CHITTHI NA KOI SANDESH- A Shraman OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: shinegirl100

omg.. yrr it was really a emotional piece of work.. sara diya aapne toh.. i really thought that she is dead...his brokdown.. everything he was doing.. was... tooo gud yrr reallly too gud... it was more than awezome... i was relieved when i read that sumo is alive she was there... it was just a nightmare thank god... it was more than perfect... i loved it... beautifully penned down... and yeah that song.. it was perfect.. it suited very well for that situation... i love ur works girl... 🤗kamaal... dhamaal.. bemisaal... loved it a lottt

with loadsss of love

anupriya ❤️

Anupriya cutiepie 🤗
Aww dar gayi babu...sowieee
Your comments are ❤️ ...I'm blushing 😳
Thank u thank u sooo much sweetheart ❤️

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

This was so crazy!!

Priyam, you scared the shit out of me! I was constantly like Yeh Nahi Ho Sakta

Its not possible

Come on, something will happen!

And I'm glad it did! I didn't have the time to read it, socha tha res chodkar I'll come back. But then I thought, Zara dekh loon, kya topic hai

And I ended up reading it!

This was like a jumper totally! Keep writing! <3

Beautiful

And loved the Qutb Minar Part! ;)

Mahi 🤗
I love crazy 😉
I am so happy this story managed to keep to on the edge of your seat...mission successful 😃
Arey Sumo cant die...i dont do unhappy stuffs 😃
Thanks a lot dear for reading.
Your comment means a lot to me 😃
Thank u meri jaan 😛

Originally posted by: mineforever

It was so beautiful.. 😊
I was on the verge of crying and Thank God it was only a dream.. 😊
Loved the use of song lyrics.. ❤️

Aww thanks ayesha 🤗
I love that song...its beautiful 😳

Priii 🤗I'll be back again 😆just dropped in to say a big hiii 😆 accha Apni SPree sizzler bangayi hai 😆 maine post banaya hai uske liye.😆 I'm very happy for her 😆

Originally posted by: andy1245

amazing bt thnk god its only a dream

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Beautiful. Thank you for d lovely piece.👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear 😊

Originally posted by: Zenab78

I was scared but finally it was just a dream huh ...this was beautiful but scary last part was amazing
Do write more Priyam di 🤗

Aww scared...dont be bachcha 😛
Yeah it was just a dream
Thanks a lot sweety 😃
Ohhh i will 😛

Originally posted by: ---awe10some---

Fabulous writing. Great os. So heart touching

Fanx 4 pm dr

Thanks sidhi 😃
Welcome 😛

Wow!!! This was so emotional. And the song is so beautiful. But thanks for the happy ending. 🤗

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

I was on the verge of crying but end padke I was like TG! ITS A DREAM. Shravan ka dard mujhse saha nahi jayega. Absolutely loved it❤️

Vaishnavi 🤗
Long time!! Where were u??
Shravan ka dard mujhse bhi nhi saha jayega sweety 😛
Thank u so much 😃