SS: perfect Match::: epilogue updated pg 9

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mariajamal

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey guys m back ... u liked my story fulfil the promise... and very thankful tht u liked it...

having a long holiday from office cuz of eid .. thts y m too much active now a days...

just having two days left now... will try to be active after holdiay but can't say anything ... so here is my new SS.. hope u guys like it ...

malhotras and tiwaris are old friends ... same as story ...

both families are very closed with each other... no negative character ... actually I don't like politics in any serial thts y just try to write simple story with twist n turn ...

sumo and sharavan know each other ... but they best dushman ... hehe ... they dont like each other ... but their families want them to get married ... now u'll c how they become friends ... how they get married... and how they will fall In love...

will update part one very soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago

part 1 ...

both families want sumo N sharavan get married...

but both don't like each other ... when ever they come face to face the tom n jerry show get started...

ramnath : sharavann tumhay suman se shadi kerni hogi meine tiwariji ko zaban day di hai ...

sharavan papa us egoistic lardki se kaabie shadi nahin keroon ga ...

ramnath : tum chaho ya na chaho shadi to tumhari ussay he hogi yeh mera akhri faisla hai... or agr tumnay mana keya to mein tum se kabie baat nahin keroon ga ...

ramnath room se chala jata hai...

sharavan : sumo... shadi... oh God ...

at tiwari killa

naanu : suman beta meine jo b soocha tumharay bhalay k leye ... sharavan us k ghr walay sub tumhara khiyal rakkhain gay...

sumo : naanu mujhe malhotra family per bharosa hai per. us lambu per nahin ... kitna attitude hai us mein ... gussa her waat naak mein rehta hai ... or mujhs aisa ghoorta hai jaisay abho kha jaye ga ...

naanu : mein kuch nahin janta rammnath nay bohat pyar tera haath manga hai ... or meine haa. b kerdi hai ... ab chaye tum haas ker shadi kero ya ro ker ... shadi to tumhari sharavan se ho gi ...

naanu chalay jatay hain...

sumo : naanuuu ... kya yr ... mein do min to usko bardasht nahin ker sakti usko life time k leye kaisay keroon gi...

after two days ...

all malhotra family come for ritual... all are happy except sumo and sharavan...

all ritual done both take ashirwad from the elders ...

after few hrs both get time to talk to each other...

both think same thing ... pata nahin kaisay bardssht keron ga/gi is ko...

sumo: deekho yeh mut soochna k mein mari ja rahhi hoon tum se shadi kernay k leye ... mein to bus naanu ki wajaah se yeh shadi ker rahi hoon ...

sharavan : mujhe b koi shook nahin hai tumhay apna saath rakhnay ka meine b papa ki wajah se ...

sumo mumbling : pata nahin kaisay reh sakoon gi is lambu k saath...

sharavan kuch kaha tumnay...

sumo : nahin...

after the bit of silence sharavan said to sumo tht : deekho hum dono sirf apni family k leye shadi ker rahay hain is leye is rishtay se koi ummed mut rakhna...

sumo: meiine tum se kabie ummed. rakkhi b naahin hai... **mumbling** tum se shadi kernay se to acha mein suicide kerloo ...

sharavan heard her... and said to kerlo na acha hai dono ki zindagi assan hojaye gi... jao kood jao yahan se ...

sharan hold her hand and take her to the edge...

sumo get irritated and said mein kun koodo tum kood jao... they start pushing each other... and at mean time sumo loss her balance and woh gir jati hai per her luck is with her wahan ek rod ko pakardlayti hai... she start shouting pmz help mera haath slip ker raha hai...

sharavan hold her hand and pull her ... jab sumo uper ajati haii to in fear he hug her... sumo also reponse him... both didn't realized tht they are hugging each other...

sharavan while hugging : I m so sorry ... tumhay lagi to nahin na ... agr tumhay luch hojata to ... he suddenly stop...he don't understand what he is talking...and they broke the hug ... both having awkward situation...

after long silence... sharavan said... chalain ??

sumo just nod...

both came downstairs...

so guys hope u like it ...

plz do tell shud I cont...

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

Shraman as foes rather friends...interesting 😃
Aww he saved her and his concern for her
Liking the story so far 😃
Plzzz continue, wud love to read 😛

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Anupriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

i liked ur concept... i want u to continue... and u have to do it..

the comment is here... waise kitna bhi lad lein... pr jaise hi sumo giri bechaaara shravu kitna darr gaya... and hugged her and his dialoues... perfect... it is interesting...and yeah i also love simple things and no politics... wanna know how they will become friends... sooo update sooonish... write fast.. 🤗

with loadss of love

anupriya❤️

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Zenab

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Posted: 9 years ago

They have concern for each other that's nice continue soon

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mariajamal

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Posted: 9 years ago

part 2 ...

at night both thinkbg same incident In their respective place...

sharavan : yeh mujhe achanak kya hogaya tha ... agr woh gor jati to... mujhe kun aisa feel howa jaisay mere saans he ruk gaaye us ko girta howa deekh ker...

sumo : us nay aisa kun kaha mei. gir jati to usko to khushi hoti per us ki ankhoon mein meine apnay leye dar kun deekha ... aisa lag raha tha jaissay us ko mere khonay ka dar tha ...

bith came in same frame...

next morning tiwariji bring pandit to malhotrs house for moharat... pandit declare tht after 3 weeks bohat acha time hai in dono ki shadi ka...

sub khush ho jaatay hain ...

tiwariji came to shharavan and said beta apni beti tumhay de raha hoon us ka khiyal rakhna or agr koi galti us se hojaye to maaf kerdayna ...

sharavaan : take the ashirwad from nanu and said ap fikar na karain mein ap se promise kerta hoon k usko humesha khush rakhoon ga ...

sharavan come to his room after c off nano...

he is in thoughts ... kal tak jis lardki se mujhe nafrat thi achanak mujhe us ki kun fikar hoo rahi hai...

nano coome to tiwari villa tht marriage is going to happen after 3 weeks...

preparation started...

all insist sharavaan and sumo for shopping ... dono chalay jatayy hain

at bridal shop... sumo dukan dar se saray cloths nikawa rahi hai per us ko kuch pasand he nahhin aa raha ... sharavan In irritation agr ussi tarha sub reject kerti raho gi to mil gaya dress...

sumo tell sharavan tumhay agr itni problem haii to khud choose kerlo...

shopkeeper said both of them tht just give me one min mein apko ek bohat acha dress deekhata hoon...

he said to sumo madam just try it I m sure u gonna love it...

sumo go to trail room and after 10 mins she came out and sharavann look at her he was mesmerized by her beauty no doubt the dress is so beautiful ... dull gold dress with red dupatta ... and sumo look so beautiful in tht ... aisa lag raha tha k yeh dress buna he is k leye... sharavan didn't take her eyes from her... when she came ti him n said how was it ... sharavan is so engrossed in her tht he didn't heard what she asked...

sumo : mr malhotra aisay ghortay rahho gay ta kuch bolo gay yeh dress kaisa hai... shuld I buy it ???

sharavan just nod.

sumo... janab ki bolti bund hogaye tht mean mein achi lag rahi hoon...

will cont soon...