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Harshi Arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Plz continue

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Gurveen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Really amazing concept
Shravan are enemies but ready to get married for family sake
They have feelings but are suppressed due to their hatred
Want to see how they fall in love
Update soon

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mariajamal

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Posted: 9 years ago

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part 3

sharavan drop sumo st tiwari killa...

after dropping her shravan in thoughts.. mujhe kya hota ja raha hai ... meiin us k samnay kun aisay behave kr raha hoon ... kya sooch rahi hogi woh ...

sharavan control man...

ful preparation is going on ...

and the big day come ... sumo snd sharavan marriage day ...

preeti helping sumo to get ready and rest r waiting for barat ...

sumo look so beautiful ... just like doll... but ... us ki ankhoon mein ek udasi hai jo koi nahin deekh pa raha ... or woh is shadi ki wajah se nahin bulkay apnay parents ki wajah se hai ... appnay shadi walay din lardki sub se zyada apni Ma ko apnay pass rakhti haii ... per at sumo case ... she is missing her Ma very much ... sub apnay kaam mein itna busy hain k kisi nay notice he nahhin keya.. k woh becharay udas hai... sumo in thoughts ma kssh aj ap mere pass hoti m misssing u alot...

here comes the barat sharavan mandap mein bet gaya hai n pandit start his mantar than after few mins he said k lardki ko bulaye .. here comes sumo ... all are looking at her ... sumo nay nazrain jhukaye hoe hain ... all are happy looking at her ... per sharavan kuch or he notice ker raha tha ...

sumo us k braber bet jati hai ... sharavan ask her slowly tht if she is ok ... sumo just nod...

after tht pandit said lardki k parents ko bulaye kanyadan k leye ... sumo look at pandit and become said ... nw sharavan get it k sumo udas kun lag rahi thi ... after few mins of silence nanu come and said sumo ka kanyadan mein keroon ga ... all rituals done well...

now tine to go...

sumo to sub tiwari family alvida keh rahay hain...

sumo apnay nanu ko hug ker k bohat roti hai ...

nanu sharavan se kehtay hain k us ka bohat khiyal rakhna ... and sumo ka haath sharavan k haath mein daytay hain ... dono car mein bet jatay haiin ...

will update next part soon ...

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Gurveen

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Posted: 9 years ago

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They are Married finally 😉

Edited by Gurveen - 9 years ago

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mariajamal

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Posted: 9 years ago

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part 4

at malhotra house ... everyone welcome the couple ... having some masti like ring ko dhondhnay ki rasum... puskher and vandy bhabbi ki rasta roknay ki rasum ... and so on...

finally sumo came to sharavan room... she is still auiet not saying anything ... she is just stading near window and lost in her thoughts..

sharavan come after few hr cuz nobody is letting him in ...

when he came Insiide he found an empty bed... than he found sumo who is standing near window...

sharavam us k pass jata hai... sumo still lost in her thoughts...

sharavan : sumo are you ok ...

no response from her ...

sharavan touch her shoulder .. sumo appnay thoughts se bahir ati hai and said ... haan!!!

sharavan understand tht she is not well... he asked her politely tht u were missing u parents na ???-

sumo just look at him in unbelievable state tht how he knw tht...

sharavan : I can understand ... is waqt lardki sub se zyada apni Ma ko miss kerti hai...

look mein janta ho ... per plz tum pereshan na ho yahan tumhara sub bohat khiyal rakhaiin gay...

deekho mein janta hoon hum dono ek doasray ko pasand nahin kertay just for our family sake humnay shadi ki...

yaad hai meine tumse kaha tha k is rishtay se koi umeed na rakhna ..

per hum dost ki tarha to reh saktay hain na ... to saray baatein bhoola ker ... kya mujhe se doast kero gi ... sharavan apna haath agay bhardhata hai ...

sumo just stare at him ... and apna haath agay bhadhati hai...

sharavan to cheer her up ..he made some plan and ... said to her tht challo ab hum dost hogaye hai ... ummm tum change kerlo ... ok

after sometime sumo come ... sharavan laydown in bed ... sumo look at him ... sharavan ask ger kuch chayye ??

sumo mein kahan soo??

sharavan : umm itna bardha bed hai side per sojao ...

sumo: deekho hum doast bun gaye hai is ka maltab yeh nahin k mein tunhara saath bed share keroon gi... tum utho or wahan sofay mein ja ker so...

sharavan : tum kya andhi hoo ... sofay ka size deekha hai... mein us mein adha b nahhin aoonga... or tum ko mere saath agr bed share kernay mein problem hai to khud sojao wahan sofay mein ... tum to fit b ajao gi...

sumo get irritated... and soofay mein sonay k leye chali jati ... after many trail... she is not comfortable there... she look at sharavan who is sleeping aram se ...

sumo in mumbling khud sakoon se so raha hai ek dafa b bola nahin k ...

sumo sofay se uthti hai or bed k pass ati haii ... or sharavan se side per late jati hai ...

she think sharavaan so raha hai per sharavan jaaga howa tha ... sumo apna face sharavan k oppsite direction mein ker k sojati hai... and sharavan open his eyes and dil meiin kehta hai ... ziddi hai bohat and smile... and sojata haii...

so how was it guys ...