bit of it
Just hope this to happen in the show as well 😳
Just want to read it again and again 👏 😳

Thank you ! Glad you liked it 😊