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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Castile2

Hi!
I'm Cas 😊

I read your story in a go and it felt so fresh dude!

Dr. Malhotra?! 😳

I'm wondering how Dr. Shravan is going to go about Dr. Suman Heart-Breaker Tiwar! 😆 😛

Just one request, don't abandon this one? Pretty please? 😳

Update soonish this time...thank you!

Cas


Hey Cas! Thanks dear! And I am so overwhelmed that everyone is so encouraging. I will update regularly I swear ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: riyaankaa


Thank you so much Sanjh! ❤️ I will update soon.



Please try to pm me if it's possible for you..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Itssanjh



Please try to pm me if it's possible for you..


Sure dear! Expect one soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Riya ..

I read all part one go... Its different concept... Shraman's are doctors...

It is updated after long... I hope now u will continue soon

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Hi Riya ..


I read all part one go... Its different concept... Shraman's are doctors...

It is updated after long... I hope now u will continue soon

Vinu


Yes dear! I will keep updating frequently. Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 4
Of dancing and fainting..

I took a day off the next day to revive myself a bit. I went to the hospital next day.

"Neelam! Can you send me the list of the appointments I have today?" I asked her.

"Oh! Dr.Shravan! Sure. I will send it through someone in a while" She said.

"Thanks!" I said.

"Neelam! Can you contact Dr.Arjun about the patient in room 109 with concussion His phone is not reachable?" Suman came in and asked Neelam.

"Oh is it? I will contact him soon." Neelam said and turned to me.

"Hey doc!" Suman said greeting me with a smile.

When she turned towards me. I frowned. She looked so worn out and dull with big eye bags. It looked like she did not even sleep a wink.

"Suman are you okay?" I asked concerned.

"Yes!" She said. She looked like she is in a daze.

"Dr. Suman you should go home. You have been here for almost 30 hours straight." Neelam butted in.

"What? Why will you be here for so long. You don't even have a long shift?"I almost screamed. For some reason I was angry.

"Chill doc. I was covering for a friend." She said.

"Why would you cover for someone? Listen I am going to report this." I said my anger rising up.

"Doc No! I volunteered to take it. I have my concerns. Ignore this will you? Please!" She said.

Before I can say anything. She turned to Neelam.

"Dr.Kamini is going to be here soon right? I need to assist her for a surgery" She said massaging her neck.

"Yes Dr" Neelam told her with a sigh.

"Thanks doc. See you around and don't worry."She said and left.

I could'nt understand her. I don't know what the hell is she thinking. She think she will be a good doctor working off like this with no care for herself? That kid needs a scolding.

"Actually doctor, Suman ma'am is mostly in the hospital. She does'nt go home for a long time. She just goes there to fresh up. But its been long so I am worried." Neelam said.

"I will take care!" I said leaving for my cabin.

I went out to have a little coffee break. While I saw Dr.Kamini shouting on Suman. Panicking I went there.

"If you don't want to do this. Leave! We don't need doctors who slack off like you" She shouted on Suman.

"I am really sorry doctor! I assure I will never repeat this" Suman said bowing down.

Shit! Mom can be scary. Dr.Kamini Malhotra is my mom and is a neurosurgeon in my hospital. That rude lady does'nt spare anyone at all.

"Whatever!" My mom said a left. I sighed.

Apparently Suman was a bit inattentive in the surgery. Not at all cool. I saw her sighing and walking weakly towards the resident's room. I followed her.

She suddenly stopped walking. The corridor was totally empty. I also stopped on my tracks. She took a pair of ear phones from her pocket and put them in her ears. And She started Dancing. Woah I was weirded out. Her moves are like total hip-hop and cool. But what the hell is she doing I thought.

And suddenly there was a thud and suman was on the floor. Thinking she slipped accidentally I rushed to her only to see that she was unconscious.

"Shit! Suman! Suman!" I tapped her cheeks. She did not get up. I picked her up and took her to a ward nearby.

Its exhaustion. This woman did not eat anything properly since yesterday. I huffed and sat there glaring at her when she looks so peaceful in sleep with a saline bottle. She needs some lecture.

She grumbled as she opened her eyes and jumped up.

"Shhh..Why are you so hasty?" I kinda nagged.

She registered the situation for a few seconds.

"Why would you do something like this to your body? Are the heavens falling?Why are you like this?" I questioned her seriously.

"Doc. Why so serious?" She made an innocent face.

"I need an answer Doctor Suman!" I sad nonchalant.

"I am always like this!" She answered simply.

"Exactly! Why? Do you even know what are you doing? This is not cool." I did'nt back down with my lecture.

"Can we go out?" She stood up with the strollable stand with the saline bottle.

I just followed her. We sat on a bench silently. I was still waiting for her answer.

"Did something happen? Do you want to share something?" I asked a bit coolly this time.

"I just don't like going home. It's so lonely." She sighed.

I looked at her intently.

"I live alone and it's boring" She said.

I sighed. At the first glance I thought she is nothing but happy go lucky. But I heard from someone that she lives alone and her family passed away but I thought she does'nt let it get to her. I guess she has her vulnerabilities like anyone else.

"Why the hell did you dance?" I asked still reminiscing the most amusing sight.

"I was stressed and tensed after the scolding. That is how I get out of it"She said casually.

"When you are that tired? Wah! So when you are lonely you overwork, when you are stressed you dance like a whacko?" I said totally amused by her. She is weird.

"Everyone has their own ways!" She pouted and I laughed and laughed. She just glared at me.

"Do you want to come with me?" I asked out of no where.

"Where?" She asked flustered.

"My house. I am done for the day and I am bored. Since you are weak and need healthy food I will cook for you" I said.

"You don't need to do this." She said expressionless.

"Don't worry! I am very good cook. You will see. I was planning to invite you anyways you are coming that's it." I said catching her hand forcing her to get up.

"Oh doc! You have a stubborn side too. I guess I can never say no for food."She said laughing.

There she is! The charmer returns.

A/N: That's it guys! Here is part 4. Do read and drop your feedback. Thanks in advance! Also if you want pm's please do send me buddy requests.

Edited by riyaankaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Riya 😊

Now this was quick update!
Did I mention how Suman calling Shravan Doc sounds cool?

Shravan calls Sumo a kid. Oh. And a whako. And weird. Interesting.

Kamini is Shravan's Mom?!! 😲

I wanna see him cook for her!! 😳

Can I say that we are going to see a lot of pampering and babying in the future?! 😛

Thanks for the PM and looking forward to the next part!!

Till then

Cas
Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Awww this is different & cute..read all parts in one go..lovely dear!

Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
By every update it's getting more interesting! Suman and h her weirdness ! Loved that dancing part. Please update soon. And thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Awesome..Read it all in one go
Shraman as doctors looks really interesting
Waiting for next chapter..

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