SHRAMAN SS--DOORIE-- chap 13 (LAST PART)[pg 54]{17/9/17} - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

superb update
totally loved it
superb

glad u loved it
thnk u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Nice update
He is solving others problem because he knows the pain of leaving alone

glad u loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: nileshni679

Nice Update. So Shravan was dreaming poor Shravan 😭. Sumo come back please

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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: nith125

Beautiful 👏 Do update soon !

thanks dear
will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

beautiful update dear.

sumo ki entry karo ab..
thanks for pm dear..

really thnx dear
will pm u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Hey angel!!!
Sorry i am extremely late but was really busy .
Fabulous chapter 👏
Poor shravu he misses her so much 😭
Dont make him wait longer ...mila do shraman ko
Plzzz update soonish
Thanks for the pm darling 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Hey angel!!!
Sorry i am extremely late but was really busy .
Fabulous chapter 👏
Poor shravu he misses her so much 😭
Dont make him wait longer ...mila do shraman ko
Plzzz update soonish
Thanks for the pm darling 😃


its absolutely alright dear

really thnx dear

don't worry dear, next chapter mein koshish karungi ki shraman ko mila dun
waise possibility jyada hai

will try to update soon dear but i am little busy these days

again a gr8 thnx dear
Edited by angel_writer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Hey!
I'm so sorry it took me so long to comment!
Shravan's pain is so well depicted..
He misses her ..
Please in dono ko jaldi jaldi saath kar do!
Can't wait to read the next!
Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: orion23

Hey!

I'm so sorry it took me so long to comment!
Shravan's pain is so well depicted..
He misses her ..
Please in dono ko jaldi jaldi saath kar do!
Can't wait to read the next!
Update soon!


its absolutely alright dear😊
your appreciations really means a lot ❤️
try karungi ki in dono ko next chapter mein milla dun
waise possibility zyada hai
will try to update soon
again a gr8 thnx dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
hiii to all my dear frnds
i know i am too much late with the update
i am really sorry actually i was really busy with my studies and again my exams are going to start ...hope u all understand
ok i am here with chapter 3
plzz ignore the mistakes

so here we go...

recape-Shravan-"jab aap iss shaadi jaise relation mein hote ho toh its all about excepting each others imperfections and little compromise...and jo log yeh time rehte nahi samajh paten hai toh iska result bahut drastic hota hai...aur phir bahut dard hota hai"

And took a deep breath

Shravan-"mera kaam tha aapko samjhana so i did it" and left from there


CHAPTER 3

Shravan entered in his room and banged the door behind him and sat on the sofa and closed his eyes and after sometime he heard a knock

Shravan-"aa jao" and pushkar entered into the room and went towards shravan and kept his hand on shravan's shoulder

Pushkar-"Bhaiya are you ok" and shravan stood up

Shravan-"no I am not, I need some peace" and shravan turned to other side such that his back was facing pushkar's front

Pushkar-"Bhaiya Vo..(pushkar came in front of shravan)aise bhi aapko Mumbai jaana hai then why don't you go there. Aapke liye change bhi Ho jayega aur kaam ka kaam bhi"

Shravan-"I think you are right, main aaj hi ticket book kar leta hun"

Pushkar-"ok bhai got to go, you take care"

Shravan-"hmmm" and pushkar left from there and shravan called his PA

Shravan-"a ticket to mumbai"

PA-"sir kab ke liye chahiye"

Shravan-"tomorrow morning"

PA-"ok sir i will check it"

Shravan-"ok" and disconnected the call and started his packing. Suddenly Kamini entered into the room without knocking

Kamini-"shravan puttar" and kamini saw that shravan was packing his clothes

Kamini-"puttar tu kahan jaa raha hai"

Shravan-"vo" but he could say any thing

Kamini(excitedly)-"kahin tu london wapas toh nahin jaa raha naa"

Shravan-"nahi chachi, vo main mumbai jaa raha hun, kuch kaam hai"

Kamini-"achha puttar ji"

Shravan-"aapko ko koi kaam tha"

Kamini-"haanji puttar ji, vo bhaisaab bula rahen hai"

Shravan-"haan mujhe bhi papa se kaam tha, aap chaliye main aata hun" and kamini went from there

And shravan completed his packing and went to ram. Shravan knocked the door

Ram-"aao shravan" and shravan went inside

Shravan-"papa maine mumbai ke liye ticket book karne ko diya hai"

Ram-"par itni jaldi ki koi zaroorat ni thi, kuch dino baad bhi jaa saktey thein tum"

Shravan-"i think papa kaam hai time se khatam ho jaye toh sahi hai" but shravan didn't told ram the real reason

ram -"par phir bhi, ok as you wish"

shravan-"papa aap uske dad inform kar dijiye ga"

ram-"ok i will, waise tum uske bete ka phone no. bhi le lo,it will help u" and gave shravan his no.

Shravan-"papa uska naam kya hai"

Ram-"rohan mehra"

Shravan-"mujhe kuch kaam hai main jaata hun" and left from there and went into his room and sat on the sofa suddenly his phone ringed it was his PA

Shravan-"ticket book ho gyi??"

PA-"yes sir, tomorrow morning 10 am"

Shravan-"ok" and disconnected the call and checked his packing.

Shravan(thought)-"main Rohan ko inform kar deta hun" and called his no.

IN MUMBAI

In a very big mansion, a phone was ringing. A woman ran towards the room in which phone was kept

Woman(shouted)-"Rohan tumhara phone hai" Rohan spoke from inside washroom

Rohan-"kaun hai" and the woman picked up the phone and saw a unknown number

Woman -"unknown no."

Rohan-"keh do i am busy aur uska naam bhi puch Lena"

Woman-"ok" and picked up the phone and in the mean time phone got disconnected and rohan came out of the washroom

Rohan-"Kiska phone tha suman" and suman turned to him

Suman-"pata nahi jab tak receive karti phone cut Ho gya"

Rohan-"oh!! Main check kar leta hun"

Suman-"main tumhare liye coffee le aati hun" and she was about to leave

Rohan-"sirf mere liye nahi apne liye bhi Lana" and suman smiled to him and went from there.

Rohan called the no.

Rohan-"hello"

Shravan-"hello,Mr.Rohan Mehra"

Rohan-"ya i am but sorry, I didn't recognise you"

Shravan-"Shravan Malhotra,your father must have told you"

Rohan-"oh, ya ya I remember, you are the son of ram Uncle"

Shravan-"yes...I just called you to inform that I am coming to Mumbai tomorrow"

Rohan-"oh, ok than I will send someone to pick you up from airport"

Shravan-"ok then see you tomorrow" and disconnected the call.

Mumbai

And suman entered inside the room with two coffee mugs

Suman-"lo coffee" and passed him a cup of coffee and sat beside him on the couch

Suman-"Kiska phone tha"

Rohan-"arre Vo Jo ek property case hai na"

Suman-"hmmm"

Rohan-"toh uske liye dad ne ek lawyer ke baare Mein bataya tha, Vo actually dad ke friend ka beta hai"

Suman-"oh,achha ek baat sach sach batao zyada problem wala case toh nahi hai na" and Rohan kept the cup of coffee on the table

Rohan-"suman aesi koi baat nahi hai"

Suman-"agar koi problem nahi hai toh bahar se lawyer ko bulane Ki kya zaroorat thi"

Rohan-"actually dad ek hi hearing Mein iss property Ki problem ko khatam kar Dena chahten hai"

Suman-"hmmm"

Rohan-"suman(he kept his hand on her's and slightly squeezed i.e.,a sign of assurance)koi problem nahi hai tum tension mat lo"

Suman-"ok(and smiled) waise naam kya hai lawyer ka"

Rohan-"shra" but before he could complete and kid came running towards suman

Kid-"mamma"

Suman-"haan mera baby"

Kid-"aapke kiara ko ninni aa rahi hai" and suman made kiara sat on her lap

Suman-"kiara aapne apna milk finish kiya"

Kiara-"haan finish kar liya, aap dadi ko puch lijiye, dadi ke samne hi finish kiya"

Suman-"good girl" and kissed on her cheeks

Rohan-"Vo toh meri beti hai hi" and caressed her cheeks and kiara passed a smile to her dad

Kiara-"mamma ninni"

Suman-"haan chalo" and kiara stood up from suman lap

Suman-"chalo papa ko gud night bolo"

Kiara-"gud night papa" and kissed on his cheeks and then she made an irritated face

Kiara-"papa aap Ki dadhi(beard) "

Rohan-"oh sorry" and kissed on her cheeks

Rohan-"gud night" and kiara turned to suman

Kiara-"chalo mamma aap bhi papa ko gud night bolo" and suman smiled to her little princess

Suman-"gud night"

Rohan-"gud night" and suman kiara left from there.

In kiara's room, suman made kiara lie on the bed and she also lied down beside her. Suman started caressing kiara's hairs, kiara looked at suman

Kiara-"mamma story"

Suman-"so konsi story sunoge aap"

Kiara-"prince aur princess Ki"

Suman-"ummm... ok" and kiara smiled to her

Suman-"ok now close your eyes" and kiara closed her eyes

Suman-"ek bahut purani baat hai ek prince tha aur uski ek best friend thi par Vo kahin Ki princess nahi thi"

Kiara-"mamma Maine toh aapko prince aur princess Ki kahani nahi thi, par isme toh koi princess nahi hai"

Suman-"isme bhi hai"

Kiara-"kahan"

Suman-"prince Ki Jo best friend hai Vo kissi ke liye toh princess hogi na, jaise aap meri aur papa Ki princess Ho"

Kiara-"ok" and gave a broad smiled and again closed her eyes. And again suman started her story

Suman-" prince bahut accha tha Vo apni best frnd Ki har problem Mein help Karta tha par uski best frnd ne prince ko bahut hurt kiya aur phir prince apni best frnd se angry Ho gya aur apni best frnd ko chod kar chala Gaya"

Kiara-"phir kya Hua...prince wapas nahi aaya??"

Suman-"aaya(and kiara closed her eyes again) tha, prince phir bhi apne frnd se angry tha, phir kuch time baad phir Vo dono phir se best frnds ban jaate hai" and suddenly suman's eye fell on kiara and found that kiara was sleeping and suman covered her with duvet and caressed her cheeks

Suman-"aur Vo ladki princess nahi banti(a lone tears escaped from her eyes)aur kahani adhuri reh jaati hai" and lied down beside her and closed her eyes.

hope u all liked it

do hit like and comment(long one plz)

i do remember that many of you want to me to make ShraMan meet...

but i will try to make them meet in next chap


THANK YOU😊

nxt chapter- pg 15


Edited by angel_writer - 9 years ago

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